This is my first shot at post my Fan Fic here. Enjoy!
Prolouge: The Letter
It was a normal day in the Musroom Kingdom. Mario was fixing a leak in the sink, Luigi was watching TV, the princess was still getting ready, and Yoshi was taking a nap with a box of cookies in hand. Everything seemed to be normal but, to Luigi, it was too normal.
"Hey Mario!" Luigi called out.
"What is it now Luigi?" Mario answered as he was testing the sink.
"Have you noticed that nothing has happened? I mean...Bowser would have kidnapped the princess by now and everything is all...peaceful"
"Well, shouldn't it be that way? Just think of it...We get a break."
Night soon came. It seemed eerily quite and not even the wind made a sound. Luigi was looking out the window, being catious of everything that moved. He noticed a little figure running towards the castle and he soon got the feeling that this wouldn't be good. There was a knock on the door and Luigi went down the stairs to answer it. Luigi slowly opened the large door and before him stood a Hammer Brother.
"This (huff) came in (huff) the mail (huff)." The Hammer Brother said in a exhausted tone.
"A hammer Brother? What are you doing here?" Luigi asked, being suspicious.
"I'd never though I'd have to be askin' this but...Can you help us?"
"Help!? What do mean by help!? Bowswer would never ask for help."
"Consider this a one time deal lacky. Just read the stinkin' letter and THEN you find out what I'm talkin' about. Kapeesh?" The Hammer brother snapped. Luigi snatched the letter from the hammer brother's hand. He opened the letter and read the paper inside it. It read:
From here on out, this land is under my rule! You have exactly one hour to evacuate. You have been warned
Luigi looked mindlessly at the paper.
"I told you!" The hammer brother said as he point up at Luigi.
Luigi forgot that the hammer brother was there and he slammed the door on the hammer brother's face and quickly went to tell Mario.
1st.Get a title when you can
2nd.Spelling is very good,maybe 1 error.
3rd.Punctuation also pretty good.
4th.I like the idea of Bowser coming to the Mario Bros. for help.
Quote from: Pokemaster944794 on January 12, 2008, 12:01:49 PM
1st.Get a title.
2nd.Use correct sp.
3rd.Use correct punctuation.
4th.I like the idea of Bowser coming to the Mario Bros. for help.
1) She hasn't thought of one yet.
2) Other than "Prologue", I don't see any spelling mistakes.
3) Only a few.
4) It's her story. She'll do what she wants.
Though it was a bit short, it's a prologue. I think it was good.
Quote from: LightningSword on January 12, 2008, 12:39:58 PM
Quote from: Pokemaster944794 on January 12, 2008, 12:01:49 PM
1st.Get a title.
2nd.Use correct sp.
3rd.Use correct punctuation.
4th.I like the idea of Bowser coming to the Mario Bros. for help.
1) He hasn't thought of one yet.
2) Other than "Prologue", I don't see any spelling mistakes.
3) Only a few.
4) It's his story. He'll do what he wants.
Though it was a bit short, it's a prologue. I think it was good.
True,good fic....
Quote from: Pokemaster944794 on January 12, 2008, 12:44:16 PM
Quote from: LightningSword on January 12, 2008, 12:39:58 PM
Quote from: Pokemaster944794 on January 12, 2008, 12:01:49 PM
1st.Get a title.
2nd.Use correct sp.
3rd.Use correct punctuation.
4th.I like the idea of Bowser coming to the Mario Bros. for help.
1) He hasn't thought of one yet.
2) Other than "Prologue", I don't see any spelling mistakes.
3) Only a few.
4) It's his story. He'll do what he wants.
Though it was a bit short, it's a prologue. I think it was good.
True,good fic....
um...I'm a girl...Sorry I haven't thought of a title yet, I just can't find one for it.. This is just the prolouge so of course it'll be short.
take your time....and if you have to,combine 2 short chapters with a connecting sentence into 1 good chapter.
Here's chapter one :)
Chapter 1: The Journey begins
"One hour to evacuate!? What is this all about luigi?" Mario asked in a confused manner.
"Well, if I knew, I would've told you but, all I could tell you is that it's not a threat from Bowser." Luigi said.
"How would you know?" Mario asked.
"I know because a hammer brother handed me this letter and asked if we could help them. Who knows what it could be. It could be some sort of alien life form or someting. "
Mario looked at Luigi as if he were crazy.
"You need to cut down on the tv. Plus, Bowser always sends us this type of stuff. He has one of his useless minions deliver it and pretend that it's not them. He's predictable like that." Mario said.
"Predictable? He hasn't even captured the princess and that's his basic daily routine. I think there's something on the bottom" Luigi said as he took the paper from Mario. "It has all these numbers. It's alien writing see?" Luigi pointed to the bottom of the paper.
"That's the date. This is obviously Bowser's scheme can't you tell? Look, it says clearly that THIS LAND IS UNDER MY RULE. He always says that. We'll go over there, and settle things out like we aways do." Mario said as he began walking towards the door.
"I still think it's an alien..." Luigi muttered as he folded the piece of paper and put it in his pocket. Mario exited the door and Luigi, not paying attention, ran into the wall near it.
"Now I could've sworn there was a door here." Luigi said with a puzzled look on his face. Mario slammed his palm to his forehead in frustration, grabbed Luigi and pulled him through the door way.
"The quicker we get there, the sooner we can stop Bowser." Mario said.
"Hey you two aren't leaving without me are you?" The both of them turned around and saw Peach standing at the door way.
"See I told you he didn't capture her!" Luigi said as if he trying to make a point.
"Well of course Bowser didn't capture me. He always captures me on the weekends." Peach said. Mario's expression dropped.
"You knew that all along? So all of those times you got captured, you knew about it and could've prvented it?" Mario asked dumb foundedly.
"Of course." Peach said.
"Then why didn't you?"
"Because it gets boring in here."
"Look, we got a letter saying this land has been taken over." Mario began.
"Yeah and we think that an a..." Mario put his hand over Luigi's mouth to make him be quiet.
"We think that BOWSER'S behind it." Mario finished the sentence. "A hammer brother sent it but, this trick has been played before."
"Well, it's my land so I'll go along." Peach said.
"I was think more like Luigi and I go by ourselves and Toad will be on guard along with Yoshi so you hopefully don't get captured." Mario said as he tried to be as calm as possible.
"Toad isn't a very good guard and Yoshi is sleeping." Peach said.
"She's got a point.Remember the last time toad was put on guard, he got distracted by a penny and the princess got captured...again?" Luigi said.
"Fine, you can come too but, I'm only doing this so I don't have to waste my time trying to save you when you knew you were going to get captured in the first place." Mario said, hoping for the best.
"Trying to make sure she doesn't get captured is a hand full." Luigi said.
"What do you mean by that?" Mario asked.
"Well if you ask me, she's a few tacos short of a combination plate if you know what I mean."
"No I don't know."
"She's not all there in the head. Y'know...She's not too bright." Luigi whispered.
"All we have to do is hope that she doesn't. If she doesn't, it'll be history in the making." Mario said as he fixed his hat.
Good chapter.........no need to combine.
Quote from: Pokemaster944794 on January 12, 2008, 02:49:20 PM
Good chapter.........no need to combine.
Thanks. This is only the beginning so it gets better. I need write down the second chapter before I post it here. It could take a while but, it will definatley be today though (I have it pre written but, I'm making better)
o.k........(nice taco cameo)...P.M. me if Bowser is behind it..
Chapter 2: The second request.
"I gave them the letter sir!" A hammer brother said as he came running down the hall of the throne room. In the chair, Bowser sat clutching the armrests on the sides of the chair. The hammer brother quickly stopped and stood in front of bowser.
"What are you waiting for? Tell me what he said!" Bowser said in a gruff tone.
"Well, it wasn't Mario who answered." The hammer brother said as he backed off a bit.
"Then who did!?" By the sound of Bowsers voice, the hammer brother could tell that he was getting impatient.
"The lacky answered the door sir!" The hammer brother said as he backed off a little.
"What did HE say then!?" Bowser asked as he gripped the armrests more tightly.
"He didn't say much of anything. He was more asking why you had asked them for help." The hammer brother said.
"What kind of answer is that!? I gave you a simple job and you can't even do it!!? All you had to do was..." Bowser didn't finish as something else had caught his attention.
"What with the bandage on your nose?" Bowser asked.
"Err...After he read the paper that was in the evelope, he slammed the door on my face...Well more on my nose but, you know what I mean." Bowser rolled his eyes in annoyance.
"Did you tell him who was it from. I gave explicit directions to tell him!" Bowser asked more impatient than before.
"Erm...No." The hammer brother answered in a lighter tone of voice.
"You idiot!!! I will not be made a fool of do you understand me!!! You better make sure they know who sent that letter!!!" Bowser raised his voiced and a small bit of fire came out.
"Y..Yes sir! I will make sure they know. I will do my duty as a messenger and..."
"Just shut up and GO!!!" Bowser demaned as he blew fire and the hammer brother ran as fast as he could to avoid getting burned.
MEAN WHILE...
"Okay so here's the plan." Mario began. "All we have to do is the usual Luigi and princess...I have no idea what you will do but, I'll get back on that. Anyway on a more important note, this will be possibly the easiest problem we'll ever face. Bowser doesn't have any of his minions out and about, so it's just smooth sailing from here."
"You're making it sound easier than it actually is. Sure, there are no enemies here but, it's still quite a long way to walk." Luigi said.
"What are you talking about? It's right in front of us." Mario said as he looked ahead.
"Seriously? How can this be? It was right here?" Luigi asked.
"We past the time away mostly because you were complaining the whole way." Peach said.
"Let's go inside and.." Mario was cut off by the sound of the castle door opening. "The door just opened for us.."
Through the doorway came the same hammer brother with some fire behind him.
"Holy cow!Thank god you're here! I thought I would have to find you!" The hammer brother said with a sign of relief.
"Umm. Were you looking for me or what?" Mario asked.
"Yeah. Ok. The letter wasn't from Bowser. This time we actually do need your help." The hammer brother said.
"Are you trying to say that Bowser isn't behind this?" Luigi asked.
"Uh huh!"
"Would you mind telling us who did?" Peach said.
"Give me time to catch my breath! I almost got my tail torched back there!" The hammer brother said as he pointed to the door which was scorched.
"We should care...Why?" Mario asked.
"Well you would be running for your life too if you had King Bowser blowing fire at you. Then again, you have had tha happen to you. Honestly how do you do it?"
"Just get to the point." Mario said.
"Fine...Some yahoo though it would be all fine and dandy to take over our land." The koopa brother said.
"Go on." Peach said.
"Now king Bowser can't even find the time to capture her since we're looking out for whatever might happen in an hour."
"So Bowser's not behind this?" Luigi asked.
"Did you not just here me?" The koopa brother looked at Luigi awkwardly.
"So what should we do?" Peach asked.
"I don't know, you think of something!" The koopa brother said as he went back inside the castle.
"I have a feeling that maybe it's just something to cover up their scheme." Mario said suspiciously.
"We'll find out sooner or later. It would either be the easy or the hard way but, we will find out." Luigi said as all three of them proceeded to the castle door.
Quote from: Pokemaster944794 on January 12, 2008, 12:01:49 PM
1st.Get a title.
2nd.Use correct sp.
3rd.Use correct punctuation.
4th.I like the idea of Bowser coming to the Mario Bros. for help.
Dude... you are in no place to talk about grammar. Or anything about criticizing.
Quote from: Joeofmars on January 12, 2008, 07:53:38 PM
Quote from: Pokemaster944794 on January 12, 2008, 12:01:49 PM
1st.Get a title.
2nd.Use correct sp.
3rd.Use correct punctuation.
4th.I like the idea of Bowser coming to the Mario Bros. for help.
Dude... you are in no place to talk about grammar. Or anything about criticizing.
I'm not criticizing....wait a sec..
wow! Sweet fanfic! ;D
Chapter three is finnaly up. ;)
Chapter 3:
"Well! Did you tell him!?" Bowser impatiently asked.
"Why yes sir, I sure did." The hammer brother said with a large grin on his face.
"Okay then, what did he say!?" Bowser was drumming his claws on the armrests.
"They didn't say much. Some of the questions that were asked was..." The hammer brother noticed that Bowser didn't care about the questions. "How 'bout I just skip the questions?"
"That would be more of a productive use of my time know would it?"
"Of course. I'm pretty sure I made it quite convincing about the letter. I didn't even had to give out any names." The hamer brother again had a large grin on his face.
"What did you just say? Did you say you didn't even have to give out any names?" Bowser asked as he leand forward.
"Yup! Convincing, ain't I?"
"You Moron! You were SUPPOSED to say the name!" Bowser yelled.
"I was? I thought all I had to do was make sure they leave."
"I said that you had to tell them who send it! The plan was to say that I didn't send it since you were stupid enough to forget to say it last time!"
"I didn't forget! It just didn't cime to my head at that moment!"
"In other words, you forgot! Now make sure he doesn't get in here and bother me! If you forget to do this, you know very well what the consequences will be!!!" Bowser roared in anger.
"Yes sir! I will do my duty as a..."
"Go already and stop wasting more my valuable time!"
The hammer brother quickly ran to teh entrance door to do as he was told.
"Make sure he doesn't come inside. Make sure he dosen't come inside." The hammer brother repeated his objective and stood by the door. He then noticed that Mario, Luigi, and Peach were already inside.
"Crap! I was supposed to prevent you from coming in! And what do you do? You come in without warning so know I might just get the worst consequence of all! Thank you very much!" The hammer brother said as he pointed his finger at Mario.
"You never said we weren't allowed to." Luigi said.
"Even if I said it, you would've done it anyways!"
"He's right. There's not one time we ever did pay attention to them." Mario said.
"I suggest you get out Mario. King Bowser isn't in a very good mood right now and I'm sure that he wouldn't want to put up with you again." The hammer brother said as he pointed to the door.
"Wait...All three of you came in...He only said to stop Mario from coming in. He never said to stop you two. Stay right there while I ask if I was supposed to stop you guys also." The hammer brother ran as quickly as he could to the throne room.
"Well, it's not like he'll do anything so let's just go." Mario said. The three continued to walk to the throne room.
"You came here here just to ask me a stupid question like that!?!" Bowser asked as he quickly got up from the chair.
"Technically, there sin't such thing as a stupid question..." The hammer brother said, slowly creeping away from Bowser.
"ANY QUESTION THAT COMES OUT OF YOU'RE MOUTH IS STUPID QUESTION!" Bowser grabbed the hammer brother and held him up to his face.
Make sure NONE of them come..." Bowser stopped and noticed that all three were standing in front of the door way.
"See what you did!!! You let them have a chance to get in!!!" Bowser yelled as he tighten his grip. He then dropped the hammer brother.
"What do you think you're doin' here!?" Bowser asked aggitatingly. "If you're wondering about the letter, I didn't send so there!"
How do we know that it wasn't you?" Mario asked.
"Because it just wasn't! You want proof? I don't write that neat and I never right such threats like that!" bowser said. All three of them looked at Bowser in a way that questioned his answer.
"Ok maybe I do that a few times..." They all gave him the same look again.
"Fine I do that all the time I make a threat but, what enemy doesn't?"
"I can name a few." Peach said.
"Ah what do you know?. You don't even know your right from left!" Bowser said as he turn towrds her. "I haven't captured her yet so that also might give you a hint!"
"You have done this before." Luigi said.
"You shut up you waste of air!" Bowser demanded.
"If you didn't do it, tell us who did so we don't get the idea that you did do it." Mario requested.
"I don't really know him. He didn't show himself but, he did threaten to destroy my castle or maybe just take control of it. I tell ya...I don't want to go through the whole getting my castle back thing again. That was bad enough."
"Go on..." Mario said.
"Be patient wil ya! I have get my head all cleared up from a few minute ago!"
"Well your..."Peach began.
"Intern..." The hammer brother said in a displeased tone.
"You're intern wasn't much of help so, what do you expect us to do?"
"I don't know! You're the one's who always foil my plans so you geniuses figure one out and you better have one by an hour! Now leave before I change my mind in letting you guys go easily!"
All three left the throne room and head for the exit.
"I sitll think he's behind it." Mario said.
"Yeah. he's not that good at covering himself up but, I however, think it's aliens who are planning this." Luigi said as he took out the piece of paper from his pocket and pointed to the date.
"Let's just figure out a plan but, we'll make sure that it will be effective for who ever it is." Mario said.
Quote from: thunderhero4 on January 14, 2008, 05:39:27 PM
wow! Sweet fanfic! ;D
Thanks, Chapter four (I hope) would be up tomarrow!
(Sigh) I know it was a while since I last posted this story but anyway, here's chapter four(Which is by far THE shortest chapter I will post. It's like that for a reason)
Chapter 4: The Plan
The hammer brother stood silent and watched Bowser pace back and forth.
"What are you looking at!!!" Bowser scowled.
"I dunno." The hammer brother said.
"What do you mean you don't know?"
"Err...Well, I guess I was looking at you pace or what ever." The hammer brother began to back off and was prepared to run just in case Bowser were to blow fire. Bowser headed back to his chair and and sat down.
"I got a plan...AND YOU BETTER LISTEN UP!" Bowser said as he clenced the armrests.
"Now...If Mario won't believe me, I will make him!"
"Uh...No offense King Bowser but, when it comes to making plans you aren't...very good at it." The hammer brother said.
"Like you could do any better!" Bowser yelled.
"Well, I could try..." The hammer brother said.
"Go ahead. Make a fool of yourself."
"Ahem...Ok. Mario of course won't help us because you made a trick like this before. The only we can make this believable is to have proof."
"How in the world are we going to find proof if don't have any!"
"The key word is find! If we find proof, he'll know it wasn't us. I say we take this jerk by ourselves for now and when he sees that we aren't makiing any attack to him, we'll have proof!" The hammer brother said in a proud tone.
"Hmm...Not a bad idea. I don't know about trying to fight this guy, but, other than that it is sort of a good plan..." Bowser took time to think about the plan.
"OK! We'll give it a shot!"
8/10 Good job.
Quote from: Pokemaster944794 on January 18, 2008, 04:53:59 PM
8/10 Good job.
Thanks. I know it was short but, there's a reason for that ;)
Chapter 5: The visitor from above
"How in the world are we going to make a plan under an hour? We only have about thirty minutes left." Mario said.
"It may be a little difficult but, doesn't mean it'll be impossible." Luigi said as he once again, took the paper out from his pocket
"With you around, I'd beg to differ." Mario said as his expression dropped.
"No. With the princess around, we're practically doomed. These aleins know that we are going to find out sooner or later." Luigi held the paper up to his face and read it again.
"For the last time! Aliens don't exist!!!" Mario said in a annoyed tone.
"How would you know? You can't prove that they don't exist!" Luigi said he he pointed to the date.
"Also for the other last time. That's the date! It's not alien writing." Mario said as he snatched the paper from Luigi's hand.
"Prove! Where's your proof!" Luigi tried to take the paper back but couldn't.
"Where's yours?" Mario said.
"Right there. It may seem like the date but, it migh be alien writing. I read it in a comic!"
"Unlike you, I would take the time to read those comics since, I have a life."
"Well, if you would stop being such a glory hog and take me along in adventures, then I wouldn't have found all this stuff out. Since you always say that I just get in your way, I'm now annoying you with my useless knowledge." Luigi said as he tapped the side of his head with his finger.
"So far, that's the only knowledge you'll ever get." Mario said as he folded up the paper and put it in his pocket.
"Umm...Mario?" Luigi said as he pointed his finger towards the sky and had a look on his face as if he had seen a ghost.
"What now, you got more useless info?"
"Th...There's something falling from the sky. It could be the end of the world as we know it!!!" Luigi screamed
"For the love of...The world won't end!"
"I'm not joking this time! Look!" Mario turned around and saw an object falling from the sky.
"See I told you!" Luigi said.
"No time to prove yourself, that thing is headed this way!" Mario and Luigi began to run as fast as they could from the falling object. Peach noticed the object and began to run also, losing one of her shoes along the way. The object was coming closer and closer and all three of them continued to run. They realized that they couldn't run anymore and dove down as quickly as possible. The object flew over them and crased into Bowser's castle. Mario slowly looked up and saw the object sticking out from the wall. He wasn't sure what it was but from what he saw, he was begining to think that Luigi could be right about aliens.
"What was that?" Peach asked as she dusted off her dress.
"Looks like some type off plane." Mario said.
"It looks like an alien aircraft." Luigi said as he picked up his hat.
"It migh be...Just look at it." Mario said in a shakey tone."You know what Weegee? I think your right."
"I know I'm right, and please don't call me that in public. Just take a look at the side panels, it sticks up. There is no plane in the world that looks like that."
"What side panels?" Peach asked.
"The blue ones. The ones that connect to the wings...Or at least where the wings were."
"Looks like the a glass covering right there. Maybe something was actually flying this." Mario said.
"That would be the cockpit.I'm going to check it out. I can't miss this." Luigi walked over to the aircraft and noticed that the glass covering over the cockpit was open.
"Mario, check this out. It's open." Mario headed to where Luigi was. The aircraft was starting to smoke and they could hear coughing coming from the inside of the cockpit.
"There's is something in there." Mario said.
"Somebody get the press." Luigi said. The smoke heavily covered the cockpit area but, Mario and Luigi could see a figure get out of it.
"Stupid thing! It's not even paid off yet!" The figure said.
"It talks..."Luigi Said.
"Huh? Who's there?" The figure seemed to be looking in their direction.
"Good going." Mario whispered. The smoke began to clear and they could now see the figure clearly.
"AHHHH!!!!" Mario and Luigi both screamed and the figure jumped back and took out a gun.
Aw maaan! This suspense is killing me!! Great chapters!
Quote from: thunderhero4 on January 20, 2008, 10:03:46 PM
Aw maaan! This suspense is killing me!! Great chapters!
Chapter six will reveal who it is... :)
Chapter 6:The Truth
"Wh...What the heck is that?" Luigi asked as he hid behind Mario.
"I have no idea but, it doesn't seem like it'll put the gun down." Mario said. The figure kept the gun pointed.
"Who are you!" The figure demanded.
"That's more of the question I was gonna ask." Mario said.
"Are you some type of...Alien?" Luigi asked.
"I'm I a what? What kind of question is that? If you see someone that you don't know, you're going to come and ask if they're an alien?" The figure said.
"Are you?" Luigi asked again.
"Do I need to be some sorta broken record or what? Of course I ain't no dang alien!" The figure said as it put the gun down. "Just so you don't think I'm some...whatever, The name's Fox McCloud." The figure said.
"I find that a little ironic how your name is Fox and you are a fox. Ha! I crack myself up." Luigi said. Everyone looked at him with a blank stare." "hahahaheheh...heh..hooo...Ok I'll stop." Luigi said.
"Good. Now can someone tell me where the heck am I" Fox asked.
"Umm...The Mushroom kindom..." Peach said.
"The what kingdom?" Fox had a confused look on his face.
"The Mushroom Kingdom." Peach repeated.
"Huh...Sound like somethin' out of a videogame...Oh well." Fox said.
"So why are you here?" Mario asked.
"You're askin' me as if I came here to visit. I'm here because some idiot send me some stupid letter sayin' that the land was taking over land or somethin' like that..." Fox said.
"Did it have alien writing at the very bottom?" Luigi asked.
"What the? No! No it didn't have alien writing! What, are you some sorta freak or what?"
"He's not all...there...We got the same letter too." Mario said.
"Do you know who sent it?" Peach asked.
"Tch...No. There's only one thing I could tell ya." Fox said.
"And that would be?" Mario asked.
"This guy we're dealing with, ain't somebody to be messed with. He's not someone you should take lightly. As much as I know, He's not somebody you'd expect."
awww maaan!! when you dig into a good story, its hard to stop reading! this is very good! ;D
9.3/10 very good and awesome Fox McCloud cameo.
Is it Bush who is behind it? :D
Chapter seven is now up!
Chapter 7:
"What do you mean by It's not who we'd expect?" Mario asked.
"What I said was exactly what I meant." Fox said.
"O...k...But what did you mean?" Mario asked again.
"Are you kiddin' me, I just told you. You could figure it out without having to ask me what I meant." Fox said.
"Well, I can't figure it out so that's why I'm asking you." Mario said, frustrated.
"When I said it's not who you'd expect, I meant just that! I meant that you won't know who it is therefore you wouldn't expect that person to be the person causing this instead of the person you think would be the person behind it." Fox said as he also confused himself.
"I have no idea what the heck you just said." Mario said slowly with a look on his face that showed that he was lost by the end of Fox's comment.
"Neither do I but, that's not the point right now. I'm in a place that I never even heard of and now I'm explaining something that doesn't need to be explained since what was said was clearly what it meant to somebody who obviously can't get anything through their head!" Fox said in frustration.
"Look what ever your name is; I always deal with that so get used to it. I asked what you meant and you still didn't give me a solid answer." Mario said in a calm tone.
"For crying out loud! I already answered the stupid question!" Fox yelled.
"Hey, there is no such thing as a stupid question." Luigi said.
"Except any question that you ask." Mario said as he pointed to Luigi.
"Exactly...Wait what?" Luigi asked as he didn't understand what Mario said.
"Just pretend you get it move on. Anyway, I have no idea how I ended up here, or why out of all the places I had to crash here." Fox said.
"First of, you crashed here and second, you just did and we have no control over it." Mario said.
"Does that girl over there even say anything?" Fox asked as he pointed to Peach.
"She does but, it's better that she doesn't..." Luigi says.
"What's that supposed to mean!?" Peach asked as she over heard.
"Oh nothing..." Luigi said as he kept to himself.
Is it supposed to be short???
Quote from: JNeedForSpeed2014 on January 26, 2008, 01:00:40 PM
Is it supposed to be short???
*Nods* another short chapter. It's just because this leaves more events for the next chapter. Plus, the next chapter is supposed to be quite long so that would be my main reason for this being short. This is my last short chapter so all of the chapter after seven will be long.
Lulz, like a waste of 20 minutes argueing about nothing! :D