Super Mario Bros. 4: The TRUE Sequel

[Lohn Jocke]

SUPER MARIO BROS. 4: THE TRUE SEQUEL
Prologue: The Average Mario storyline...
*It is yet another day at The Mario Pipe house... Mario is seen making pancakes, while Luigi is making eggs.*
Luigi: Hey, Mario...
Mario: Yeah?
Luigi: Why is our last name Mario?
Mario: Because I don't like the name Mario Luigi.
Luigi: <_<
*knockity knock.*
Mario: I wonder who that could be?
Luigi: How about you just answer it, and not ask?
Mario: >_<
*Mario opens the door, to a screaming toad!*
Mario: WOAH WOAH WOAH! What happened?
Toad: Peach.. She's... She's....
Luigi: SPIT IT OUT ALREADY!
Toad: Kidnapped AGAIN!
Mario: Oh bother.
Luigi: Why the hell does Bowser keep stealing her? Doesn't he know by now that we will win?
Toad: But, But--
Mario: LET'S A GO!
*They hop into their plumber clothes, and they run to Bowser's castle...*
Toad: But Bowser didn't...
[END]

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Chapter 1-1: ...But with a twist! (Cinnamon, to be exact)
*The Brothers are seen hopping to the castle. Meanwhile, at the castle...*
Bowser: Okay, boys, this time is going to be different!
Goombas, Hammer Bros, etc.: YEAH!
Bowser: We're going to raid the castle, and NOONE can stop us!
Minions: YEAH! BOWSER! BOWSER!
Minion 1: We're gonna beat them!
Minion 2: Yeah! Noone can stop us!
Minion 3: I think Mario just walked through the front door...
Bowser: HAH! Impossible! That could never happen! We've learned from Super Paper Mario, right, boys?
Minions: YEAH!
Minion 3: But Kappy Koopa Forgot to lock the gate again...
Bowser: WHAAAT?! Jeez, I may as well fire him...
Luigi: Not so fast!
Bowser: ARRGH! What are you doing here?
Mario: You should know by now! We're getting the princess back!
Bowser: Wait, but we don't---
???: NOW WAIT JUST A MOMENT!
*A steel ball drops down from the ceiling, Bitting Bowser in the head!*
Bowser: OW! Mother fu--
*BANG! A shot is heard.*
Mario: Well... that was random, wasn't it, Bowser?
...
Erm... Bowser?
*bowser is seen on the ground, a shot in his forehead.*
Mario: NOOOOOOO! NOW WHAT WILL WE DO OUT OF BOREDOM!?!
Luigi: THIS WILL NEVER GET AN "G" RATING NOW!
Minions: ...
Minion 1: Aww, we have nowhere to go now...
Minion 2: I know! Let's join Mario!
Minions: YEAH!
Mario: Oh no. OH HELL NO.

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L os Orange. God is a lemon, and Jesus is a Lime.

[Red]

Hmm... Sees a little generic, but if you do it right, I can see this becoming good. Just ditch the script style, it takes more space with telling less story. I'll delete this if you need the edit space.

[Lohn Jocke]

Hmm... Sees a little generic, but if you do it right, I can see this becoming good. Just ditch the script style, it takes more space with telling less story. I'll delete this if you need the edit space.

Actually, if you see my older fanfics, I suck at anything exept the script style.
Also, No need. If I need edit space, I'll just have it in the first post.

[Lohn Jocke]

New Fanfic up. Check First Post.