Super Smash bros. Rise of the Emissary

[Triforceman22]

*Breaks Sonic icon trend* :P

The last two chapters were pretty good, even though that one was pretty much filler. :P Maybe you should make your chapters longer so you can have filler and still have the story progress a bit?

You're still getting better at fixing your spelling mistakes, but I still noticed a few. That stuff happens all the time, though. I even noticed a few mistakes in Echoes' fanfiction if you remember. :P

I can't wait for the next chapter. ;)

No! You must join the sonic icon group! :P
anyways, thanks for the tips! :)
the reasons I keep making mistakes is that I have a retarded keyboard.
I type in P, and P won't show up on it....

[Retronintendodude7]

No! You must join the sonic icon group! :P
anyways, thanks for the tips! :)
the reasons I keep making mistakes is that I have a retarded keyboard.
I type in P, and P won't show up on it....

Meh, I'll stick with Alucard for now. :P

Maybe you should try to convince your parents to get a better keyboard if that's the problem? Or you could just find a p somewhere and copy and paste it where it needs to be put. :D

[Triforceman22]

No! You must join the sonic icon group! :P
anyways, thanks for the tips! :)
the reasons I keep making mistakes is that I have a retarded keyboard.
I type in P, and P won't show up on it....

Meh, I'll stick with Alucard for now. :P

Maybe you should try to convince your parents to get a better keyboard if that's the problem? Or you could just find a p somewhere and copy and paste it where it needs to be put. :D

lol, yeah....

Omega would go nicely with you....
Change it!!!! :D

[thunderhero4]

No! You must join the sonic icon group! :P
anyways, thanks for the tips! :)
the reasons I keep making mistakes is that I have a retarded keyboard.
I type in P, and P won't show up on it....

Meh, I'll stick with Alucard for now. :P

Maybe you should try to convince your parents to get a better keyboard if that's the problem? Or you could just find a p somewhere and copy and paste it where it needs to be put. :D

lol, yeah....

Omega would go nicely with you....
Change it!!!! :D

omega sounds like a good idea...

[DededeCloneChris]

Dude, don't forget, Omega is a killer machine!

[thunderhero4]

Dude, don't forget, Omega is a killer machine!

yep...isnt it awesome!?

[DededeCloneChris]

Dude, don't forget, Omega is a killer machine!

yep...isnt it awesome!?

A killer machine, god no.

[thunderhero4]

Dude, don't forget, Omega is a killer machine!

yep...isnt it awesome!?

A killer machine, god no.

..........

[Triforceman22]

Dude, don't forget, Omega is a killer machine!

yep...isnt it awesome!?

A killer machine, god yes!

:)

[DededeCloneChris]

Dude, don't forget, Omega is a killer machine!

yep...isnt it awesome!?

A killer machine, god NO!

:)

See?

[thunderhero4]

Dude, don't forget, Omega is a killer machine!

yep...isnt it awesome!?

A killer machine, god NO!

:)

See?

he edited your post to make it say yes, not no...

[DededeCloneChris]

Dude, don't forget, Omega is a killer machine!

yep...isnt it awesome!?

A killer machine, god NO!

:)

See?

he edited your post to make it say yes, not no...

DUH!

[Red]

*waits*
Also try to incorporate items in the story e.g Beamsword Baseball bat.

[DededeCloneChris]

Maayybbee. ::)

[Triforceman22]

sorry I havn't done a chapter in a while...

next one will be up tomorrow. :)