Super Smash bros. Rise of the Emissary

[thunderhero4]

When is the next chapter?

Well, mine is in 4 hours. ;)

Why not now? :(













:P

I was wondering the same thing :)

[DededeCloneChris]

When is the next chapter?

Well, mine is in 4 hours. ;)

Why not now? :(













:P

I was wondering the same thing :)

Hmm, ok, in 1 hour. ;)

[Red]

For real... WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?! >:(

[DededeCloneChris]

For real... WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?! >:(

Mine or Triforceman22?

[Triforceman22]

Guys, call me Ryan. It's shorter to say than Triforceman22. :P
here's new chapter you being enjoying it. K?
Good. :)

Chapter 18,

As the eight primid were about to attack, DK whirled his fist around.
He was getting ready for his signiature move.

Two Primid suddenly jumped at Peach.
The princess took out her Majenta Parasol with blinding speed, and whacked one of the attackers.
It fell to the ground.

She turned around, and kicked the other. Her high heels sticking into the creatures stomach.
it dissapeared into a cloud of purple smoke.
About three other attacked Zelda. The three were instantley set on fire from Din's fire.

As they ran around in circles screaming from the intense pain they were in, the other three leaped at DK. That was a mistake. DK, with his already charged fist, punched them with all his might.
The three subspace troops were sent flying.

They flew out of the forest's branches and were now soaring over the Japes district.
the three thought they were done... There was something else hiding in the bushes. Something that could not be seen.

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Bowser, Dedede and Diddy were returning to the rendevous point. Diddy was squirming frequentley, trying to escape the Koopa king's grasp, but to no avail.
They were now walking along a lake side. the crystal clear water shimmered in the sunlight.

Just then, they heard a whacking noise. They were startled at first, but then they looked around from where it came from. Then, Bowser spotted three figures fly into the sky.
That's DK alright... They must be in trouble, we should hurry up... he thought, as he turned to Dedede.

"We should hurry up..." bowser suggested.
Dedede nodded, and the two kings quickened thier paces.
The water in the lake started to ripple.

Bowser eyed the lake carefully, as he was running.
The ripples turned into waves. Dedede now noticed, and he was eyeing it too.
Then, a giant snake-like creature flew out of the water, and soared towards Bowser.

Dedede shrieked, as bowser took his fighting stances.
As the creature got nearer, and nearer, it opened it's mouth.
A giant blue orb appeared there. Bowser readied to move out of the way.

Without notice, it fired the blue orb of energy at Dedede!
dedede shrieked yet again, and barely jumped out of the way.
Bowser turned at his companion.

It was now the creature's chance. It eyed Diddy for about a second, and then lunged at the little monkey. It grabbed him by the arm, almost yanking it off.

It then hovered over the lake. Looking at Diddy with it's piercing black eyes.
Bowser shrieked. "Oh no! what are we supposed to do now?!" He asked.
The creature's tounge came out and licked it's lips. It was dinner time.

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As Mario and co. Soared over Big Blue, Falcon couldn't shake off the feeling that they were being followed. He turned to Marth and Red.
"Hey guys, can you open the rear door to see anything?" he asked.

"Uhhh....sure...I guess.." Red replied.
as the two walked towards the back of the flyer, Red noticed that marth hadn't taken off the tiara yet.

"When are you going to take that thing off?!" He asked impatiently.
Marth eyed red again. "I told you once, I told you twice, and i'll tell you again, I'M NOT TAKING THIS TIARA OFF!!" he yelled.

"It makes you look... Froo-froo..." Red said.
"WHAT'S THAT SUPPOSED TO MEA-" Marth was interrupted when the flyer rocked back and forth.
Falcon looked at the many screens on the dashboard. Five were flashing Red.

"Oh no..." Falcon said under his breath.
Just then, something flew up towards a nearby window. Mario was staring at it.
It looked like a mechanical bird, but something wasn't right...

Just then, another rocking happened. Another two screens flashed Red.
Marth and Red opened the back door.
Marth's cloak was blowing every where.

then they was a flat object flying towards them. Then they saw another, and another, and another. Mario got out of his seat. "Finally! Some action!" He said cheerfully as he ran toward his two companions.

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I hope you liked this one.
new chap. may be up tomorrow depending on how busy I am. :)

[Red]

One of the best chapters yet!
@Cris: This is Ryan's thread. ;)

[Triforce_Luigi]

You are getting better at this.

[Triforceman22]

You are getting better at this.

This is going to get SO much better!
were near the half way point. :)

Trust me, near the end, your going to love this. :)

[Triforce_Luigi]

I already love it. The detail has improved lately.

[Triforceman22]

I already love it. The detail has improved lately.

well, your going to love it more! :)

[Red]

I already love it. The detail has improved lately.

well, your going to love it more! :)

Impossible!  ::)

[Triforceman22]

I already love it. The detail has improved lately.

well, your going to love it more! :)

Impossible!  ::)

Nope!

At the halfway point, a new character appears! Guess who it is!

[Red]

I already love it. The detail has improved lately.

well, your going to love it more! :)

Impossible!  ::)

Nope!

At the halfway point, a new character appears! Guess who it is!

Check your pms. ;)

[DededeCloneChris]

I already love it. The detail has improved lately.

well, your going to love it more! :)

Impossible!  ::)

Nope!

At the halfway point, a new character appears! Guess who it is!

Check your pms. ;)

Lucas or either Sonic.

[Red]

I already love it. The detail has improved lately.

well, your going to love it more! :)

Impossible!  ::)

Nope!

At the halfway point, a new character appears! Guess who it is!

Check your pms. ;)

Lucas or either Sonic.

I guessed in the thread and got it right and he said it spoiled it for everyone and next time to tell him via pm. And I got it right! If anyone wants it spoiled.... Too bad! You'll have to wait! :P