Super Smash bros. Rise of the Emissary

[thunderhero4]

you don't want lucas? then who?

he wants sonic...hurry and put sonic in...

For god, no! Hint, they are 2.

how are ice climbers close to lucas?

[DededeCloneChris]

you don't want lucas? then who?

he wants sonic...hurry and put sonic in...

For god, no! Hint, they are 2.

how are ice climbers close to lucas?

WAY TOO-wait, did you see the SSBM cinema?

[Triforceman22]

just tell us who you want.

[thunderhero4]

you don't want lucas? then who?

he wants sonic...hurry and put sonic in...

For god, no! Hint, they are 2.

how are ice climbers close to lucas?

WAY TOO-wait, did you see the SSBM cinema?

yes, and just tell us! im not much of a guesser....hury before triforceman22 unleashes his chaos blast fury among you....

[DededeCloneChris]

Ice Climbers! I mean, Lucas! I mean, the 3 together!

[Triforceman22]

you don't want lucas? then who?

he wants sonic...hurry and put sonic in...

For god, no! Hint, they are 2.

how are ice climbers close to lucas?

WAY TOO-wait, did you see the SSBM cinema?

yes, and just tell us! im not much of a guesser....hury before triforceman22 unleashes his chaos blast fury among you....

ARGH!!!!  Death to those who oppose me!!!! :P

[thunderhero4]

you don't want lucas? then who?

he wants sonic...hurry and put sonic in...

For god, no! Hint, they are 2.

how are ice climbers close to lucas?

WAY TOO-wait, did you see the SSBM cinema?

yes, and just tell us! im not much of a guesser....hury before triforceman22 unleashes his chaos blast fury among you....

ARGH!!!!  Death to those who oppose me!!!! :P

uh oh.... :-\  its too late....

[Triforceman22]

you don't want lucas? then who?

he wants sonic...hurry and put sonic in...

For god, no! Hint, they are 2.

how are ice climbers close to lucas?

WAY TOO-wait, did you see the SSBM cinema?

yes, and just tell us! im not much of a guesser....hury before triforceman22 unleashes his chaos blast fury among you....

ARGH!!!!  Death to those who oppose me!!!! :P

uh oh.... :-\  its too late....

CHAOS.......







































joking. :P

[DededeCloneChris]

The 3 of them!

[thunderhero4]

you don't want lucas? then who?

he wants sonic...hurry and put sonic in...

For god, no! Hint, they are 2.

how are ice climbers close to lucas?

WAY TOO-wait, did you see the SSBM cinema?

yes, and just tell us! im not much of a guesser....hury before triforceman22 unleashes his chaos blast fury among you....

ARGH!!!!  Death to those who oppose me!!!! :P

uh oh.... :-\  its too late....

CHAOS.......







































joking. :P

:D

[DededeCloneChris]

Hello?

[thunderhero4]

Hello?

hello

[DededeCloneChris]

Ahem! The 3 of them!

[thunderhero4]

Ahem! The 3 of them!

hello?

[Retronintendodude7]

*Breaks Sonic icon trend* :P

The last two chapters were pretty good, even though that one was pretty much filler. :P Maybe you should make your chapters longer so you can have filler and still have the story progress a bit?

You're still getting better at fixing your spelling mistakes, but I still noticed a few. That stuff happens all the time, though. I even noticed a few mistakes in Echoes' fanfiction if you remember. :P

I can't wait for the next chapter. ;)