Lucas adventures of crazyness! Is Bowyer! Or is Bowser?

[DededeCloneChris]

Man... I really would like to read this, but you wrote it in script and I just can't do it...

What?

I hate script. You don't put characters words in quotes and you don't describe the action. I don't blame you though, English is your second language.

.............I described the action, didn't I?

No. You put it in asterisks.  You put

'*Lucas walked in room*
Lucas: Hi Sonic!'
*Sonic jumps from hearing Lucas' voice*
Sonic: Don't scare me!

instead of

'Lucas turned the handle of the brown door, opening it slowly. He peered around while slowly stepping in. He noticed a friendly face on the other side of the dank, small area.

"Hi Sonic!" Lucas yelled after he realized everything was safe. Sonic jumped 2 feet in the air from the scare of Lucas' startling voice.

"Don't scare me!" Sonic screamed back, holding his chest and panting.'

Something like that. Of course, other people are enjoying it, so don't let me get you down.

Well, I use my option because I will add many characters and if I choose that option, IT WILL TAKE ME 6 HOURS TO COMPLETE! I DON'T WANT TO WRITE LIKE THAT!

[Triforce_Luigi]

Good chapters... Though somewhat odd.

[DededeCloneChris]

Good chapters... Though somewhat odd.

Dude, is called "Crazyness" which means, odd. ;)

[Triforce_Luigi]

Good chapters... Though somewhat odd.

Dude, is called "Crazyness" which means, odd. ;)

Not necessarily... The word "craziness" has several meanings... You might want tolook it up...

[DededeCloneChris]

Good chapters... Though somewhat odd.

Dude, is called "Crazyness" which means, odd. ;)

Not necessarily... The word "craziness" has several meanings... You might want tolook it up...

Ok then:
First: I need to change my avatar.
Second: I need to post here for a while and
Third: Continue with the next chapter.

Side note: You do liked yesterday's chapter?

[Triforce_Luigi]

1. Yes, to Charmy.
2.Yes.
3.Please do.

Side Note: Yes.

[DededeCloneChris]

Chapter 21: Caduceus is back...........

Tanaka: MASTER CHRIS!!!!!!

Raine: I'm doing the best to heal him, but the others need to be healed before 20 minutes or they die!

Ella: OH MY GOODNESS! WHAT HAPPENED HERE?...............CHRIS!!!!!!!!

Sakura: Oh god! How can we save them in time?!

Zelos: Eh, at least we have 4 survivors. *Points to Cream and Cheese who were hiding behind the sofa*

Amy: CREAM!!!!

Cream: AMY!!!!! *Hugs Amy and starts crying*

Amy: There, there, everything will be fine. (I hope)

Shikamaru: *Who was sleeping behind a door* Ugh.......what did I miss?...............Oh god................

Sheena: THIS ISN'T GOOD! WE HAVE TO TAKE THEM TO AND HOSPITAL A QUICKLY!

Sakura: I KNOW!!!! *Takes out a cellphone (Does she know how to use one?) and calls someone* Hello? WE ARE IN A EMERGENCY HERE, MANY PERSONS HAVE SEVERLY INJURIES AND NEEDS TO BE HEALED! PLEASE COME HERE QUICKLY!! *Beep*

Tanaka: Who did you call, lady Sakura?

Sakura: Some friends I know.

*Suddenly, the main door opens and many people walks in*

Sakura: HERE!!!

?: OK, EVERYONE, GRAB ALL THE PATIENTS AND GO QUICKLY TO THE HOSPITAL!

?: YES SIR!!!!

*Scene changes to a hospital*

?: VITALS DROPPING!

?: PLEASE, DON'T DIE ON ME!!!!

*Suddenly, time slow down*

?: CLEAR! NEXT ONE QUICKLY!!!

?: GOT IT! TAKE THE SUBJECT VECTOR HERE NOW!

?: DEREK! WE ARE RUNNING OUT OF TIME!

Derek: I KNOW! WE CAN SAVE THEM!

Angie: FIRST, OPEN HIM UP AND PROCEED!

Derek: GOT IT!

Tyler: BRING HERE MORE ANTIBIOTIC GEL!

Leslie: COMING!

Tyler: THANKS!

Robert: NEXT ONE!

Stephen: Amazing, your healing touch ability is incredible!

Robert: And I thought I'll never do another operation in my life again..........

Victor: CONCENTRATE DIRECTOR, WE CAN'T LET DOWN THE PAST DIRECTOR OF THIS HOSPITAL!

Robert: You're right Victor, BRING CHRISTOPHER THORDYKE HERE NOW!

Angie: AFIRMATIVE!

Tyler: THERE! CHARMY IS ALRIGHT NOW! BRING LUCAS HERE IMMIDIATELY!

Leslie: ROGER!

Derek: VECTOR IS FINE NOW! BRING NOW GENIS HERE!

Victor: Got it!

Stephen: This will be indeed a long day.

*3 hours later*

Lucas: Ugh..........

Angie: Derek! He is awakening!

Lucas: Where am I?..............

Sakura: In the hospital, Derek and the others save you and the others too.

Lucas: *Sigh of relief* That's good to hear..........

Christopher: *Dreaming* Sonic...............why did you.............attack me?............

Sonic: Because.................*All around turns black suddenly*.......I WANT TO DESTROY EVERYBODY!!!!!!

Christopher: WAHHHH!!!!! *Pants*

Tanaka: MASTER CHRIS, YOU ARE OK!

Christopher: Huh? What happen?

Sakura: *Giggles* I call my friends we know from our journey when.....

Lucas: Why I think there is a-

Flashback

Sakura: How did you get here so soon?

Victor: We were in the hospital here for a meeting, when you call us we then get out of there because the meeting was a discussion about a "certain game who will be realesed in February 10 of the next year".

Shikamaru: And how did the meeting staff react?

Victor: Well, we were the only ones there, the others never arrive.

Sakura:...............Oh.

End of flashback

Christopher: *Sighs* Wow, I almost die if weren't for you.

Robert: Our job is to help the humanity to stay heal and fine.

Christopher: (I really admire the surgeons here) And-

*Something breaks in the other room*

Angie: I'll check what is going on, please wait. *Leaves room*

*The voices still can be heard from the door*

Vector: CHARMY! THAT'S MY GELATIN! EAT YOURS!

Charmy: SORRY, MINE ISN'T BLUE RASPBERRY GELATIN AND YOURS IS IT!

Vector: BUT THAT'S MY FAVORITE TOO!

Charmy: SO, WHAT'S YOUR POINT?

Vector: AGH!!!!! *Starts chasing Charmy around the room*

Espio: CAN SOMEBODY PLEASE CHANGE ME TO ANOTHER ROOM?!

Angie: WHAT IS GOING ON HERE?!

Espio: THOSE 2 DON'T STOP DOING THEIR USUAL RUTINES AND THEY ARE ANNOYING ME!

Angie: PLEASE YOU 2, *High voice* STTTTTTTOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPP NOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Everything in the room made out of glass breaks and Derek's lens breaks a little*

Charmy:....................

Vector:......................

Angie: Good, I'll change your companion to another room.

Espio: Thank god.

*Angie changes Espio to the next door who has Genis, Knuckles and Lloyd with Marine and Sheena cleaning the window*

Angie: Excuse me, can anyone of you please change of room with him?

Knuckles: I'll do it.

Angie: Good, please sit in this wheelchair.

Knuckles: Ok.

*Angie and Knuckles leave the room and Espio goes to the bed and*

Espio: *Looks to Sheena* (Oh god, is she again! Is my oportunity!) Hello, can you please get me soup please.

Sheena: Oh, I'll-

Marine: Do it! Be right back mate! *Leaves the room*

Espio: (WHY SHE!!!???)

*In Vector's room*

Angie: Here is your new companion, please don't do anything bad and keep it low! And here is your meal.

Knuckles: Thank you. *Watch Angie leaving the room and then, looks to his plate to see his blue raspberry gelatin gone* HEY! WHAT'S THE BIG DEAL, WHERE IS MY GELATIN?!

Charmy: *Munching* I don't know! It was here a moment ago!

Knuckles: *Looks to Charmy's mouth with blue raspberry gelatin leftovers*...............*And glares*

Charmy: What?

Knuckles: GIVE ME BACK MY GELATIN!

*The fight yet starts again, but Angie is ignoring them to "solve themselves of their problem*

Derek:.............Looks like it was a bad idea to solve their problems with Angie.

Lucas: No, REALLY?

Christopher: So, what are we goin-

Chris: END OF THE EPISODE!

Everyone: CRAP!

Chris: What will happen next now? Will Knuckles retrieve his gelatin back? Will Espio gain the love of Sheena? Wil Marine bring the soup in time before I go to play Super Paper Mario? Will Derek repair his lens or get new ones? Will Christopher do something to help the team? Find out in next chapter The search of the emeralds starts!!

Vector: FIND THE COMPUTER ROOM!

Chris: In my room?

Vector: *Closes his eyes* Exactly.

Chris:...............Dude, you need seriously to get new lines or you will get old...............LIKE MIGHTY!

Vector: OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!

Chris: I KNOW!!!!!!!!!!

Vector: YA HEAR!!!!!!!!!!

Chris: Those lines are from Brandon, you idiot!

Vector: So, I need to appear in another game then!

Chris: Well, you have only one chance and is Sonic Riders: Zero Gravity.

Vector: GOTCHA!

Chris: Hope to see you and your team there! ;)

[fredrickthethird]

another chapter well done

[DededeCloneChris]

another chapter well done

Wait, did you see already the others chapters?

[fredrickthethird]

another chapter well done

Wait, did you see already the others chapters?

yeah if you're saying what i think you are saying

[DededeCloneChris]

another chapter well done

Wait, did you see already the others chapters?

yeah if you're saying what i think you are saying

So, you were reading the chapters when you were a guest?

[fredrickthethird]

another chapter well done

Wait, did you see already the others chapters?

yeah if you're saying what i think you are saying

So, you were reading the chapters when you were a guest?

no i just started reading today  and i read all the chapters i didn't read them as a guest

[DededeCloneChris]

another chapter well done

Wait, did you see already the others chapters?

yeah if you're saying what i think you are saying

So, you were reading the chapters when you were a guest?

no i just started reading today  and i read all the chapters i didn't read them as a guest

Oh, you were reading them all of this time in this day, right?

[fredrickthethird]

another chapter well done

Wait, did you see already the others chapters?

yeah if you're saying what i think you are saying

So, you were reading the chapters when you were a guest?

no i just started reading today  and i read all the chapters i didn't read them as a guest

Oh, you were reading them all of this time in this day, right?

yes

[DededeCloneChris]

another chapter well done

Wait, did you see already the others chapters?

yeah if you're saying what i think you are saying

So, you were reading the chapters when you were a guest?

no i just started reading today  and i read all the chapters i didn't read them as a guest

Oh, you were reading them all of this time in this day, right?

yes

Sweet! Next chapter is tomorrow!