Naria of the Flame *Dead for now (rewrite later): Picture update in last post*

[SkyMyl]

The third chapter was good, and I personally liked it. So...ummm...


Where's Chapter 4?

[Nayrman]

The third chapter was good, and I personally liked it. So...ummm...


Where's Chapter 4?

I'll try to get it up over the weekend. I also have to make my LBP review.
Luckily I have no assignments for hte weekend so I should be able to get it up...

[Nayrman]

HOLY FLURPING SCHNIT AN UPDATE!!!

[SkyMyl]

An update!? HOLY GOD IT'S NOT POSSIBLE!!!

Anyway, awesome chapter. *Blinks* But my eyes kinda hurt now from all that reading....

[Nayrman]

An update!? HOLY GOD IT'S NOT POSSIBLE!!!

Anyway, awesome chapter. *Blinks* But my eyes kinda hurt now from all that reading....

imagine how I felt typing that for four hours ending at about midnight to one in the morning ish (my memory is a little fuzzy towards the end), lol

[jnfs2014]

Jack is obviously an enemy fieron.

[Spam]

Wow I love the story Nayrman the overall plot is awesome and who can't love the sci-fi, but I wish the story was a bit more detailed other then that it's great... KEEP POSTING UPDATES!

[Nayrman]

Wow I love the story Nayrman the overall plot is awesome and who can't love the sci-fi, but I wish the story was a bit more detailed other then that it's great... KEEP POSTING UPDATES!

I'll get something up this week since it's spring break. I've actually got quite a lot to do:
1. Record as much game footage as possible, and fix the darn audio spikes
2. Record all the original Star Wars (non-special editions, ORIGINAL cuts) into digital form. God only knows how long those VHS's will last
3. Write a chapter
4. Catch up on some anime (most notably Soul Eater).

Jack is obviously an enemy fieron.

ha ha ha...nope! *you'll see*

[Nayrman]

**looks at above post**

March 16th? @_@;;

I'll write the next chapter during the weekend/course of the week along with the first chapter of Observe. I obviously have free time now to actually work on this stuff to greater lengths X_X;;

[Red]

And a week later, no one cares.

Next chapter kthnx.

[Nayrman]

And a week later, no one cares.

Next chapter kthnx.

Sick. For two days I felt like absolute crap. Resume writing Observe tomorrow now that I'm feeling moderately better. Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry gomenasai sorry sorry sorry.

[WhiteReverse]

Read all of it in one sitting. I noticed quite a few typos, but nothing that makes the story any less amazing.

Good luck on future chapters.

[Spam]

Nayrman, you really should update this story sometime it's a great writing with lots of possible things that could happen.

[Nayrman]

Nayrman, you really should update this story sometime it's a great writing with lots of possible things that could happen.

thanks.

In fact I'll get the story up to remind myself to actually do some poop when I get the chance.

[Nayrman]

No chapter but two pictures I made. I HAVE started working on the next chapter though.
It's much easier to spend ten-fifteen minutes just messing with a picture and things I drew (sort of. Computer did most of the drawing) than it is to write for ten minutes, go to class / somewhere else and lose all mojo.

So I put two new pics up front. Go check 'em out. I hope to get something written soon...before classes get beyond hell.