There's a Road Ahead...Revitalized! YOU KILLED THIS GAME WITH YOUR APATHY

Started by SkyMyl, June 22, 2009, 12:52:22 PM

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SkyMyl

"Uhhh...what...what happened?"

Well, waking up now? As the blackness of unconsciousness dissipates, you realize that you're lying face down in the middle of a barren desert. You stand up and start to observe your surroundings, only to find an endless expanse of desert sitting before you, a backpack by your side, and a city bus, on its side, not far just a couple feet besides you. Upon closer inspection, the bus has small holes on the ceiling, dents in the steel, scratches on the green paint, and shattered windows. You can't climb up the bus, and the doors are on the other side of the bus, so it's pointless trying to climb in.

You pick up the dark blue backpack and open it. Inside is a cell phone, a hair brush, a bottle of water and a bottle of soda, a map, and an iPod Music player. On the back of the backpack is a name written in a sharpie pen. "Elena". It's then you realize the backpack is yours, as your name is Elena.

In a panic, you start to wonder why you're in a desert, and why a destroyed bus is near you. You remember that you were on a bus ride driving to your cousin's house for the week, but you don't recall the bus crashing in a desert.

Your phone has a full battery, but no service, your water bottle is half empty, your iPod Music Player has 2/3rds of a battery left, and you're stranded in nowhere.

Well, it's not the way you were expecting to die.

It's then you look down and realize you're standing on a path. Not a road, but a straight, dark brown path. Behind you is nothing, but ahead of you there seems to be a brown...thing. You don't know what it is, but you can't stay on one location forever with the heat beating down on your head.


Which way do you want to go?
~Go forward and find out what the brown spec is~
~Turn around and see if there's anything that way~
~Observe your current location more~

(The colors don't mean anything as of yet.)

*The "RE" in "REvitalized!" is not a typo. So don't bother mentioning it. Or actually, just forget the "RE" for now. X_X;;
**You can find the original here.

jnfs2014


SkyMyl

Yay, someone posted! ^_^

Now choose an actual option.

jnfs2014


Kierou


Dog Food

I get obsessively manic over things. It's a problem.

SkyMyl

#6
Your current location doesn't seem to hold anything else in store for you, aside from eventual death. Behind you doesn't seem to lead anywhere, but that brown spec might be your only hope. You decide to walk towards it. But as you start walking, it seems as though the spec is starting to move further away from you.

You continue walking, but the spec is still just that. A spec. Well, it can't be anything stationary. You decide to look behind you, and find that the wreckage of the bus has vanished. Maybe the heat is playing tricks on you. How long have you been walking for? You can't even remember. But you're getting extremely thirsty. Time to finish that water bottle.

After what feels to be an hour, you find out what the spec is. The spec was actually a large brown house with two floors. Something about this house seems...off. The windows of the house are shattered, the front steps are broken, and there are blood stains on the front "yard". What happened here?

Even more off, why would there be a house in nowhere? There's no reason for it to be here at all, but it's here. You have to see if there's someone currently living in it, so you walk up the steps wearily, and knock on the door.

No response.

You knock again. No response. You start pounding on the door. No response. You start yelling, asking if there's anyone inside. The only thing you hear are the echoes of your own voice. Now you know that there's no one inside. But still, there could be something inside to help you out. Suddenly, a scream.

"If there's someone there, please, HELP ME!!!"

The voice of a girl cries out for help from inside the house, which catches your attention. If this girl is in trouble, you should help her. But at the moment, you don't have anything that could help you out at the moment. You don't know what to do. There is one thing that you do know for sure.

This is not how you expected your next week to be spent.



~Go inside the house and rescue this girl~
~Search outside the house for anything~
~Throw your empty water bottle inside the house and see if anything happens~

jnfs2014

#7
Why no new adventure? :(

Dog Food

For security measures, throw your empty water bottle into the house first.

And if nothing happens, then go inside and rescue the girl.
I get obsessively manic over things. It's a problem.

Kierou


SkyMyl

No, I refuse to let this die. I swore I would finish this, so let's continue.

Quote from: JNFS2014 on June 25, 2009, 01:03:24 PM
Why no new adventure? :(
It seems like the old one, but just wait a little longer.



Sidling next to the door frame, you pull out your now empty water bottle and, still facing against the wall, throw it inside.

Donk...donk...donk...donk...

Hmm...nothing. No footsteps, no whispers, you can't hear a soul but that girl inside this house. It should be safe to step inside, then. You turn to face the door and walk inside the house.

The inside is filthy. Everything has a layer of dust on it, there are mice scurrying around the far corners in the room, cobwebs fill the void between furniture and wall, there are paintings with claw marks on them, and everything is old fashioned...very old fashioned. Looking to your right, you find a small kitchen, to the left you can see a small hallway, and ahead of you there's...supposed to be a staircase that leads to the second floor. This staircase, however, is destroyed. Where the staircase used to be is now a large hole, stretching further and further into the darkness it surely leads to.

So, this house is ruined, there's a single girl screaming, and you still have no idea what the hell is going on.


~Go to the left, into the hallway~
~Inspect the hole~
~Go to the kitchen~

Kierou


Dog Food

I get obsessively manic over things. It's a problem.

darkmario


Triforce_Luigi