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Started by Viewtifulboy, February 26, 2013, 11:40:28 AM

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Viewtifulboy

...... That wasn't a reaction image. |:

Silverhawk79

...Advertising isn't really allowed here, y'know. But I'll let it slide because who cares

Custom


Quote from: Viewtifulboy on March 11, 2013, 07:28:20 AM
Good job! I, Viewtifulboy, declare you the CHAMPION!

I'm the official winner of the Viewtiful Victory roleplay championship!

Viewtifulboy

Hey!  That's the image I posted to describe K''s disposition! :)

Flying Chickens

Quote from: Custom on February 26, 2013, 10:18:37 PM
your writing is a little long winded for subject but i mean grammar wise and everything it's fine
it's just a little dull, maybe because you're talking about a fighting game which isn't interesting to read about unless you've played the series.

also, i like the use of images, but you could really do without the dumb stuff such as naruto reaction images
keep it relevant, you know?
Also, for someone who claims to be going to school for Journalism, you're forgetting a key part of being a journalist.

No one gives a intercourse  about your opinion.

Your blog is riddled with "and I say" or "which seems to me" and poop like that. You're a kid who played a few games. You're not weighing it against anything for comparison. You're not taking an objective look at a series. You're going gaga and taking the part of a gaming guru. Reading through the blog makes it clear that you're an inexperienced, biased teenager trying to get your cock inside of a video game. Pull it out and go outside. Maybe smoke some weed.

Viewtifulboy

The moment I red that last sentence, I threw everything you typed in that post beforehand out the window, because right there, you invalidated yourself.

Flying Chickens

Quote from: Viewtifulboy on February 26, 2013, 10:36:46 PM
The moment I red that last sentence, I threw everything you typed in that post beforehand out the window, because right there, you invalidated yourself.
It's too bad you red it and didn't read it. It's a lot better as language than colour.

Silverhawk79

Quote from: Viewtifulboy on February 26, 2013, 10:36:46 PM
The moment I red that last sentence, I threw everything you typed in that post beforehand out the window, because right there, you invalidated yourself.
Weed isn't the root of all evil, you know. Even I have partaken in it a time or two, and does that make all my accomplishments invalid?

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Quote from: Viewtifulboy on February 26, 2013, 10:36:46 PM
The moment I red that last sentence, I threw everything you typed in that post beforehand out the window, because right there, you invalidated yourself.

He's right about saying I though. In formal writing you want to absolutely avoid stating your opinion with sentences like "I believe" or "and I think"
but since this is a blog I'm sure people won't really care
it just depends on how seriously you take this blog, I guess.

Quote from: Viewtifulboy on March 11, 2013, 07:28:20 AM
Good job! I, Viewtifulboy, declare you the CHAMPION!

I'm the official winner of the Viewtiful Victory roleplay championship!

Syncopathic

dude he's like the staunch conservative. nothing you say will get through to him.

Viewtifulboy

Quote from: Silverhawk79 on February 26, 2013, 10:38:12 PM
Weed isn't the root of all evil, you know. Even I have partaken in it a time or two, and does that make all my accomplishments invalid?
If you weren't smart enough to stop, yes.

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Quote from: Viewtifulboy on March 11, 2013, 07:28:20 AM
Good job! I, Viewtifulboy, declare you the CHAMPION!

I'm the official winner of the Viewtiful Victory roleplay championship!

Viewtifulboy

Quote from: Custom on February 26, 2013, 10:43:03 PM
why though?
Because that would make him a smoker.... And he wouldn't be a "him".

Silverhawk79

Quote from: Viewtifulboy on February 26, 2013, 10:42:16 PM
If you weren't smart enough to stop, yes.
I smoke very occasionally. Like, once every 6 months.

Custom

Quote from: Viewtifulboy on February 26, 2013, 10:44:20 PM
Because that would make him a smoker.... And he wouldn't be a "him".

What if he ingested marijuana without smoking it? Is that okay in your book?

Quote from: Viewtifulboy on March 11, 2013, 07:28:20 AM
Good job! I, Viewtifulboy, declare you the CHAMPION!

I'm the official winner of the Viewtiful Victory roleplay championship!