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Project Ghost Ring

Started by Spam, July 10, 2008, 08:31:48 PM

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This is a little project of mine called Ghost Ring which I one day hope to be made into a book.


Ghost Ring Outline

Begin

I.   Marcella Gray is killed and turned into a ghost trapped inside of a cog.
II.   Aaron Roads on a school field trip to an old house finds the cog
III.   Douglas Smith in high position in the government learns
          about the cog and wishes to acquire it for his own reasons

Middle

IV.   The cog turns into a ring and the ghost can return to the form of a human for one hour
V.   Douglas gets government agents to steal the ring but they fail
VI.   Douglas and Aaron meet each other

End

VII.   Aaron and Marcella work together and break in to an important building and information
VIII.   Marcella kills Douglas but in the process destroys herself
Edited: 7/29/08


Ghost Ring Information

Aaron Roads
Age: 14
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Blue
Description: Medium height, smart, kind, funny, medium built
Place in Story: Main Character

Marcella Gray
Age: (Before Death) 32 (After Death) 232
Hair Color: (BD) Black (AD) Gray
Eye Color: Green
Description: Tall height, smart, not very social, quite, loves to read
Place in Story: The Ghost

Douglas Smith
Age: 46
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Description: Tall height, smart, manipulative, ill-temper, medium built
Place in Story: The Villain

Jonas Larks
Age: 14
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Brown
Description: Medium height, medium intelligent, easy going person, lazy 
Place in Story: Aaron?s Friend

Edited: 7/29/08

Rules of Ghosthood and Ghost Rings

?   If a ghost is captured into an object then it can only be Released by a living human.
?   The living human who Releases the ghost shall be known as a Ghost Owner.
?   If the Ghost Owner is killed, shot, wounded, ect. The ghost shall receive the effects of this and the Owner will be unharmed.
?   The object turns into a Ghost Ring in the period of three weeks after the Release.
?   The ghost can Resume human form for an hour every day when the Ghost Ring is fully Transformed.
?   Ghost can lift, move, pull, ect. object from inside the Ring if the Owner tells the ghost to.
?   If the Ghost Ring is destroyed then there are possible ways of Recreating the Ring.
?   The Owner can choose to Reveal the ghost to others.
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Ghost Ring Draft #1

1. The Last of Marcella Gray
In the Gray mansion Marcella Gray was just finishing her late dinner of steamed lobster.  After her dinner she was thinking ?I should invite somebody over for lunch one afternoon.?  Not that she had any friend of course; for she was quite an interesting person in the fact that she seldom went out of her house.  So after her thoughts Miss Gray headed up to her room.  While Marcella was walking she heard a strange noise coming from a clock.  So she decided to inspect the peculiar sound; opening the grandfather Marcella saw that a cog in the clock had come loose and cause the clock to malfunction.  She thought of calling one of her many butlers to come and fix it, but instead Marcella deposited the cog into one of her many pockets.  Finally she had climbed all 463 stairs (of which she once counted.) and turn on her bedroom light.  There Marcella saw a figure in the room; suddenly a bullet shot rang out in the night follow by a scream?
2. A Boring Old Field Trip
   ?And that was what some people believe happened to Miss Marcella W. Gray.? The tour guide said, in his low monotone voice.  Aaron Roads was bored out of his mind from this stupid field trip already; he should of just listen to his friend Jonas and stayed home today.  This was a summer program ?Touring America? had been a real dumb thing to begin with; he should have never had let his parent sign him up in the first place.  Today they where touring a two hundred year old house that had belonged to some lady who either commit suicide or was murdered.  While walking around the house he finds the room where Miss Marce something or other died.  In the room he looks out the window and sees a light reflecting off of something on the ground.  He starts to walk out of the room to go take a look at it but he trips over something.  Landing with a thud he gets up a sees what he tripped on a rusted cog that looks like it years old.  So he picks it up and takes it as a souvenir.