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Started by Triforceman22, October 03, 2007, 12:33:08 PM

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#75
Quote from: Ridley on October 19, 2007, 04:39:09 AM
Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 19, 2007, 04:24:08 AM
Quote from: Ridley on October 18, 2007, 07:11:11 PM
Solve the cliff hangers soon please

They will be solved next chapter,
but how do you like it? :)

It is the best fanfic I ever read
Then you probably don't read a lot of fanfics. :P Anyway, I think this story is... ok. Nothing special, and I'm not even sure why this is floated, since fanfics normally aren't (And in my opinion, shouldn't be). I need to find time to read it all, though.
Holy crap all my sigs were always poop. Best leave this space alone.

Red

Quote from: LIGHTNINGSWORD on October 19, 2007, 08:38:25 PM
Quote from: Ridley on October 19, 2007, 04:39:09 AM
Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 19, 2007, 04:24:08 AM
Quote from: Ridley on October 18, 2007, 07:11:11 PM
Solve the cliff hangers soon please

They will be solved next chapter,
but how do you like it? :)

It is the best fanfic I ever read
Then you probably don't read a lot of fanfics. :P Anyway, I think this story is... ok. Nothing special, and I'm not even sure why this is floated, since fanfics normally aren't (And in my opinion, shouldn't be). I need to find time to read it all, though.
That's YOUR opinion. IMO this story is great.

Triforceman22

Quote from: LIGHTNINGSWORD on October 19, 2007, 08:38:25 PM
Quote from: Ridley on October 19, 2007, 04:39:09 AM
Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 19, 2007, 04:24:08 AM
Quote from: Ridley on October 18, 2007, 07:11:11 PM
Solve the cliff hangers soon please

They will be solved next chapter,
but how do you like it? :)

It is the best fanfic I ever read
Then you probably don't read a lot of fanfics. :P Anyway, I think this story is... ok. Nothing special, and I'm not even sure why this is floated, since fanfics normally aren't (And in my opinion, shouldn't be). I need to find time to read it all, though.

All stories are boring at the beginning,
once it's near the middle/end it will be WAY better.
Maybe you should read it too, that will help. :P

Also, Why is it so bad that this is floated?
I say who cares?
It's easier to find it now.


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

StarWindWizard7

*scratches head*, I'm not sure why this is floated either...

I didn't float this.....

Well, who ever thought it was meant to be floated, then thats there call.

I'm actually, "Iffy" about this being floated  :-\
As it's not a source for information or a contest, or something along those lines
where Threads Are usually floated.

I'll talk to, "Geno" about it.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________

On other news, I Still like the stories that are being told and I'm highly interested in it.

The way you right your story is fine, and IMO, you don't really need to go into Exact Detail.......
It's cool in some areas but it's not really needed.

Spell check/Proof read your work before you post it Always dude.
   

Geno

#79
Quote from: StarWindWizard7 on October 20, 2007, 01:04:47 PM
*scratches head*, I'm not sure why this is floated either...

I didn't float this.....

Well, who ever thought it was meant to be floated, then thats there call.

I'm actually, "Iffy" about this being floated  :-\
As it's not a source for information or a contest, or something along those lines
where Threads Are usually floated.

I'll talk to, "Geno" about it.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________

On other news, I Still like the stories that are being told and I'm highly interested in it.

The way you right your story is fine, and IMO, you don't really need to go into Exact Detail.......
It's cool in some areas but it's not really needed.

Spell check/Proof read your work before you post it Always dude.
Yes I agree. People already know and love this fanfic. It really doesn't need to be floated anymore.

Defloated.

Red

Quote from: Geno on October 20, 2007, 01:26:32 PM
Quote from: StarWindWizard7 on October 20, 2007, 01:04:47 PM
*scratches head*, I'm not sure why this is floated either...

I didn't float this.....

Well, who ever thought it was meant to be floated, then thats there call.

I'm actually, "Iffy" about this being floated  :-\
As it's not a source for information or a contest, or something along those lines
where Threads Are usually floated.

I'll talk to, "Geno" about it.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________

On other news, I Still like the stories that are being told and I'm highly interested in it.

The way you right your story is fine, and IMO, you don't really need to go into Exact Detail.......
It's cool in some areas but it's not really needed.

Spell check/Proof read your work before you post it Always dude.
Yes I agree. People already know and love this fanfic. It really doesn't need to be floated anymore.

Defloated.
But it was so easy to find! :(

Triforceman22

Sorry I havn't posted a new chapter in a while...

(I was busy.)

New chap will be up tomorrow. :)


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Red

Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 23, 2007, 05:47:22 PM
Sorry I havn't posted a new chapter in a while...

(I was busy.)

New chap will be up tomorrow. :)
Cool. :)

DededeCloneChris

Can Lucas, Sonic and the ice climbers appear please? :(

Triforceman22

Quote from: wiiboychris on October 23, 2007, 06:45:58 PM
Can Lucas, Sonic and the ice climbers appear please? :(

Gems of chaos give you any hint? ;)

Some characters might not appear.....


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

DededeCloneChris

Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 24, 2007, 04:42:08 AM
Quote from: wiiboychris on October 23, 2007, 06:45:58 PM
Can Lucas, Sonic and the ice climbers appear please? :(

Gems of chaos give you any hint? ;)

Some characters might not appear.....

Hmm, gems of chaos, does that means Midna will appear?

Triforceman22

Quote from: wiiboychris on October 24, 2007, 11:02:33 AM
Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 24, 2007, 04:42:08 AM
Quote from: wiiboychris on October 23, 2007, 06:45:58 PM
Can Lucas, Sonic and the ice climbers appear please? :(

Gems of chaos give you any hint? ;)

Some characters might not appear.....

Hmm, gems of chaos, does that means Midna will appear?

How did you know?! :D


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Triforceman22

well I finally got time to write so here's part 2 of chapter 9.
also for the subspace video's, this is now my version of the story, so sorry if this is a little diffrent from the real deal...
well, anyways, enjoy! :)

Chapter 9 part 2, Duel

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Sparks flew in the air, as Link and the figure's sword clashed together violentley.
The two struggled to get free, and in one quick move, they both jumped away from each other.
As they caught thier breath, Link looked up at his attacker.

"Who are you?!" He yelled.
The man's blade suddenly burst into flames.
Link's eyes widned in awe, as the man moved towards him.

"What are you doing in this forbidden part of my country?!" asked the man, as he raised his burning blade towards Link.

"I..i'm just travelling through here!" Link said innocentley.
"Hmph, this is a forbidden land, and now, YOU MUST DIE!" He yelled, as he lunged towards the hylian hero.

Link readied his hylian shield, and waited.
In a flash, the man's sword came hammering down on the metal shield.
Link lost his balance, and fell to the ground.

As he tried to get back up, Link felt a sudden sharp pain in his right arm.
He looked at it, and blood started to gush out of a large gash that was now located there.
"But... i shielded!" Link yelled in anger.

Then, Link soon found out why it didn't block.
His shield was sliced in two.
Link's eye twitched as he looked up at the mysterious man.

"Too bad..." He said, as readied his sword.
"Prepare for your punishment!"

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"So, what are you doing here?" Asked peach.
"I was training in my strong hold, when all of a sudden, an explosion occured...."
Meta knight said in his low-toned voice...

"What?!... Who are you?" Asked Meta knight, as a green cloaked entity appeared from the smoke.

"you may call me the ancient minister, and I am here to take your ship!" yelled the figure in victory.
"Well, your going to have to get through me first!" Meta knight said as he readied Master, his golden sword.

"Heh..heh... I don't need to!" said the figure, "i'll just let my army take you out for me!"
"What do you mean?" meta knight asked, as he raised his sword.
The figure then let out a high pitched screech, and in a second, a giant monstrosity came out. he had two giant sickles located on his round body.

"Greap, take him out!" yelled the minister. The giant rushed meta knight. The two sickles came crashing down on the warp star knight. He easlily dodged though, and jumped into the air.
He raised his golden sword, and impaled the monster in the head. Meta knight touched the ground just as the monster exploded.

Then, he felt the ground shake violentley.
"No...." Meta knight said, as he rushed outside.

Once he got outside, he caught a glimpse of his halbred, flying away.
"darn...." meta knight said under his breath, as he saw his ship soar farther away in the sky


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TO BE CONTINUED..................

Sorry this was short.
Everything will be in part 3.
Yay for more cliffhangers. :P


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Depster

Darn you!!!!!!!!! lol, keep it up man! pretty good so far!



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Red

AWSOME! ;D I wanna know who the guy with the fire blade is, can't wait to find out. :D