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Generally Speaking => Power On => Topic started by: Zovistograt on December 17, 2007, 03:41:18 PM

Title: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Zovistograt on December 17, 2007, 03:41:18 PM
Almost 10 years ago, I wrote and illustrated my first story that was made into a second-rate book by the awesome printing press in my elementary school.  I'd like to share it with you now ^_^

(http://www.hotlinkfiles.com/files/737196_bc66n/1cover.png)

(http://www.hotlinkfiles.com/files/737197_qju9w/2firstpage.png)

(http://www.hotlinkfiles.com/files/737198_mqhht/3secondpage.png)

(http://www.hotlinkfiles.com/files/737199_zadz8/4thirdpage.png)

(http://www.hotlinkfiles.com/files/737200_ygeqg/5end.png)

Now post some old crap that you did in elementary school if you have any :D
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Tupin on December 17, 2007, 03:42:39 PM
Good writing for a 7 year old.
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Pikagirl_777 on December 17, 2007, 03:44:37 PM
Aww...it's so cute. ^_^

I wished I saved some of my stuff I wrote when I was little.  :(
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: えっちーせんぱい on December 17, 2007, 03:46:55 PM
/me posts old weird isometric drawing

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v676/gf1991/Citythingy.jpg
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: ZGDK on December 17, 2007, 03:48:52 PM
Why's you have to censor your name, huh? Now I can't stalk you.

Anyway I have these old journals from 1'st grade where I'd write The Adventures of Rick and Dick. My first foray into writing.
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on December 17, 2007, 03:50:16 PM
I nominate this book for a Pulitzer Prize.
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Zovistograt on December 17, 2007, 04:17:40 PM
Quote from: Blaziken on December 17, 2007, 03:46:55 PM
/me posts old weird isometric drawing

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v676/gf1991/Citythingy.jpg
that's not isometric, that's oblique :P
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: えっちーせんぱい on December 17, 2007, 04:18:39 PM
Quote from: Zovistograt on December 17, 2007, 04:17:40 PM
Quote from: Blaziken on December 17, 2007, 03:46:55 PM
/me posts old weird isometric drawing

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v676/gf1991/Citythingy.jpg
that's not isometric, that's oblique :P
I was told it was isometric..
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Zovistograt on December 17, 2007, 04:21:19 PM
Quote from: Blaziken on December 17, 2007, 04:18:39 PM
Quote from: Zovistograt on December 17, 2007, 04:17:40 PM
Quote from: Blaziken on December 17, 2007, 03:46:55 PM
/me posts old weird isometric drawing

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v676/gf1991/Citythingy.jpg
that's not isometric, that's oblique :P
I was told it was isometric..
lulz, isometric is when a cube drawn is symmetric in that one edge is facing you and the top face is an isoceles rhombus.  Oblique is the style where a cube is simply a square with 45 degree extensions.

It's still wonderful either way ^_^
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Trini on December 17, 2007, 04:22:36 PM
I lol'd. But I don't save any stuff for that long.
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Tsu on December 17, 2007, 05:18:57 PM
Not bad, Zovis.
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: sleepin_dude_99 on December 17, 2007, 08:16:52 PM
Win for using Enviro.
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: LinkXLR on December 17, 2007, 08:25:24 PM
THat was hilarious. You should post this other places. :D
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Tupin on December 17, 2007, 08:26:12 PM
Quote from: LinkXLR on December 17, 2007, 08:25:24 PM
THat was hilarious. You should post this other places. :D
Or better yet, continue the story! :O
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Custom on December 17, 2007, 10:16:41 PM
I cried when he died.  :'(
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Rius on December 17, 2007, 10:23:48 PM
That's eerily good. 0_o I have some stuff from those years... when I had a heart. :(
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Mystic on December 17, 2007, 10:43:33 PM
Awesome

Quote from: NINNIN6 on December 17, 2007, 10:23:48 PM
when I had a heart. :(
Lies
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: HeroOfTimeO0 on December 18, 2007, 10:41:24 AM
Old keepsakes are fun aren't they? :P

I made this in 3rd grade:

[spoiler](http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb242/HeroOfTime0O/scan0005.jpg)[/spoiler]

[spoiler](http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb242/HeroOfTime0O/scan0002.jpg)[/spoiler]

[spoiler](http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb242/HeroOfTime0O/scan0003.jpg)[/spoiler]

[spoiler](http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb242/HeroOfTime0O/scan0004.jpg)[/spoiler]

[spoiler](http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb242/HeroOfTime0O/scan0006.jpg)[/spoiler]

[spoiler](http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb242/HeroOfTime0O/scan0001.jpg)[/spoiler]

[spoiler](http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb242/HeroOfTime0O/scan0007.jpg)[/spoiler]

[spoiler](http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb242/HeroOfTime0O/scan0008.jpg)[/spoiler]

That's how most of the stories I wrote back then ended. :P
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: HOME_RUN_BAT on December 18, 2007, 10:48:18 AM
i threw away all my stuff from when i was little
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Java on December 18, 2007, 11:14:32 AM
Why did the straw have to die? T_T

Quote from: HeroOfTimeO0 on December 18, 2007, 10:41:24 AM
Old keepsakes are fun aren't they? :P

I made this in 3rd grade:

That's how most of the stories I wrote back then ended. :P
XD

That was funny.
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: HeroOfTimeO0 on December 18, 2007, 12:59:34 PM
Quote from: Java_Java on December 18, 2007, 11:14:32 AM
Why did the straw have to die? T_T

Quote from: HeroOfTimeO0 on December 18, 2007, 10:41:24 AM
Old keepsakes are fun aren't they? :P

I made this in 3rd grade:

That's how most of the stories I wrote back then ended. :P
XD

That was funny.

I made a Christmas-y story in the same grade and I got an award. :P
Pretty much the same ending though. xD
Title: Re: A story I wrote and illustrated in 1st grade (large images warning)
Post by: Zovistograt on December 18, 2007, 01:02:04 PM
Quote from: HeroOfTimeO0 on December 18, 2007, 12:59:34 PM
Quote from: Java_Java on December 18, 2007, 11:14:32 AM
Why did the straw have to die? T_T

Quote from: HeroOfTimeO0 on December 18, 2007, 10:41:24 AM
Old keepsakes are fun aren't they? :P

I made this in 3rd grade:

That's how most of the stories I wrote back then ended. :P
XD

That was funny.

I made a Christmas-y story in the same grade and I got an award. :P
Pretty much the same ending though. xD
it is a particularly easy way to end any story...I mean, here's two options:


Option 2 is much easier to write.