Super Smash bros. Rise of the Emissary

[DededeCloneChris]

I already love it. The detail has improved lately.

well, your going to love it more! :)

Impossible!  ::)

Nope!

At the halfway point, a new character appears! Guess who it is!

Check your pms. ;)

Lucas or either Sonic.

I guessed in the thread and got it right and he said it spoiled it for everyone and next time to tell him via pm. And I got it right! If anyone wants it spoiled.... Too bad! You'll have to wait! :P

I'm thinking is either Shadow or Stafy.

[Red]

You should add in items and assist trophies.

[DededeCloneChris]

You should add in items and assist trophies.

I writing the next cahpter right now!

[Red]

You should add in items and assist trophies.

I writing the next cahpter right now!

For future reference, if I post in this thread, I'm talking to Ryan. ;)

[Triforceman22]

You should add in items and assist trophies.

I writing the next cahpter right now!

For future reference, if I post in this thread, I'm talking to Ryan. ;)

I will add items in the last part of the story, and in flashbacks (From the melee tourney)
:)

[Red]

You should add in items and assist trophies.

I writing the next cahpter right now!

For future reference, if I post in this thread, I'm talking to Ryan. ;)

I will add items in the last part of the story, and in flashbacks (From the melee tourney)
:)

Cool, what about assist trophies?

[DededeCloneChris]

You should add in items and assist trophies.

I writing the next cahpter right now!

For future reference, if I post in this thread, I'm talking to Ryan. ;)

I will add items in the last part of the story, and in flashbacks (From the melee tourney)
:)

Cool, what about assist trophies?

Good idea.

[Triforceman22]

You should add in items and assist trophies.

I writing the next cahpter right now!

For future reference, if I post in this thread, I'm talking to Ryan. ;)

I will add items in the last part of the story, and in flashbacks (From the melee tourney)
:)

Cool, what about assist trophies?

Good idea.

it'll be kinda hard to implant AT's into this alread, since everyone is on the move...
so, I doubt thier appearance.
Sorry.

[Red]

You should add in items and assist trophies.

I writing the next cahpter right now!

For future reference, if I post in this thread, I'm talking to Ryan. ;)

I will add items in the last part of the story, and in flashbacks (From the melee tourney)
:)

Cool, what about assist trophies?

Good idea.

it'll be kinda hard to implant AT's into this alread, since everyone is on the move...
so, I doubt thier appearance.
Sorry.

That's fine. :(






























:P

[Triforceman22]

Chapter 19 Approaches!

it will be up sometime in the afternoon. :)

[Red]

Chapter 19 Approaches!

it will be up sometime in the afternoon. :)

Cool. 8)

[Retronintendodude7]

I missed three chapters? :O Sorry about that, Ryan...

The chapters were pretty good, I liked how the chapters are getting longer. :) You're adding more comedy into the fanfiction, which is never a bad thing. I can tell that Marth's tiara is probably going to be a running gag in your fic, like Link's ears in your other fanfiction. :P

I think that your chapters could be a bit longer so the story can progress faster than it is. The length of your chapters is fine right now, especially for people who miss a few :P, but it's just a suggestion.

I'll wait for the next chapter to come up. :)

[Ridley]

I missed three chapters? :O Sorry about that, Ryan...

The chapters were pretty good, I liked how the chapters are getting longer. :) You're adding more comedy into the fanfiction, which is never a bad thing. I can tell that Marth's tiara is probably going to be a running gag in your fic, like Link's ears in your other fanfiction. :P

I think that your chapters could be a bit longer so the story can progress faster than it is. The length of your chapters is fine right now, especially for people who miss a few :P, but it's just a suggestion.

I'll wait for the next chapter to come up. :)

I think the legnth of the chapters is just fine in my opinion

[Eizweir]

How dare you insult Marth!  >:(

[Triforceman22]

How dare you insult Marth!  >:(

:)