It was a really good idea to add Sonic in Brawl? Annoying Zelda.........or Sheik

[Triforce_Luigi]

Yummy Nerds! Bad Sonic! Go Lucas! Good chapter!

[DededeCloneChris]

Yummy Nerds! Bad Sonic! Go Lucas! Good chapter!

Next chapter for tomorrow is annoying Peach!

[Triforce_Luigi]

Yummy Nerds! Bad Sonic! Go Lucas! Good chapter!

Next chapter for tomorrow is annoying Peach!

Somehow, I can just imagine this involving the shower and the dress...

[DededeCloneChris]

Yummy Nerds! Bad Sonic! Go Lucas! Good chapter!

Next chapter for tomorrow is annoying Peach!

Somehow, I can just imagine this involving the shower and the dress...

How did you know? :P

[Triforce_Luigi]

Yummy Nerds! Bad Sonic! Go Lucas! Good chapter!

Next chapter for tomorrow is annoying Peach!

Somehow, I can just imagine this involving the shower and the dress...

How did you know? :P

Showers seem to be a running gag in the fanfic. The dress... It's kinda obvious...

[DededeCloneChris]

Chapter 13: Annoying Peach

Is the first day of the new year! Before that day, the Smash Mansion was a total mess, leftovers of food all around, oh yeah, what happened to Ness you say? Well.....8 days ago.....

"Master Hand, is was really a good idea to let that hedgehog living here.....WITH US?!" Said Ness with joy.

"Ness, Ness Ness Ness Snes...." Said Master Hand.

"Do you know my name is Ness and not a name of a console right? Said Ness with this expression -_-

"I know that, Lucas" Said Master Hand as he knows everything.

"Master Hand, I'M NESS!" Said Luc-I mean, Ness with entusiasm.

"Yeah yeah, I know that! And yes, it was really a good idea to add him with us" Said Master Hand, but he didn't finished yet "And no, I don't ever remove my glove, and no, I never clean this thing"

Ness left Master Hand's office with a horrible picture in his mind.

So you're thinking what this has to do with Peach? Nothing at all!

Peach was now cleaning the mess, because it was her turn, the others already have done their turn to clean the mansion. She was singing, birds all around her began to dance in mid-air, happily.

Yeah, that was the paradise for her, she was very happy as always, and now, the last garbage on the floor was in front of her, she ducked to grab the last trash and throw it to the Trash can, but as soon she blinked quickly, the entire hall was now already with so much garbage everywhere! The floor, the walls, the roof, everything.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!" She said with so much happyness. The birds already gone, or dead, because when the birds saw the mess, they died, yeah, simple.

Just then, Master Hand came floating in the hall, saw the mess, and said this.

"PEEEAAAACCCCHHHHH!!!"

"Y-y-yes?" She said, too happy to even say another word.

"FOR NOT CLEANING THIS MESS, YOU WILL NOT RECEIVE MORE PINK GIFTS FOR A MONTH!"

"Noooooooo!" She said, fainting, falling above the dead birds.

Then Master Hand floated away, just then, a banana peel was in Peach's face, she opened her eyes, and saw the peel, where did that come from?

She saw a blue figure throwing garbage all around her, that figure was Sonic!

"HOW COULD YOU!!!" She said, but the hedgehog have disapeared just then.

"(Must punish Sonic)" Peach thought while she was going for the mop......again.

[Triforce_Luigi]

Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.

[DededeCloneChris]

Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.

No................maybe ::) Thanks for the idea.

[Triforce_Luigi]

Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.

No................maybe ::) Thanks for the idea.

Where's mah payment?

[DededeCloneChris]

Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.

No................maybe ::) Thanks for the idea.

Where's mah payment?

Hmm........here.............MAH BOI.

[Triforce_Luigi]

Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.

No................maybe ::) Thanks for the idea.

Where's mah payment?

Hmm........here.............MAH BOI.

Good enough for me! MAH BOI!

[DededeCloneChris]

Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.

No................maybe ::) Thanks for the idea.

Where's mah payment?

Hmm........here.............MAH BOI.

Good enough for me! MAH BOI!

"This Wii! is for all warriors strife for!

[Triforce_Luigi]

Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.

No................maybe ::) Thanks for the idea.

Where's mah payment?

Hmm........here.............MAH BOI.

Good enough for me! MAH BOI!

"This Wii! is for all warriors strife for!

[/faceplant] at sheer randomness.

[GrimTuesday]

I'm sorry but the whole "Master Hand said Happily, "I AM GOING TO EAT YOUR FACE" thing isn't really funny, and yeah the grammer isn't so good, is english a second language to you? But the actual fan fic is great, I liked Bothering Kirby the best  :P

[fredrickthethird]

Your smash mansion is slowly turning into the smash mansion that will be up in my fan fic next chapter. There is much chaos and war in my mansion, I guess you can check it out soon I'm gonna go start writing it.