Super Smash bros. Rise of the Emissary

[Triforceman22]

There were a few noticeable spelling mistakes but other then that, this chapter was pretty good. ;)

Shouldn't Marth have known who Zelda was, though? Or was the tournament seven years ago the N64 Smash Brothers? Seven years ago right now would be in 2000 and that's in between the release of the original Smash and Melee.

I wonder if you'll end up having the same three heroes that I'm going to have in my fanfiction? :P I know everything that's going to happen in my story, but things might change...

Anyways, good chapter. ;) Can't wait to see more. Although the place i pre-ordered Galaxy at should get it in tomorrow...so I might not be able to read tomorrow. :P

Oh yeah, if Falco, Marth and Roy couldn't hear Zelda's message because they were unlockable, why could Captain Falcon and Ness? Are you just going by who was unlockable in Melee?

since brawl is being released in 2008, it makes seven years. :P
also Captain, and ness heard it since they are starters in melee. ;)
also who are your three heroes?
Mine may be diffrent....
(Probably not though... :P)

Well, I don't really want to give anything away, because then it won't be a surprise. :P You know that Link's one of them, though.

Let's just say that Retro's guess on the old Nsider wasn't that far off from what I'm doing. ;)

I forget....
i'm guessing....
A few major characters.....
One starts with a "M" and the other starts with an "S".
Am I right? :P

[Retronintendodude7]

There were a few noticeable spelling mistakes but other then that, this chapter was pretty good. ;)

Shouldn't Marth have known who Zelda was, though? Or was the tournament seven years ago the N64 Smash Brothers? Seven years ago right now would be in 2000 and that's in between the release of the original Smash and Melee.

I wonder if you'll end up having the same three heroes that I'm going to have in my fanfiction? :P I know everything that's going to happen in my story, but things might change...

Anyways, good chapter. ;) Can't wait to see more. Although the place i pre-ordered Galaxy at should get it in tomorrow...so I might not be able to read tomorrow. :P

Oh yeah, if Falco, Marth and Roy couldn't hear Zelda's message because they were unlockable, why could Captain Falcon and Ness? Are you just going by who was unlockable in Melee?

since brawl is being released in 2008, it makes seven years. :P
also Captain, and ness heard it since they are starters in melee. ;)
also who are your three heroes?
Mine may be diffrent....
(Probably not though... :P)

Well, I don't really want to give anything away, because then it won't be a surprise. :P You know that Link's one of them, though.

Let's just say that Retro's guess on the old Nsider wasn't that far off from what I'm doing. ;)

I forget....
i'm guessing....
A few major characters.....
One starts with a "M" and the other starts with an "S".
Am I right? :P

Marth was captured, remember? :P

I'm guessing your heroes are the same people you're thinking of?

[Ridley]

Keep this thread going it just gets more awsome to read

[Water ☮]

I here you need character suggestions!
may i suggest that one group of characters stumble upon some kind of under water palace and find none other than STAFY!!

im serious, Stafy for brawl!

[Triforceman22]

I here you need character suggestions!
may i suggest that one group of characters stumble upon some kind of under water palace and find none other than STAFY!!

im serious, Stafy for brawl!

I meant for my dedicaton thread. ;)
But I will do a dedication for Stafy if you like. :)

[Water ☮]

I here you need character suggestions!
may i suggest that one group of characters stumble upon some kind of under water palace and find none other than STAFY!!

im serious, Stafy for brawl!

I meant for my dedicaton thread. ;)
But I will do a dedication for Stafy if you like. :)

whoop ok sorry

[Red]

When's the next chapter? This fic is awsome.

[Triforceman22]

When's the next chapter? This fic is awsome.

sorry it hasn't been up in a while...
it'll be up maybe tonight. :)

[Eizweir]

*waits*

[Triforce_Luigi]

*waits*

You do know he's offline, right?

[Triforce_Luigi]

When's the next chapter?

[StarWindWizard7]

The best chapter yet! :)

*agrees*

It's becoming big though.

He has to split his story line into different sections even more now...

[Triforceman22]

The best chapter yet! :)

*agrees*

It's becoming big though.

He has to split his story line into different sections even more now...

yay...

*wat a drag...*

;)

Next Chapter may be up tonight. :)

[Triforceman22]

Chapter 14, explosions, Tiara's, and a psychic

Donkey kong couldn't hear the voice inside his head anymore.
As he regained sanity from the odd expierience, he walked towards Diddy.

The Halberd had already left, leaving a huge hole in the celing behind it.
The two then jumped out the broken window K. rool smashed, and headed towards thier island to pack for thier journey to Lylat.

Unbeknowest to them that they were being watched.
The figure, still inside the tower, gritted his teeth, as he walked towards the window.
His fiery red hair blew in the wind, as he looked down.

that voice sounded like Zelda's.... So, I now need to travel to the Lylat district eh?
crap...I really wanted that treasure here, so I could finally crush that moustacheoed wimp!
The figure thought, as he too jumped out the window.

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After his delicous meal his mom made for him, Ness walked into his backyard.
He looked around to see if anyone was near, there was no one.
"Okay... here we go...." Ness said, as his hand glew red.

He then stuck out his two index fingers, and pointed outwards.
"P.K FIRE!" he yelled, as a small bolt of lightning popped out.
It hit a neaby tree. In a flash, the tree was engulfed in flames.

"okay, lets try again!" Ness yelled, as his hands started to glow again.

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As Samus exited the ship her suit was whole again.
"All right boys, lets get to Lylat!" she said at Pit and Ike.

"Just a sec, I need to grab Ragnell," Ike said, running towards his blade.
"Fine, just hurry it up," Samus called back.

About eleven seconds later, a beam of light shot down from the sky, and hit Samus's ship. It then exploded.
As parts of it flew in the air, the core of the ship was engulfed in the inferno.
unfortunatley, Samus was quite close to the ship when it exploded. and was tossed like a ragdoll to the ground.

Ike looked up in the sky, and saw the Halberd flying off into the horizon.
"Dammit!" Ike yelled, as he sheathed Ragnell, and ran to Samus's aid.
Pit was already at her side.

"How are  we getting to Lylat now?!Ike asked angrily.
"Were going to have to walk..." Pit replied.
Ike sulked. Ike never liked travelling on foot. And now, he has to do alot of it.

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As the group exited the dream land border, Dedede was still sulking.
Peach noticed this, and intended to stop it.
She looked at the sulking Penguin, "stop sulking! your bringing us all down!" Peach yelled.

Dedede just ignored her, as he closed his eyes.
Peach was furious now, she then took out a polished golf club, and raised it into the air.
Zelda and the others ignored the whailing Peach gave the king.

After four minutes of whacks, Dedede had a smile on his face.
Too bad several teeth were missing from it.

"We should be entering the Jungle Japes district about now." zelda said.
"Then we should be meeting that giant ape soon..." Peach replied, as she put away her bloodied golf club.

"We should hurry... who knows when those creatures will strike again..." meta knight reminded.

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Marth, Mario, Red, and Pikachu had just entered the Big blue district.
"This is where those crazy races are being held..." marth said.
Red eyed Marth oddly.

"What do you want?" he asked annoyingly...
"What's up with that tiara?!" red asked.
Marth paniced for a second. "Um...ahhh... i..it was my sister's!" Marth replied.

"so, why do you where it? it makes you look like a girl..." Red said, trying to make Marth mad.
"Shut up!" Marth yelled, as he punched Red in the forehead.
"OWWW! that hurt!" Red complained, as he held his head with pain.

"Next time, think before you say something like that!" marth yelled.
"Mama mia...." mario sighed, as he quickened his pace.
"Lets go to Port town, I know a man here that might help us with our travel." He said.

"Pika!" Pikachu yelled happily, as he followed Mario.

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So that's chap. 14, hope you enjoyed it... :)

[Triforce_Luigi]

Me likey.