Chapter 1: Annoying Mario
Okay, it was a very calm day in the Smash Mansion (When I say calm day, I mean chaotic) like every day living in there, oh yeah, it was hell..........or not? Who cares, the important thing was:
"Everybody get your butts in the main room NOW!" Say Master Hand with great joy.
Everyone got there in less than 5 minutes, and with passion Crazy hand said:
"NOW WE HAVE ANOTHER MOUTH TO FEED, SAY HELLO TO MEGAMAN!"
With that, everyone cheered for the news, but:
"Crazy, that is Sonic, you need to see their differentiations" Said Master Hand with flowers in his huge fingers.
Then the blue hedgehog entered the room and greeted everyone with "Sonic my name, speed my game!"
Everyone responded with great happiness with this face -_-....................
"Master Hand, why did you select that guy?" Said Mario with curiosity.
"Well, Crazy was the one who selected him" Said Master Hand "And you will show the mansion for him!" Again he said with great love.
"WHAT?! DON'T LEAVE ME WITH HIM!" Said Mario with relief, but everyone have cleared the room, except for the hiperactive hedgehog and him.
"So, can you please show me this place?" Said Sonic, with puppy eyes. (Is hard, but try to imagine him like that)
"Ugh, ok" Said Mario, with a smile that can be fake.
Then, Mario was showing Sonic some parts of the Mansion, but Sonic was kind of sleep with all the explanation Mario was talking to him, then he got a brilliant idea, an idea nobody would even dare to do, steal Mario's Hat and run.
"And this is the pool are- wait, WHERE THE HECK IS MY HAT!" Said Mario with so much joy.
From 150 meters away from Mario " Hey Mario! Catch me and you can have your red hat back!" Said Sonic, with hat in hand.
"GET BACK HERE, YOU FREAK!" Said Mario with happiness.
But Sonic stopped from running and was holding Mario's hat in a room's entrance. "Here! You can have it back!"
"HAAAA!!!!!" Mario jumped towards his hat, but Sonic moved the hat behind his back, and Mario was still "flying" in mid-air, crashing inside the room, what was inside the room you ask? The Peanut butter storage.
"AHHHHHH!!!!!" Said Mario with fun inside every little RED opening. You know what I mean.
"Here, you can have it back" Sonic throw the hat back to Mario's head.
"WHAT THE **** IS HAPPENING HERE!?!? Said Master Hand, with great joy.
"WAHHH!!!! I got Mario eating all the peanut butter jars and when he saw me, he wanted to frame me!" Said Sonic with tears in his eyes, who were fake, but Master didn't discover it.
"WHAT?!" Said Mario with an smile.
"Mario, YOU WILL NOT EAT DINNER TONIGHT AND YOU WILL NEED ALSO TO PAY ALL THE PEANUT BUTTER JARS WITH YOUR MONEY!" Said Master Hand, then he proceeded to grab Mario away from Sonic.
"Have fun Mario!" Said Sonic with great happiness.
"(Must kill Sonic someday)" Mario make a mental note in his mind when he was still dragged by Master Hand's huge fingers.
What... just what.
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What... just what.
Comment please.
Randomness ftw
Next chapter will be Annoying Link!
Don't let Ryan see it ::)
What he is gonna do? Torture Sonic to death?
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 12:19:18 PM
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Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 11:45:05 AM
Quote from: Ridley on December 19, 2007, 11:43:56 AM
What... just what.
Comment please.
Randomness ftw
Next chapter will be Annoying Link!
Don't let Ryan see it ::)
What he is gonna do? Torture Sonic to death?
Yes
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Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 12:19:18 PM
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Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 11:57:46 AM
Quote from: Ridley on December 19, 2007, 11:47:06 AM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 11:45:05 AM
Quote from: Ridley on December 19, 2007, 11:43:56 AM
What... just what.
Comment please.
Randomness ftw
Next chapter will be Annoying Link!
Don't let Ryan see it ::)
What he is gonna do? Torture Sonic to death?
Yes
Uuuuu, I can't wait. :D
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Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 12:19:18 PM
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Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 11:57:46 AM
Quote from: Ridley on December 19, 2007, 11:47:06 AM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 11:45:05 AM
Quote from: Ridley on December 19, 2007, 11:43:56 AM
What... just what.
Comment please.
Randomness ftw
Next chapter will be Annoying Link!
Don't let Ryan see it ::)
What he is gonna do? Torture Sonic to death?
Yes
Uuuuu, I can't wait. :D
Then get writing
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Quote from: Ridley on December 19, 2007, 12:25:37 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 12:19:18 PM
Quote from: Ridley on December 19, 2007, 12:17:44 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 11:57:46 AM
Quote from: Ridley on December 19, 2007, 11:47:06 AM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 11:45:05 AM
Quote from: Ridley on December 19, 2007, 11:43:56 AM
What... just what.
Comment please.
Randomness ftw
Next chapter will be Annoying Link!
Don't let Ryan see it ::)
What he is gonna do? Torture Sonic to death?
Yes
Uuuuu, I can't wait. :D
Then get writing
Ok. ;)
Chapter 2: Annoying Link
It was yet another same peaceful (chaotic) day in the Smash Mansion, our part starts with Link keeping his bombs.
"Ok, now I need to go to the bathroom, but how I'm suppose to keep those bombs safe from fire?" He asked mentally.
"Hey pointy ear man!" Greeted Sonic, entering Link's room
"Please don't call me like that" Said Link with a smile. "Hey dude, can you do me a favor?"
"What is it, Mr Pointy ear dude? Said Sonic.
A little "street" popped out of Link's forehead. "Well, I need somebody to take care of my bombs to keep away from touching fire while I'm in the bathroom, can you please stay in my room for 2 minutes?" Asked the pointy- I mean, Link.
"Sure! Go to the bathroom!" Said Sonic with happiness.
Then our hero of twilight was walking towards the bathroom, and Sonic was in his room, but he was bored and he light a little lighter from his pocket and then he putted the little flame in a stick he found in Link's room, he was looking to the little fire from the stick, then he heard footsteps coming his way and Sonic throwed the stick (yet with fire) by "accident" to the pile of bombs.
"I'm back, you can go now, thanks for helping me!" Greeted the pointy- eh, Link.
"Sure buddy!" And then Sonic leaved the room.
Then Link began to smell something funny.
"Odd, that smells like a little fire coming from my.................bombs" He shrugged.
1 second later, a big explosion was heard all around the mansion and 1/8 of the building was gone, and Link was all black.
"WHAT THE **** HAPPENED HERE?!" Said Master Hand, with great passion.
Then Sonic appeared from nowhere "I saw Link playing with fire near his bombs Master!" Said Sonic, pointing to Link.
"WHAT?!" Said the pointy ear gu- Link.
"Link, YOU WILL CLEAN UP THIS MESS AND ALSO YOU WILL PAY THE DAMAGES WITH YOUR RUPEES!" Said Master Hand, with a big smile, then he grabbed Link with his huge fingers.
"Good luck repairing the damages!" Said Sonic with happiness.
"(Must kill Sonic)" Link thought, making a mental note while he was dragged away by Master Hand.
Next chapter is Annoying Pikachu!
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Chapter 2: Annoying Link
It was yet another same peaceful (chaotic) day in the Smash Mansion, our part starts with Link keeping his bombs.
"Ok, now I need to go to the bathroom, but how I'm suppose to keep those bombs safe from fire?" He asked mentally.
"Hey pointy ear man!" Greeted Sonic, entering Link's room
"Please don't call me like that" Said Link with a smile. "Hey dude, can you do me a favor?"
"What is it, Mr Pointy ear dude? Said Sonic.
A little "street" popped out of Link's forehead. "Well, I need somebody to take care of my bombs to keep away from touching fire while I'm in the bathroom, can you please stay in my room for 2 minutes?" Asked the pointy- I mean, Link.
"Sure! Go to the bathroom!" Said Sonic with happiness.
Then our hero of twilight was walking towards the bathroom, and Sonic was in his room, but he was bored and he light a little lighter from his pocket and then he putted the little flame in a stick he found in Link's room, he was looking to the little fire from the stick, then he heard footsteps coming his way and Sonic throwed the stick (yet with fire) by "accident" to the pile of bombs.
"I'm back, you can go now, thanks for helping me!" Greeted the pointy- eh, Link.
"Sure buddy!" And then Sonic leaved the room.
Then Link began to smell something funny.
"Odd, that smells like a little fire coming from my.................bombs" He shrugged.
1 second later, a big explosion was heard all around the mansion and 1/8 of the building was gone, and Link was all black.
"WHAT THE **** HAPPENED HERE?!" Said Master Hand, with great passion.
Then Sonic appeared from nowhere "I saw Link playing with fire near his bombs Master!" Said Sonic, pointing to Link.
"WHAT?!" Said the pointy ear gu- Link.
"Link, YOU WILL CLEAN UP THIS MESS AND ALSO YOU WILL PAY THE DAMAGES WITH YOUR RUPEES!" Said Master Hand, with a big smile, then he grabbed Link with his huge fingers.
"Good luck repairing the damages!" Said Sonic with happiness.
"(Must kill Sonic)" Link thought, making a mental note while he was dragged away by Master Hand.
Next chapter is Annoying Pikachu!
They are going to murder him lol
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Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 01:08:21 PM
Chapter 2: Annoying Link
It was yet another same peaceful (chaotic) day in the Smash Mansion, our part starts with Link keeping his bombs.
"Ok, now I need to go to the bathroom, but how I'm suppose to keep those bombs safe from fire?" He asked mentally.
"Hey pointy ear man!" Greeted Sonic, entering Link's room
"Please don't call me like that" Said Link with a smile. "Hey dude, can you do me a favor?"
"What is it, Mr Pointy ear dude? Said Sonic.
A little "street" popped out of Link's forehead. "Well, I need somebody to take care of my bombs to keep away from touching fire while I'm in the bathroom, can you please stay in my room for 2 minutes?" Asked the pointy- I mean, Link.
"Sure! Go to the bathroom!" Said Sonic with happiness.
Then our hero of twilight was walking towards the bathroom, and Sonic was in his room, but he was bored and he light a little lighter from his pocket and then he putted the little flame in a stick he found in Link's room, he was looking to the little fire from the stick, then he heard footsteps coming his way and Sonic throwed the stick (yet with fire) by "accident" to the pile of bombs.
"I'm back, you can go now, thanks for helping me!" Greeted the pointy- eh, Link.
"Sure buddy!" And then Sonic leaved the room.
Then Link began to smell something funny.
"Odd, that smells like a little fire coming from my.................bombs" He shrugged.
1 second later, a big explosion was heard all around the mansion and 1/8 of the building was gone, and Link was all black.
"WHAT THE **** HAPPENED HERE?!" Said Master Hand, with great passion.
Then Sonic appeared from nowhere "I saw Link playing with fire near his bombs Master!" Said Sonic, pointing to Link.
"WHAT?!" Said the pointy ear gu- Link.
"Link, YOU WILL CLEAN UP THIS MESS AND ALSO YOU WILL PAY THE DAMAGES WITH YOUR RUPEES!" Said Master Hand, with a big smile, then he grabbed Link with his huge fingers.
"Good luck repairing the damages!" Said Sonic with happiness.
"(Must kill Sonic)" Link thought, making a mental note while he was dragged away by Master Hand.
Next chapter is Annoying Pikachu!
They are going to murder him lol
Oh yeah, this will be one of my many master pieces! Now, let's wait for Ryan and how he will react to this. ;D
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Quote from: wiiboychris on December 19, 2007, 01:08:21 PM
Chapter 2: Annoying Link
It was yet another same peaceful (chaotic) day in the Smash Mansion, our part starts with Link keeping his bombs.
"Ok, now I need to go to the bathroom, but how I'm suppose to keep those bombs safe from fire?" He asked mentally.
"Hey pointy ear man!" Greeted Sonic, entering Link's room
"Please don't call me like that" Said Link with a smile. "Hey dude, can you do me a favor?"
"What is it, Mr Pointy ear dude? Said Sonic.
A little "street" popped out of Link's forehead. "Well, I need somebody to take care of my bombs to keep away from touching fire while I'm in the bathroom, can you please stay in my room for 2 minutes?" Asked the pointy- I mean, Link.
"Sure! Go to the bathroom!" Said Sonic with happiness.
Then our hero of twilight was walking towards the bathroom, and Sonic was in his room, but he was bored and he light a little lighter from his pocket and then he putted the little flame in a stick he found in Link's room, he was looking to the little fire from the stick, then he heard footsteps coming his way and Sonic throwed the stick (yet with fire) by "accident" to the pile of bombs.
"I'm back, you can go now, thanks for helping me!" Greeted the pointy- eh, Link.
"Sure buddy!" And then Sonic leaved the room.
Then Link began to smell something funny.
"Odd, that smells like a little fire coming from my.................bombs" He shrugged.
1 second later, a big explosion was heard all around the mansion and 1/8 of the building was gone, and Link was all black.
"WHAT THE **** HAPPENED HERE?!" Said Master Hand, with great passion.
Then Sonic appeared from nowhere "I saw Link playing with fire near his bombs Master!" Said Sonic, pointing to Link.
"WHAT?!" Said the pointy ear gu- Link.
"Link, YOU WILL CLEAN UP THIS MESS AND ALSO YOU WILL PAY THE DAMAGES WITH YOUR RUPEES!" Said Master Hand, with a big smile, then he grabbed Link with his huge fingers.
"Good luck repairing the damages!" Said Sonic with happiness.
"(Must kill Sonic)" Link thought, making a mental note while he was dragged away by Master Hand.
Next chapter is Annoying Pikachu!
They are going to murder him lol
Oh yeah, this will be one of my many master pieces! Now, let's wait for Ryan and how he will react to this. ;D
lol
Ryan?
Is he on?
Chapter 3: Annoying Pikachu
It was yet another peaceful (you already know) day in the Smash Mansion, we see Pikachu running around the Mansion's yard happily, until.
THUD
"AHHH! WATCH WERE YOU STAND!" Shouted happily the electric rodent.
"Hey, it was your fault!" Said our hiperactive hedgehog.
"Oh yes? Then I'm Mary Sue!" Said Pikachu.
"Really?" The hedgehog asked.
"NO!" Said Pikachu.
"Awww....oh well, do you mind if I take these cookies?" Said Sonic with cookies in hands.
"Hey! Those cookies are mine, give them back to me!" Said Pikachu with joy, but the cookies were already in Sonic's belly.
"What did you say?" Said Sonic with curiosity, as he was licking his toes.
"My...........cookies...........are.........gone......."Said Pikachu with a great relief.
"Oh snap!" Said Sonic as he saw Master Hand approaching to them, he thought quickly and what did he do? Simple, he took the little cookie pieces of the ground and gave them to Pikachu.
"Good day Sonic and......what is Pikachu doing?" Asked Master Hand with curiosity.
"Sir, Pikachu ate my cookies!" Answered Sonic with happiness.
"WHAT?!" Said Pikachu with great entusiasm.
"Pikachu, DON'T EVER EAT SOMEONE ELSE COOKIES AGAIN! AND FOR THAT, YOU WILL CLEAN THE ENTIRE YARD!" Said Master Hand with a happy smile.
"Good luck cleaning the yard Pikachu!" Said Sonic as Pikachu was in his way for the broom.
"(Must kill Sonic soon)" Thought Pikachu as he was entering the mansion.
Chapter 4: Annoying Yoshi
Another peaceful (Really, is peaceful know) day in the Smash Mansion, Pikachu was still cleaning the yard for his punishment and swearing under his breath, but do you care?
Well, let's see what is Yoshi doing, ok? Yoshi was watching all the cakes Peach has done, and he was drooling like crazy just seeing all the cakes for Master Hand's party, and since he is a good boy (No, is not Tobi, Naruto fans) he just waited for the party..........which was the next day.
He didn't tolerate at all the waiting, so, he just simply touch a little the cake to see how does it tastes, yeah, such a wonderful plan (Really, everyone do that, do you?)
So what happened then? He went to the huge kitchen of the mansion to taste a little every last cake, how many they were? 50.
But as soon he was there, many huge pieces of cake were missing! Who is the one who took them?
He was in shock just as seeing every cake missing a huge piece of bread and cream, he then turned to du du duuuuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnn, EMO! (Just kidding, Yoshizilla :P)
Well, let's change to another situation, forget what did I said before this, he was in shock just as seeing every cake missing a huge piece of bread and cream. Then for his bad luck, Peach and Master Hand appeared from the other side of the huge kitchen. Then Peach said this with every word of joy and happiness:
"WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED HERE?!"
"It wasn't me! I swear!" Said Yoshi proudly.
"No, I saw him! He was eating every cake!" Sonic appeared from nowhere, blaming Yoshi, with suspiccious cream from around his mouth and gloves. But since Master Hand and Peach were having eyes problem in this day, (yes, Peach made the cakes before this day, so she didn't have any trouble with the cream) they can't see white things very clearly, and no, Master Hand can see himself in the mirror.
"Look! He even has cream all around his mouth!" Said Yoshi, hoping for a present.
"I don't see any!" Said Master Hand with entusiasm.
"Wahhh! Yoshi is trying to blame me of something I didn't do!" Said Sonic with fake tears.
"WHAT?!" Said Yoshi in his defense.
"Yoshi, YOU WILL NOT EAT DINNER FOR THIS MONTH! Said Master Hand, with angel's wings around him.
"NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!" Said Yoshi for his last words of defense.
"And you will help me make the cakes again!" Said Peach with a smile and pointing towards Yoshi.
"I wish you good luck for this month Yoshi!" Said Sonic, leaving the huge kitchen.
"(Must kill Sonic soon)" Yoshi thought mentally while he was searching for the cream and plates.
MAH CAKES WILL BURN
*runs*
Had to do that, sorry. :P
Quote from: Tuppyluver1 on December 19, 2007, 06:35:29 PM
MAH CAKES WILL BURN
*runs*
Had to do that, sorry. :P
Remember, there are 4 chapters. ;)
Nice.
Chapter 5: Annoying Fox
Another day, another trip to the hospital, no no no, that is another story, oh well, this can be used for this, Yoshi was still making all the cakes he had "eated", he was in cake number 14 now, but let's leave him alone ok?
Instead of watching Yoshi, let's see what is our favorite Fox doing ok?
"WAHHHHH!!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!" Said Tails.
"Oops, wrong Fox" I said.
Well, what a problem where is that lurkey Fox now? He probably is in the Shooting Range room. And bingo! There he is!
Fox was shooting down targets with his blaster, and he was doing it perfectly, the same perfect score of everyday, Falco, Samus and Pit were a little jealous because of this, but for today, he was praticing alone, yeah, it was heaven for Fox to be practicing alone.
Until now..........
"Phew, another perfect score for this day" Said Fox proudly (No, really, this time is proudly)
"Hey! What are you doing?" Said Sonic, who appeared out from nowhere, scaring Fox half to death.
"AHHHH! STOP DOING THAT!" Said Fox happily.
"Ok, I'll stop. Hmm, can you teach me how to use your gun please? Asked the blue hedgehog.
"Hmmm..........fine, take it" Answered Fox, giving Sonic his blaster
"Thanks! Now, how can I shoot?" Asked with curiosity Sonic.
"Well, first you need to press this bu-" But the blaster was already shooting!
Yep, every laser was flying towards the wall, Fox ducked instantly by the lights of "happiness". Sonic was enjoying firing to all the walls of the room, leaving the targets untouched. Then Sonic heard something coming to the Shooting Range room, he then fired at himself with the blaster above his head, and a little flame was on top of it, and.....
"Here, sorry to cause all this problem" Said Sonic, giving back the blaster to Fox.
"Sure, maybe you should get away from guns" Said Fox with a smile.
Then our favorite Master Hand was cheking the room, and well, he was too happy and said this:
"WHY THIS ROOM IS ALL DAMAGED?!"
"IT WAS HIM! HE SHOOT LIKE CRAZY TO ALL DIRECTIONS! LOOK! HE EVEN SHOOTED MY HEAD!" Said Sonic pointing to Fox and then to his head with the red grass.
"WHAT?!" Said Fox with joy.
"Fox, YOU WILL STAY IN THE MANSION DOING LAUNDRY! Said Master Hand with a halo above his head.
"WHAT?! THAT IS SO GIRLY!" Said Fox with entusiasm.
"QUIET!" Said Master Hand, grabbing Fox out of the room.
"Good luck with Wario's clothes!" Said Sonic happily.
"NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! (Must kill Sonic soon)" Said and thought Fox, while he was being dragged away by Master Hand.
You should make it so Wario annoys Sonic but doesn't get him in trouble. thta would be funny
Bell shaped fox
Nice work.
Sonic's going to be destroyed, what's his ____ problem?
Quote from: Ridley on December 20, 2007, 11:27:53 AM
You should make it so Wario annoys Sonic but doesn't get him in trouble. thta would be funny
That for later chapters, ok?
Chapter 6: Annoying Samus/ZSS
It was another peaceful (chaotic) day in the Smash Mansion, Fox was doing the laundry with Wario's clothes, but as soon he grabbed Wario's sock, he smell it and fainted instantly. Poor Fox.
Samus was walking towards her room, still wearing her armor, she thought it was a better idea to not wear her armor all the day, she passed through the laundry room and she swear she saw Fox on the floor, but that didn't matter Samus at all.
When she made it to her room, she thought it was better take a shower, because she was beginning to smell very bad inside her armor, but anyone didn't noticed that, because you all have already know the smell was inside her armor.
Then she proceede to remove her armor and stay with her Zero suit until she removed that second suit, but of course inside her PERSONAL bathroom, then she moved to the shower to take a bath.
And maybe throught your mind is now the question: And what will Sonic d in this chapter?
Well, nothing.............for now......
Samus already finished her shower and then she grabbed a towel with the Galactic Federation logo in it, she was now in her way to grab her clothes. But still in a towel.
She grabbed her clothes, but as soon she turned her back, she saw Sonic in front of her looking with widened eyes towards all of her body, then the hedgehog's little nose was starting to bleed like crazy, he let go like 1 liter of blood of his little nose.
But unfortunalely for Samus, Sonic's blood showered her totally! Now she was a red version of herself.
Then Master Hand heard all the flooding that was coming from Samus room, he floated quickly to the room, and saw Samus covered all in blood. Then Master Hand said with a great voice full of entusiasm:
"OMG! SAMUS IS A GIRL!" Then the floating hand's invisible nose let go red "Kool-Aid" like crazy, unfortunalely also showering Samus in the process.
"Ok, that's the last time I let the door open!" Said the now red half-naked bounty hunter.
"This is........heaven" Said a fainted Sonic.
"(Must kill Sonic soon)" Thought Samus as she was now heading to take a shower again.
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 20, 2007, 03:40:14 PM
Quote from: Ridley on December 20, 2007, 11:27:53 AM
You should make it so Wario annoys Sonic but doesn't get him in trouble. thta would be funny
That for later chapters, ok?
All right.
Sorry, i thought this was an actual thread, not another SSB Fan-Fic.......
That one was... Odd...
Chapter 7: Annoying Kirby
In the same day in the Smash Mansion, Samus was finishing her shower, but let's leave her alone, ok?
Then what was Kirby doing you ask? Well as every fanatic of Kirby knows, probably eating great amounts of food, or not?
Kirby was only watching how is Yoshi still doing the cakes. Kirby has a perfect control of eating when he wants, unlike Yoshi, of course.
Then he was heading over the game room, well, to be most precise, the arcade, but not necesarily there was machines and all, only hundreds and hundreds of games for GameCube and dozens of games for Wii. And of course many Wiis and GameCubes.
So first Kirby catched the eye on one certain game, and that was nothing more and nothing less than Sonic Adventure 2: Battle. He enjoyed the game, but unfortunalely, he always lose when he selects a certain character, and who was that character? Sonic the Hedgehog.
Yep, he always lose more with Sonic than Shadow, in fact, and for worsening up everything, there was in person Sonic behind Kirby. Watching in horror how Kirby always makes himself in the game fall in a bottomless hole. Oh yeah, he was having a heart attack just looking at himself dieing and dieing and dieing, it was his bad day now.
So, what did Sonic do about this? Simple, like any character who watches himself dieing and dieing in his own game by another person, he said with an smile and much happiness:
"STOP MAKING ME DIEING YOU LITTLE BASTARD!"
But it was too late for Sonic now, why? Because Kirby was in fact still a baby and what babys do when they heard a loud noise? Cry, of course. And for worse, Master Hand have entered the room, finding Kirby crying and Sonic yelling at him with eyes closed. And Master Hand wasn't a very bad guy towards people who yells at babys, because he said this:
"YOU LITTLE BLUE MONSTER, STOP YELLING AT KIRBY!!!!!!!" Said with entusiasm Master Hand.
It was indeed too late for Sonic, because this time he would receive the punishment for what he did, now Master Hand grabbed Sonic by his little tail (And how cute he was, because he was shouting happily) and dragged him away from Kirby, then Kirby stopped crying when he saw Sonic and Master Hand out of the room.
But in reality, well, Kirby WASN'T a baby at all, because he said under his breath:
"Hehehe, that should teach him a lesson, never interrupt someone who is playing!" Said Kirby happily while he was still making the Sonic from the game jumping inside the bottomless holes.
BUMP
I'm sorry... and I really hate to be mean... but how do you people read this stuff? It is filled with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. Nothing actually makes sense. You people are encouraging him like this stuff is great. I really want to know what makes you people come back for this?
Quote from: Joeofmars on December 20, 2007, 07:47:41 PM
I'm sorry... and I really hate to be mean... but how do you people read this stuff? It is filled with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. Nothing actually makes sense. You people are encouraging him like this stuff is great. I really want to know what makes you people come back for this?
Because is fun.
Ha, Sonic deserved that.
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 20, 2007, 08:00:16 PM
Ha, Sonic deserved that.
Next chapter for today is Annoying DK!
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 20, 2007, 07:54:50 PM
Quote from: Joeofmars on December 20, 2007, 07:47:41 PM
I'm sorry... and I really hate to be mean... but how do you people read this stuff? It is filled with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. Nothing actually makes sense. You people are encouraging him like this stuff is great. I really want to know what makes you people come back for this?
Because is fun.
And if you could find the grammatical errors, please do that.
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 20, 2007, 08:05:54 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 20, 2007, 07:54:50 PM
Quote from: Joeofmars on December 20, 2007, 07:47:41 PM
I'm sorry... and I really hate to be mean... but how do you people read this stuff? It is filled with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. Nothing actually makes sense. You people are encouraging him like this stuff is great. I really want to know what makes you people come back for this?
Because is fun.
And if you could find the grammatical errors, please do that.
Dude... you're not serious. Do you really want me to go back and point them all out?
Fun ;D
I like reading random stuff.
Quote from: Joeofmars on December 20, 2007, 08:17:33 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 20, 2007, 08:05:54 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 20, 2007, 07:54:50 PM
Quote from: Joeofmars on December 20, 2007, 07:47:41 PM
I'm sorry... and I really hate to be mean... but how do you people read this stuff? It is filled with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. Nothing actually makes sense. You people are encouraging him like this stuff is great. I really want to know what makes you people come back for this?
Because is fun.
And if you could find the grammatical errors, please do that.
Dude... you're not serious. Do you really want me to go back and point them all out?
Do only one.
In the first chapter it says
'say master hand with joy'
First of all, it should be 'said' not say, and how could he have said it with joy? You made him sound angry. Joy would have been 'Come on everyone, I have an announcement!' not 'Get yer buts down here i have announcement!' or whatever you put.
Chapter 8: Annoying Donkey Kong
Still the same day in the same mansion, Sonic was finishing his punisment (cleaning Crazy Hand's room, and man, that room is a total mess!) But for Sonic, was no problem at all, because he cleaned the room at high speed, but was short because Crazy was back and he made again the same mess, but Sonic remembered only 1 time to clean the room, so, he leaved the room all alone.
So let's see what is DK doing ok?
DK was eating happily all of his bananas, yes, it was heaven for him.
Until now........
DK was needing to go to the bathroom, but he thought "It's a good idea to leave all the bananas alone? Hmm, why not? I'm just going to the bathroom, is just only 1 door away"
So the gorilla was running towards the bathroom, to do his "business"
5 hours later.....:D
He was exiting the bathroom and then he was heading towards his room, but then.....
"Where are my bananas!" Said DK with happiness. Then he found a trail of peeled bananas, he was following the trail until the end, the trail's end was in..........the kitchen with Yoshi.
Just by coincidence, Yoshi was using a banana for the cake number 41, but obviously, that banana was not from DK, but DK thought the contrary, he was approaching carefully towards Yoshi and, what he do? Well, he was raising his huge arm to pet Yoshi's head, but with great force, and Yoshi was buried into the ground with a red mark on top of his head.
"That will teach you to not using my bananas Yoshi!" Said DK, with joy. Then he turned his back and was heading towards his room.
Of the other side where DK was heading, Sonic was eating the last banana he took from DK, and he throwed the peel in Yoshi's head.
"(Must kill Sonic very soon)" Thought Yoshi under the ground, and now he was trying to get off of the ground, but with no result.
do you really need ANOTHER fanfic? I mean...u have like 10 in the fan fic board....
Quote from: Joeofmars on December 20, 2007, 09:11:53 PM
In the first chapter it says
'say master hand with joy'
First of all, it should be 'said' not say, and how could he have said it with joy? You made him sound angry. Joy would have been 'Come on everyone, I have an announcement!' not 'Get yer buts down here i have announcement!' or whatever you put.
Dude, you doesn't get it, right? I wroted the contrary to make it sound funny. ;D
Quote from: thunderhero4 on December 20, 2007, 09:52:48 PM
do you really need ANOTHER fanfic? I mean...u have like 10 in the fan fic board....
I'm training here.
BUMP.
Awesome. But poor Yoshi...
Keep them up they are funny
Chapter 9: Annoying Luigi.
Today was a very special day for Luigi, why? Because he finally has defeated the most hardest game of his entire life, and what game was that? SpongeBob. :P
But let's leave that for now, shall we? Luigi was crossing the kitchen when he swears he saw a green lump on the floor (Yoshi's head) But he ignored that, his mind currently in another place.
He was heading towards the laundry room, where he left his interminable green clothes cleaning, but also he was swearing he saw Fox all K.Oed on the floor, still holding the stinky sock of Wario, but Luigi hurried to his room holding 10 green clothes to evade the horrible smell of the sock.
He made it to his room, panting, then he putted all of his green clothes in the closet, yep, he was done for now. Or not?
Then what he was doing now? Well, Luigi now wanted to watch TV in the huge living room. But he found the TV already on, in a channel, without anyone watching it.
Kinda weird, right? Well, he didn't matter the situation, so he grabbed the remote and changed the channel, which was a bad idea. Because the one who was watching prevously the TV was Sonic, he was in the kitchen, above Yoshi's head, waiting for the popcorn in the microwave, DING! The popcorn was ready. And then, he was now running towards the Living Room with Popcorn in hand, but he found Luigi already changing channels.
"WAHHHH!!! LUIGI STOLE THE REMOTE FROM ME!" Said Sonic, with fake tears.
And for Luigi bad luck, Crazy Hand was near, so he saw Sonic making water from his eyes, and what did he do?
"What's wrong Megaman?" Said our stupid big floating hand.
"LUIGI STOLE MY HOUR OF WATCHING THE TV!!!" Said with entusiasm our hero hedgehog.
Then Crazy Hand proceeded to pet Luigi's head, but with great force, buring him down the couch, Luigi was shouting happily under the couch:
"HEY! WHAT'S THE BIG DEAL?!"
"There ya go, Megaman" Said Crazy Hand, floating away.
Then Sonic sitted above Luigi's head, eating happily the popcorn and changing back to his favorite channel, MTV.
"(Must kill Sonic soon)" Thought Luigi under Sonic's butt.
Why do they always talk happily >.>?
Quote from: Birdie of Aces on December 21, 2007, 11:59:48 AM
Why do they always talk happily >.>?
I said sometimes the contrary of what they are really feeling or making to make it funny.
lol I want to see what happens at the end :D
Nice.
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 21, 2007, 03:23:13 PM
Nice.
Speaking of which I have a nice idea... I might need some help if your interested
Quote from: Ridley on December 21, 2007, 03:26:10 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 21, 2007, 03:23:13 PM
Nice.
Speaking of which I have a nice idea... I might need some help if your interested
Oh, do tell us, Ridley, do tell.
Chapter 10 (Yay!): Annoying Jigglypuff
The same day at the same mansion, and Luigi still buried under the couch, but who cares now? Our protagonist for this chapter is our favorite lullaby singer, Jigglypuff.
And where was she? She was in he Karaoke room, singing as usual, our maybe training for the next tournament, and that was the perfect place.............for sleeping.
And why sleeping? Because every person who was entering the room while Jigglypuff was singing was instantly sleeping with the Mareeps, but everyone already know to avoid the Karaoke room while Jigglypuff was doing her song in there, everyone except from 1 person. Just then, Sonic wanted to blame Jigglypuff of something she didn't do, so what did he do?
He was entering the room while Jigglypuff was singing with eyes closed, but Sonic was feeling drowsy mysteriously and he crashed to the floor, snoring like a Naruto or something.
Then Jigglypuff stopped singing when she saw Sonic dead on the floor, and what was her reaction? Well, Jigglypuff inflated herself and the "mic" she was using was in fact a scoreboard, and she began doodling the entire face of the dead Sonic. And the she proceeded to left the room.
When Sonic was revived, he didn't saw Jigglypuff in the Karaoke room anymore, and he gave up to blame Jigglypuff, leaving the room.
But that was a bad idea, because just passing by, Ness and Lucas were talking to each other while walking and holding lollypops, and when they saw Sonic's face, they bursted off laughing like crazy and throwing away their lollypops and dropping themselves to the floor, still laughing like crazy.
A interrogation have formed over Sonic's head, and there was a mirror just behind him, he saw his reflection, and then he was now yelling happily, yelling happily what? This:
"AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! I DOESN'T HAVE LONG GIRLY EYEBROWNS!" Said Sonic in a female tone.
Then he was now running towards the kitchen to clean his face, but unfortunalely for him, the scoreboard paint was PERMANENT. Then he was screaming with joy:
"NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Must take revenge)" Thought Sonic, while Mario and Pit were in the kitchen and when they saw Sonic's face, they were now laughing hard enough to break the windows.
Hah! Take that, Sawnik!
Chapter 11: Annoying Capt. Falcon.
Our favorite female hedgehog, wait, that person is not Amy? Oh, yeah, is Sonic, sorry. Was now with Dr Mario to help him remove his "fake girly eyebrowns", but was hard for Dr Mario to remove those, no, not hard to remove the eyebrowns, but hard to resist the inevitable laugh, but he finished removing the eyebrowns, which was a very bad idea, why a very bad idea? Because of this:
"AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! IT HURTS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!" Said Sonic with entusiasm.
"*Shuckles* Now you are fine, you can leave now, the blue hair will eventually grow in less than one month" Said Dr Mario with a smile. But now, the blue hedgehog have dissapeared before Dr Mario's result.
Now the scene changes with Capt. Falcon, who was now repairing his super fast F-Zero racer in the big technological garage of the mansion, well, his racer was the only one there before Master Hand noted the lack of F-Zero characters. :P
But that didn't matter for Capt. Falcon, in fact, the whole technological garage was his favorite place, besides his room. And then, the empty eyebrown place blue hedgehog appeared from nowhere, making Capt. Falcon's heart doing little quakes inside his body. Then Falcon said this with relief:
"STUPID HEDGEHOG WITHOUT BLUE HAIR IN HIS EYEBROWNS, STOP SCARING ME!!!!" Said Capt. Falcon, pointing to Sonic.
That didn't sound too good to the empty eyebrown place blue hedgehog, because he was now saying "good" words under his breath.
"Hey, sorry Capt. Crunch, is there something I can help you?" Said Sonic.
"My name is.....ugh, that doesn't matter, I need you to stay in that chair overthere or out of here" Said Capt. Crunch- eh, I mean, Falcon, pointing towards a chair.
"You know, I better get out of here for the best" Said Sonic with a smile.
"Good, get out now" Said Capt. Crun- Falcon. And then, Sonic has dissapeared out of the room.
Then Capt. Falco-Crunch-I mean, Falcon was now checking the engine in front of the racer, but something was now making sounds like a countdown or something. But he said:
"Nah, must be a Kricketot or something" Said Capt. Falcon.
1 second later, there was now a very black place where the technological garage was supposed to be, with a black Capt. Falcon with eyes rather big.
Then Master Hand was heading in a hurry to the very black place, and saw a black Capt. Falcon standing ratherly stupid. And the big hand said:
"YOU WILL PAY ALL THE DAMAGES HERE CAPT. CRUNCH!"
"MY NAME IS CAPTAIN FALCON!" Said the black Capt. Falcon.
"WHATEVER YOUR NAME IS DOESN'T MATTER, NOW BEGIN REPAIRING THE GARAGE!" Said Master Hand, floating away.
Then Capt. Crunch-Falcon saw something very rare where the racer was supposed to be, he found blue little eyebrown hair near the self-destruct button, then he thought with joy:
"(Must kill the empty eyebrown place blue hedgehog soon)" And then, Capt. Falcon went to the kitchen to eat a cereal, and what cereal that was? Capt. Crunch's cereal. :P
So and so this time. :-\
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 21, 2007, 12:29:26 PM
Quote from: Birdie of Aces on December 21, 2007, 11:59:48 AM
Why do they always talk happily >.>?
I said sometimes the contrary of what they are really feeling or making to make it funny.
Actually, he is just using that as a cover up.
Heheh... Poor Cap'n Crunch...
Next one is annoying Ness!
Chapter 12: Annoying Ness
It was a peaceful (chaotic) day in the Smash Mansion, Captain Falcon talking to the phone to bring the Toads to repair the damages. But let's leave him and his wallet for now, ok?
Now let's see what is Ness doing, shall we?
Ness was happy eating his candys, where did he got those candys? Well, Lucas has a ton of them in his room, so, as good kid he is, he gave some of them to Ness, like hundreds of them, oh yes, Ness was happy.
Or that happiness will end soon?
Maybe not, Ness was now eating the most delicious candy of all, Nerds of Willy Wonka. (Seriously, who doesn't love eating those?) And for now, Ness was eating the last one, and oh boy, that was a big one!
In slow motion, Ness closed his eyes to think about the taste of the coming candy to his mouth, yeahhhhhhhhhh, that will sure be a prize for eating the others.
He then grabbed the big Nerd and throw it above his head, the big Nerd was coming downwards, in a perfect position to his mouth, he closed his eyes and opened the hole in his face.
In slow motion again, just another meter to reach the hole in the face, but that was the real destination for the big Nerd? Just 10 cm to reach it, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1-THUD! Another mouth has appeared instead of Ness's mouth, and that mouth was of Sonic, now with the big Nerd inside the blue hedgehog's belly.
And what happened to Ness you ask? Let's see again the tape where the moment Sonic appeared and what happened to Ness.
The big Nerd was about to enter Ness's mouth, but then suddenly, very suddenly, Sonic pushed with great force to Ness, making him crashing into the wall. And the big Nerd now in Sonic's belly.
And worse for Ness, he crashed into the wall and crossed literally the other side, and that side was horrible for him, and why horrible? Because the other side was Zelda's bathroom, and she was taking a bath in that moment, but when she saw Ness looking at her..........
Let's see what happened 10 minutes later.
Lucas was a little worried because he asked why Ness has a big black eye and band aids all over his face, then the citizen of Onett said with a smile:
"BECAUSE A BLUE FREAK PUSHED ME TOWARDS THE WALL AND THE OTHER SIDE WAS A NAKED GIRL TAKING A BATH, THAT'S WHY!!"
"Ohh, I know what happened after" Said Lucas putting his hands in his mouth to avoid realising 2 letters repeatly at high voice.
"(Must kill Sonic soon)" Thought Ness while he was now heading to complain to Master Hand.
Yummy Nerds! Bad Sonic! Go Lucas! Good chapter!
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 21, 2007, 09:23:09 PM
Yummy Nerds! Bad Sonic! Go Lucas! Good chapter!
Next chapter for tomorrow is annoying Peach!
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 21, 2007, 10:09:26 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 21, 2007, 09:23:09 PM
Yummy Nerds! Bad Sonic! Go Lucas! Good chapter!
Next chapter for tomorrow is annoying Peach!
Somehow, I can just imagine this involving the shower and the dress...
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 21, 2007, 10:10:06 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 21, 2007, 10:09:26 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 21, 2007, 09:23:09 PM
Yummy Nerds! Bad Sonic! Go Lucas! Good chapter!
Next chapter for tomorrow is annoying Peach!
Somehow, I can just imagine this involving the shower and the dress...
How did you know? :P
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 21, 2007, 10:22:30 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 21, 2007, 10:10:06 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 21, 2007, 10:09:26 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 21, 2007, 09:23:09 PM
Yummy Nerds! Bad Sonic! Go Lucas! Good chapter!
Next chapter for tomorrow is annoying Peach!
Somehow, I can just imagine this involving the shower and the dress...
How did you know? :P
Showers seem to be a running gag in the fanfic. The dress... It's kinda obvious...
Chapter 13: Annoying Peach
Is the first day of the new year! Before that day, the Smash Mansion was a total mess, leftovers of food all around, oh yeah, what happened to Ness you say? Well.....8 days ago.....
"Master Hand, is was really a good idea to let that hedgehog living here.....WITH US?!" Said Ness with joy.
"Ness, Ness Ness Ness Snes...." Said Master Hand.
"Do you know my name is Ness and not a name of a console right? Said Ness with this expression -_-
"I know that, Lucas" Said Master Hand as he knows everything.
"Master Hand, I'M NESS!" Said Luc-I mean, Ness with entusiasm.
"Yeah yeah, I know that! And yes, it was really a good idea to add him with us" Said Master Hand, but he didn't finished yet "And no, I don't ever remove my glove, and no, I never clean this thing"
Ness left Master Hand's office with a horrible picture in his mind.
So you're thinking what this has to do with Peach? Nothing at all!
Peach was now cleaning the mess, because it was her turn, the others already have done their turn to clean the mansion. She was singing, birds all around her began to dance in mid-air, happily.
Yeah, that was the paradise for her, she was very happy as always, and now, the last garbage on the floor was in front of her, she ducked to grab the last trash and throw it to the Trash can, but as soon she blinked quickly, the entire hall was now already with so much garbage everywhere! The floor, the walls, the roof, everything.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!" She said with so much happyness. The birds already gone, or dead, because when the birds saw the mess, they died, yeah, simple.
Just then, Master Hand came floating in the hall, saw the mess, and said this.
"PEEEAAAACCCCHHHHH!!!"
"Y-y-yes?" She said, too happy to even say another word.
"FOR NOT CLEANING THIS MESS, YOU WILL NOT RECEIVE MORE PINK GIFTS FOR A MONTH!"
"Noooooooo!" She said, fainting, falling above the dead birds.
Then Master Hand floated away, just then, a banana peel was in Peach's face, she opened her eyes, and saw the peel, where did that come from?
She saw a blue figure throwing garbage all around her, that figure was Sonic!
"HOW COULD YOU!!!" She said, but the hedgehog have disapeared just then.
"(Must punish Sonic)" Peach thought while she was going for the mop......again.
Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 02:54:33 PM
Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.
No................maybe ::) Thanks for the idea.
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 03:20:51 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 02:54:33 PM
Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.
No................maybe ::) Thanks for the idea.
Where's mah payment?
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 03:30:05 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 03:20:51 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 02:54:33 PM
Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.
No................maybe ::) Thanks for the idea.
Where's mah payment?
Hmm........here.............MAH BOI.
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 03:34:26 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 03:33:40 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 03:30:05 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 03:20:51 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 02:54:33 PM
Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.
No................maybe ::) Thanks for the idea.
Where's mah payment?
Hmm........here.............MAH BOI.
Good enough for me! MAH BOI!
"This Wii! is for all warriors strife for!
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 03:39:09 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 03:34:26 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 03:33:40 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 03:30:05 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 03:20:51 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 02:54:33 PM
Poor birdies! I'm guessing this is all gonna end with Sonic dying and Klonoa being in. Awesome.
No................maybe ::) Thanks for the idea.
Where's mah payment?
Hmm........here.............MAH BOI.
Good enough for me! MAH BOI!
"This Wii! is for all warriors strife for!
[/faceplant] at sheer randomness.
I'm sorry but the whole "Master Hand said Happily, "I AM GOING TO EAT YOUR FACE" thing isn't really funny, and yeah the grammer isn't so good, is english a second language to you? But the actual fan fic is great, I liked Bothering Kirby the best :P
Your smash mansion is slowly turning into the smash mansion that will be up in my fan fic next chapter. There is much chaos and war in my mansion, I guess you can check it out soon I'm gonna go start writing it.
Quote from: fredrickthethird on January 01, 2008, 07:44:37 PM
Your smash mansion is slowly turning into the smash mansion that will be up in my fan fic next chapter. There is much chaos and war in my mansion, I guess you can check it out soon I'm gonna go start writing it.
I can't wait for that to happen.
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 09:06:36 PM
Quote from: fredrickthethird on January 01, 2008, 07:44:37 PM
Your smash mansion is slowly turning into the smash mansion that will be up in my fan fic next chapter. There is much chaos and war in my mansion, I guess you can check it out soon I'm gonna go start writing it.
I can't wait for that to happen.
Chris! Read my poem on the online team thread!
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 09:13:25 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 09:06:36 PM
Quote from: fredrickthethird on January 01, 2008, 07:44:37 PM
Your smash mansion is slowly turning into the smash mansion that will be up in my fan fic next chapter. There is much chaos and war in my mansion, I guess you can check it out soon I'm gonna go start writing it.
I can't wait for that to happen.
Chris! Read my poem on the online team thread!
And mine! ;D
MINE'S BETTER!
Quote from: Shujinco on January 01, 2008, 09:21:46 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 09:13:25 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 09:06:36 PM
Quote from: fredrickthethird on January 01, 2008, 07:44:37 PM
Your smash mansion is slowly turning into the smash mansion that will be up in my fan fic next chapter. There is much chaos and war in my mansion, I guess you can check it out soon I'm gonna go start writing it.
I can't wait for that to happen.
Chris! Read my poem on the online team thread!
And mine! ;D
MINE'S BETTER!
Poem? Where?
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 09:48:37 PM
Quote from: Shujinco on January 01, 2008, 09:21:46 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 01, 2008, 09:13:25 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 01, 2008, 09:06:36 PM
Quote from: fredrickthethird on January 01, 2008, 07:44:37 PM
Your smash mansion is slowly turning into the smash mansion that will be up in my fan fic next chapter. There is much chaos and war in my mansion, I guess you can check it out soon I'm gonna go start writing it.
I can't wait for that to happen.
Chris! Read my poem on the online team thread!
And mine! ;D
MINE'S BETTER!
Poem? Where?
Online Team Thread.
Chapter 14: Annoying Popo and Nana..................or trying to do so.
This day I want to flyyyyyyy..........okay, that was random, wasn't it? Anyway, another day in the Smash Mansion, with Peach cleaning the hall again, but who cares?
Now let's see my 2 favorites parka clothed characters............THE MEN IN BLACK! Oh wait, wrong series, I mean, the Ice Climbers!
You already know it, Popo and Nana are brothers, they always share anything, even their rooms (Ok, maybe not) but the point is, they hardly ever fight againts each other, but constantly every Smasher tells them "cheaters" because they're 2 in 1 againts 1, they doesn't care, I mean, do you know how much Pokémon abuse do they do to Pikachu? The deserve it. Be 2 characters in one.
So since this chapter tells about them, then let's do this chapter!
But, they weren't in the Smash Mansion, oh no, they were climbing the endless Icicle Mountain, yes, like a clone of the Mt Everest, but in a game version. Fortunanely, the Smash Mansion counts with a teleporter to transport every character to their homes. That also works to fight in the stages, amazing, isn't it?
Ok ok, I'll stop talking about technology stuff and their mechanicals diversity.
As always, Popo and Nana were trying again to reach the summit of Icicle Mounatin, 'cuz Master Hand told them if they want to be in the next tournament, they have to install a teleporter in the summit to battle there as the next new stage for the Ice Climber's stage.
Without hesitating, and because Popo and Nana are still energetic kids WHO NERVE AGES SINCE THEIR GAME WAS REALESED LIKE 20 OR 15 YEARS AGO, and things are looking bright, the summit is a few 20 ANTI-GRAVITATORY platforms ahead!
Nana told Popo this:
"We're almost there, our next appearance in the next game! Isn't that cool Popo?!"
"It is Nana! I'm so happy we're gonna make it!" Said Popo with joy.
Just 10 more ANTI-GRAVITATORY platforms.................5...........4......3........2..........1.................FINISH!
"WE DID IT! WE DID IT! WE DID IT!" Popo and Nana said in unison, jumping happily while they were hugged to the other.
"Now, where will this teleporter device should be?" Said Popo, holding the mini-teleporter device.
"Look at that icicle Popo!" Said Nana pointing to an icicle.
"Wait, that icicle has something inside of it"
"Who cares anyway! Let's just push that thing towards the edge!" Said Nana, already trying pushing the icicle to the edge.
"Ok, I'll help" Said Popo now helping Nana.
As teamwork and many cheesy things can help in this sittuation, the icicle was now heading down in a fast form.
"Now.............let put this......here, done!" Said Popo.
"Now we need to use this and transport to the Smash Mansion and tell the report to Master Hand, he will be so happy!" Said Nana excited.
"Sure!" And without hesitation, the 2 parka kids tranported to the Smash Mansion.
"So how did go?" Said Master Hand.
"Mission complete Master hand, the teleporter was succesfully placed in the top of Icicle Mountain!" Said both Ice Climbers.
"Very well done you too, now let me tell my boss to add you in the next tournament and you will be all ready to go" Said Master Hand happily.
"Yay! We did it!" Said the Ice Climbers jumping happily out of Master Hand's office.
In the hall, Popo and Nana have founded Pichu talking to a fox with 2 tails.
"Popo, Nana, have you seen Sonic around?" Pichu asked.
"No, why?"
"He is a friend of Sonic and he wants to know if he is here" Answered Pichu.
"Have you seen him around?" Tails said.
"I don't know, I haven't seen him in all the day" Said Nana.
"Last time I saw him heading quickly to the teleporter of the Icicle mountain" Pichu said.
"Really? I didn't saw him there, Popo and I were just a moment ago in Icicle Mountain"
"Should I go there?" Asked Tails.
"No, because you need to wear winter clothes to even last 2 hours, me and Nana can tolerate it forever" Answered Popo.
"Oh ouh"
"What?"
"SONIC NEVER WEARS ANY CLOTHES!" Said Tails with entusiasm.
"IS HE NUTS OR SOMETHING?!" Said everyone else with joy.
"By the way Pichu, since when Sonic went to Icicle Mountain?" Asked Tails.
".........................1 day ago" Said Pichu in a low tone.
The scene changes to the Icicle Mountain again, but where is he? And why is the camera zooming to the icicle Popo and Nana pushed rolling down the mountain? Oh look, it has splitted in 2..................hey........say.........isn't that part of the half ice a blue little tail? Oh is a crashing down in the floor. Wait.........the icicle has Sonic inside!
"Achoo! Achoo! W-w-w-why I'm always without clothes? At l-l-l-least the teleporter is near me" Said Sonic studdering because of the cold.
As soon he found the teleporter he was about to enter until.........remember the other half of the icicle? Well, the other half has destroyed the teleporter.
"Y-Y-Y-YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME!!!!" Said Sonic furio-happily.
For his luck, he found a Smash Ball near there, he hitted with his last force and transformed into a super saiy-I mean, Super Sonic and flyied in a very high speed towards the summit of the mountain, unfortunanely, he didn't know the mountain was more longer than it seems to be.
"WHERE THE HELL IS THE SUMMIT?!" Said Super Sonic with rag-joy.
And for worse, his superness was out of power, and worse of all, he was flying like 10 meters away from the platforms.
"CRAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He said happily while he was heading at a more higher speed towards the floor. Then he thought something about killing and torturing the Ice Climbers for what he has to deal with now.........then he crashed and yelled in pain.
Ouch. XD
Hehehe, just wait to see the others chapters.
lol!!
your smash mansion series i'ts so cool!!
Sonic is very similar to Blu!! xD
Chapter 15: Annoying Zelda..........or Sheik
3 days later, a rescue team was sent to find Sonic in Icicle Mountain, fortunanely they've founded him..........like a big popsicle. But he IS the popsicle!
3 more days later.....................and 3 more days later................and 6 days ago............ :P
Zelda was doing a telepathy conference in her room, her room was like any high authority of any land or Kingdom (except Peach's room, who was all too pinky, just watching the pink blinds you) anyway, she was doing her telepathy while she was sitted in her chair. Then she got up and walked to the bathroom.
Then our mischiefvous hedgehog took the oportunity to add very sticky glue to the chair. And then he was out of the room, watching through some boxes.
But as soon the bathroom's door opened, a different character was out.
So what happened next? Sonic hurried to the chair because the person wanted to sit there and he sitted there instead, because he didn't planned to make a mischief to her instead of Zelda.............YET!.
"Umm, excuse me, but I have to use that chair" Said Sheik.
"No no no! Is not necesary, really!" Said Sonic, his butt getting more and more stuck in the chair. "And besides, I should take this chair with me to inspect it!" He said while he was jumping with the chair still in his butt towards the door and jumping away.
"What a weird fellow he is, oh wait, I've activated my other form by accident?" Said Sheik, now transforming into Zelda. And getting a new chair.
Meanwhile, Sonic was still stuck in the chair, while he heard something coming from the other side of the wall.
"You know, Zelda is always transforming by accident into that other form right?"
"Yeah, I heard she has issues with that"
"WHAT?!" Sonic said happily.
"Did you heard something?"
"Umm, mooo!!!" Said Sonic, now a cow.
"It was a cow"
"Oh right"
"(Must get revenge from both of them)" Sonic thought while he was trying to descend the stair with the chair..........and he fell, yelling in big pain. :P
Quote from: wiiboychris on January 12, 2008, 08:58:43 PM
Chapter 15: Annoying Zelda..........or Sheik
3 days later, a rescue team was sent to find Sonic in Icicle Mountain, fortunanely they've founded him..........like a big popsicle. But he IS the popsicle!
3 more days later.....................and 3 more days later................and 6 days ago............ :P
Zelda was doing a telepathy conference in her room, her room was like any high authority of any land or Kingdom (except Peach's room, who was all too pinky, just watching the pink blinds you) anyway, she was doing her telepathy while she was sitted in her chair. Then she got up and walked to the bathroom.
Then our mischiefvous hedgehog took the oportunity to add very sticky glue to the chair. And then he was out of the room, watching through some boxes.
But as soon the bathroom's door opened, a different character was out.
So what happened next? Sonic hurried to the chair because the person wanted to sit there and he sitted there instead, because he didn't planned to make a mischief to her instead of Zelda.............YET!.
"Umm, excuse me, but I have to use that chair" Said Sheik.
"No no no! Is not necesary, really!" Said Sonic, his butt getting more and more stuck in the chair. "And besides, I should take this chair with me to inspect it!" He said while he was jumping with the chair still in his butt towards the door and jumping away.
"What a weird fellow he is, oh wait, I've activated my other form by accident?" Said Sheik, now transforming into Zelda. And getting a new chair.
Meanwhile, Sonic was still stuck in the chair, while he heard something coming from the other side of the wall.
"You know, Zelda is always transforming by accident into that other form right?"
"Yeah, I heard she has issues with that"
"WHAT?!" Sonic said happily.
"Did you heard something?"
"Umm, mooo!!!" Said Sonic, now a cow.
"It was a cow"
"Oh right"
"(Must get revenge from both of them)" Sonic thought while he was trying to descend the stair with the chair..........and he fell, yelling in big pain. :P
So now it seems the tables have turned and everyone is picking on Sonic (by mistake that is) and he wants revenge
Nice Chapter btw.
Sometimes and sometimes not.
Heh. Good job.
Move this to the fan fiction board please!
Quote from: wiiboychris on February 24, 2008, 06:14:22 PM
Move this to the fan fiction board please!
It was dead anyway... :-\
BUMP.