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Bowser's Life story (part 1)

Started by taken to da limit, April 23, 2008, 12:42:46 PM

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taken to da limit

As a child, bowser had to live on his own.His parents died at the age of 3.He was devastated by the event.
When he made a brick house it was very small.What he did not know was that his dad was the koopa king.
  Yes, he was the prince.The mailman came and gave him a card that said what he was.He tried to convinced the koopas but they did nott belive him until he enslaved the goombas.
End Of Part 1 :)

darkmario

Id give it a 5/10:
Good story,too short.




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Java

Fan fics go in the Written board.

/minimod

Magnum

Quote from: Java_Java on April 23, 2008, 05:37:14 PM
Fan fics go in the Written board.

/minimod

NO BACKSEAT MODDING!
Mack should move this, ANY second now.

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Java

Quote from: MagnumSonic on April 23, 2008, 08:20:01 PM
Quote from: Java_Java on April 23, 2008, 05:37:14 PM
Fan fics go in the Written board.

/minimod

NO BACKSEAT MODDING!
Mack should move this, ANY second now.
Mack isn't LK of this board.

Matt

Story is interesting, but the sentence structure is as if a 8 year old made this.

taken to da limit

Quote from: Java_Java on April 23, 2008, 05:37:14 PM
Fan fics go in the Written board.

/minimod
Thanks for telling me a little too late ;)