In which many characters wants to enter SSBB, but will anyone of them get in? Please request a character to start this story!
Uh.......... KLONOA!!!
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on January 12, 2008, 04:55:43 PM
Uh.......... KLONOA!!!
I thought you were going to say someone besides Klonoa......oh well, wait for the chapter this day.
real or fake?
real:Lucario.
Quote from: Pokemaster944794 on January 12, 2008, 05:17:25 PM
real or fake?
real:Lucario.
Good one! He will be next of Klonoa.
Daisy, umm... Tingle, Toad, and.... DX umm... Tails.
Chapter 1: Announcement for all the worlds
Inside the Smash Mansion, Master and Crazy Hand were in their office thinking of new characters to join the Brawl.
"What can we do now? Since Sonic and Snake were added to the tounament, many people want characters from other worlds to join" Said the sane hand.
"What about if we put posters of the tournament in all the worlds?" Said the stupid hand.
"Crazy, that's the best idea I've heard from your invisible mouth so far!" Said Master Hand, now in the speaker. "Attention everyone, meeting in the main hall at 12:00, I repeat, you must be hungry for........HOT POCKETS!"
"But I'm very hungry!" Said Kirby from afar.
"Darn it! The Hot Pockets thing again!" Said Master Hand.
At 12:00
"So, what is it now?" Falco said.
"Everyone, we're going to put posters of the tournament in all the worlds, we're going to receive-" Said Master Hand when he suddenly created desks with phones and seats with other office's stuff "letters and phone calls!"
"That sounds great but are we going to have this time a girl for differentiation?" Asked Peach.
"Eh? What do you mean?" Asked Master Hand.
"I mean, most of the participants are boys, when are we going to have another girl? If not, I'm going to blame you as a sexist hand!" Said Zelda angrily.
"Ok ok ok! I shall add girls too..........BUT THEY NEED TO BE GOOD GOT IT?!"
"Yay! No more boys stuff around the mansion!" Said Nana jumping happily.
Then everyone took a seat in the desks, the 2 hands floated outside and snapped their big fingers, in al the worlds posters were added to the walls and windows.
"I think this going to fail" Said Master Hand looking down......looking down without eyes of course.
"Cheer up, this is going to be an excellent idea!" Crazy tried to cheer up his brother.
"And what? A big pile of letters will fall above me hiding below them?" He said.
As if that were a wish, a big pile of letters DID have falled above the hand, hiding him below them, and inside the mansion, thw phones were ringing crazily, the 2 hands took the letters to the office and started to read them all, but will this iddea work?
That was pretty good.
Chapter 2: Earth Adept
"Hmm.....okay, let's call the first one" Said Master Hand while he was in the phone calling for the first one to come. "So are you fine with that? Ok, thanks!"
"Who is the first victi-I mean, character?" Asked Crazy Hand.
"Well, he said his name was Isaac"
"Sounds good I think"
"Wait, did you say think?"
"ARRGGHHHH!!!! I HATE TO THINK!!! SEIZURES!!!"
And so Crazy began to hit the floor maniacally.
"Crazy, stop hitting the floor maniacally!"
"SEIZURES!!!!"
Then someone was knocking the door of the office.
"SHOOT! CRAZY STOP NOW!!!"
"I CAN'T!!! AAAAHHHH!!!!"
Then the door was opening now. Master Hand froze up and then he looked at the person, he was wearing warrior clothes and also he was wearing a sword.
"(Great, another swordsman)" Master Hand thought.
"!!!.............I presence the danger" Link, Ike, Marth, Roy (I told you that there are many swordsmans already!) Young Link, Pit, Meta Knight and surprisingy Kirby who was wearing Link's hat said while the phone was ringing again.
"Ehhhh.......welcome! Have a seat please!" Said Master Hand, sweating if the young man wanted to ask about what was happening to Crazy Hand.
"May I ask why that hand over there is moving like crazy in the floor?"
"(DARN IT!)" Well, just ignore him for the time being ok?" Said the sane hand while he was sweating like crazy.
"..............Ok"
"Then first ques-"
"SEIZURES!!!"
".......tion, can you explain me what kind of moves could you do in the battle field?"
"Well, I can't explain it yet but I need to show them to you instead of explaning them" Isaac said.
"(Hmm, showing the moves against a character is really not a bad idea) Ok Isaac, you can show me your moves-"
"HEY! THAT'S MY LINE!!" Said Captain Falcon from his desk.
"In the battle-"
"SEIZURES!!!"
"FIELD!..........Now please go to that teleporter" Master Hand said.
Isaac nodded and then he stepped on the teleporter and was teleported to Smashville.
"Kirby, please step on the teleporter of Smashville now!" Master Hand said and Kirby then headed to the teleporter.
"So, how much for a coffee?"
"15 bells"
"Bells?" Isaac asked to the owner of the coffee shop.
"Ahem, Isaac, your opponent is ready, he is there now" Said Master Hand from the speaker.
"So another swordsman eh Hand?" Kirby said to Master Hand.
"Yes" The sane hand answered closing his invisible eyes.
(Suggestion: Please play the Smashville song while reading this part of the story)
3.......2........1........GO!!
As soon as the battle started, Kirby charged at Isaac and then he sucked him up and gained his hat, just hair.
"I like the Ike's hat better" Kirby said.
Then Isaac acted quickly and tried to slash Kirby, he did it and Kirby gained 18%.
"Your dead!" The puffball said.
Kirby was now thinking of what kind of B move has Isaac, then he used it and he used the sword of wherever that appeared and he then knew the move could be chargeable, what happened next? Kirby charged a little bit and hitted the floor causing a little quake going in front of him.
"Hey that's my move thief!" Isaac said. Then he charged at Kirby again but this time he used his down B move, what was now? He was surrounded by the Earth's power (He was using Gaia as a shield) and Kirby was hitted by the attack, Kirby went a little too far from Isaac but fortunalely he returned to the stage again.
"And now evade this!" Said the puffball while he was above Isaac in the air and used his Down B move "Stone" falling above Isaac and causing him 19% and quickly used his cutter ability to take him up and then down, sending him a little far away from the edge.
"I'm not done yet!" Isaac said when he tried to return to the stage, he used his side B move which was casting "Thorn" like ZSS's side attack "Plasma Whip" and fortunalely he did returned to the stage, then he used his Up B move "Mad Thorn" which was using again Thorn but this time throwing the thorn in the air causing damage to whoever was in the way and also pulling up Isaac in the process, Kirby gained 40% at this time.
Then a Smash Ball appeared out of nowhere.
"Is mine!" Kirby said while he was trying to hit the ball, but Isaac acted quickly and sended Kirby a little far away from him, then he was now hitting the Smash Ball, and POOF! Isaac was glowing in a rainbow color.
"Uh ouh" Kirby said while he was trying to get away from Isaac, but Isaac catched Kirby and then he used the Smash Ball's power, Isaac casted "Odyssey" which consist of 2 light swords stabbing the opponent and whoever was in the way, then he charged quickly at Kirby, stabbing him for a third time. In the background there was a giant sword and Kirby was sended off the screen, Isaac won the match!
"AND THE WINNER IS.......ISAAC!!!"
Isaac was teleported to Master Hand's office, Isaac congratulated Kirby for the fight.
"Well, that was really interesting! I'll call you when I finish to look the others" Master Hand sais to Isaac.
"Thanks, until then!" Isaac said while he was leaving the office.
"SEIZURES!!!" Crazy said again, but this time it was obvious for Master Hand to realise that Crazy was no longer having seizures, then he took another letter and started to read it.....
SEIZURES! Good chapter.
I was going to add the next (which contains Vivi) and there was an error, making all the chapter going out for good! :( I hate when this happens!
That sucks. I hate when that happens.
Chapter 3: Black Mage
"So can you please enter? Thanks, bye!" MH said while he was done using the phone.
"Who's next now?" His stupid brother asked.
"Well, I thnik is someone named Vivi"
"VIVI?! IS BY ANY CHANCE VIVI FROM FF9?!" The stupid hand asked excitedly.
"It is, why?"
"OMG!!! I NEED TO GO FOR MY CAMERA!!" And the stupid hand floated away towards his room, but crashing to the walls in the process.
"(Must call "Toad's Repairing shop)" The sane hand thought while the door was making sounds........LONG paused sounds.
Then the hand said "If is the mail guy again, GET OUT OF HERE-" The door was opening now, revealing a little kid wearing a robe for mages and a long, bended hat for mages, but more oddly, his face was all black except for his yellow eyes.
"Is...is this Master Hand's office by any chance?" He asked shyly.
"Why yes, I'm Master Hand, you must be Vivi am I right?"
"Y-yes, I'm Vivi, Vivi Oruntia sir" The mage answered to the hand.
"Please don't be shy, have a seat!" Vivi took a seat "Now I need to see your-" And MH then leaved the room in a hurry towards Captain Falcon, he blocked Captain Falcon's mouth with a spell of 10 seconds and hurried back to his office "moves".
Then Vivi nodded "Ok, please step on that teleporter over there" The hand said to Vivi, the black mage headed to the teleporter and was teletransportated to the Bridge of Eldin.
Master Hand grabbed the speaker's mic "Sonic, please step in the teleporte-" But Sonic was already in the stage.
"Is this wimpy guy going to fight me?" The show-offing hedgehog asked.
"Si-sir, I-I-I'm going to do my best in this battle" Vivi said to Sonic shyly.
"Heh, I don't think so," Sonic closed his eyes "WIMPY guys like you don't last 4 seconds in the battle fiel-hey, where is that smoke coming from?" Sonic asked.
"I really don't like the words that you have told me now, so I'm giving you my first attack"
"And what is the first attack?"
"Burning your little tail with my spell Fire"
"Wha-" Then Sonic looked to his tail burning up, the hedgehog was now trying to stop the fire, but I got worse and worse and he did a Spin Dash and the fire was gone, he yelled in pain.
Then he pointed very angrily towards Vivi and said "YOU'RE SO DEAD!!!"
"Hey hey hey, don't start fighting now Mr impacient!" MH said to Sonic.
"And why not?!"
"Because the match didn't started at all" The hand answered.
"But! He almost burned up my tail!" He said in his deffense.
"Well, It was allowed because you were saying harsh things to him-"
"START THE MATCH ALREADY!" Sonic said furiously.
"Ugh, fine" The hand said.
(Suggestion: Please play the Ocarina of Time Medley while reading this part)
3.......2.......1......GO!!!
Sonic quickly charged his Spin Dash to Vivi, Vivi didn't evaded it at time and got his damage meter raised to 19% "Focus!" The black mage said, he was now using his down B move, "Focus", which consists in giving the next B attack more power (Focus can be used up to 2 times after each use), then he used his B move, "Fire", but since the Focus was used, "Fire" was now "Fira", and Sonic got the hit, raising hiw Dm (Dm stands for Damage meter, remember it) to 20%
Then a Smash Ball have appeared.
Sonic quickly punched the Smash Ball and was now Super Sonic, then he was now heading towards Vivi, but, Vivi was evading all his attacks comically by almost tripping backwards (you know, as if a enemy misses him and he tries to not trip from his back), but Super Sonic did hit him before turning into Sonic again, and Vivi was heading to the hole in the Bridge of Eldin. But luckily, he used his up B move, "Blizzard" which was making a stair of ice going upwards while he was running quickly to the top.
Vivi quickly used his side B move, "Thunder", which was making a little thunder coming from above of the nearest target, but Sonic evaded the move and headed quickly to Vivi, then he ducked, looking at him straight to his black face and said; "I won!" and charged his fist, punching Vivi, and making him going out of the stage.
But in Vivi's way to defeat, a Smash Ball appeared, then he crashed right into the ball and started to glow, then he used his FS, "Ultima", which was a very powerful attack, it consist of a little black hole forming near the opponent, also the little black hole grows more after 8 seconds and whoever gets touched by the attack, he will be fatally wounded, and Sonic didn't saw the black hole growing from behind him and was fatally wounded by the attack, raising his Dm to 115%, and then Sonic bolted out of the stage. Yelling in pain.
GAME!!!
AND THE WINNER IS......VIVI!!!
Vivi was blushing a little bit, then he returned to MH's office, Sonic apologized for being such a jerk to him and dissapeared right in front of him.
"Very well done Vivi! I'm going to call you very soon!" Master Hand said to Vivi.
"So..I need to wait until you call me?" The black mage asked.
"Yeah, with that demostration in battle, I'm sure you will be a top tier!" The hand said proudly.
"Re-really? Then thanks sir! I'm going to wait until you call me!" And so, Vivi left the office.
"Now the next letter, and by the way, where is my stupid brother now?" He asked to himself.
10000 KM away from the mansion......
"Hey! Give me back my camera!!!" Rinoa said while she was running after Crazy Hand.
"NEVAH!" Crazy Hand said while he was running from Rinoa.
Run Rinoa! GO VIVI! TAKE THAT HEDGEPIG! This chapter gains my approval. That means it is good, by the way.
Can you do Animal Crosser?
Quote from: Tuppyluver1 on January 30, 2008, 08:51:15 PM
Can you do Animal Crosser?
.......After the people in FanFiction.net read the suggested characters.
This FanFic is awesome, Its funny, actionpacked and sweet ;D I love chapter 3 with Vivi, listening to the orcarina of Time Melody was a great suggestion because it really set the mood! Great Job!!!!! You should do Fredrick from eternal Sonata :-X
Chapter 4: The Keyblade, and the paper dude.
"Ok, this one looks promising" Then 5 minutes later, Master Hand finished about inviting the next guy. "But, where the heck is my brother?"
12000 Km away from the mansion....
"GIVE ME BACK MY CAMERA YOU CRAZY HAND!!!" Said a very angry Eiko while she and Rinoa were STILL running after the idiot hand.
"HOW MANY TIMES DO I NEED TO YOU TWO?! NEVAH!!" He said while he was running with 2 cameras in his big hand in the wrong direcction with 2 enraged girls following him behind.
12000 Km away from Crazy Hand.....
"Who cares" The sane hand said and then the door was making sounds from behind.
"Who's it? Please enter" But the hand froze up when he saw who was knocking the door, the person this time was wearing rather baggy pants with a apparent styled black clothes, he was also wearing a big key.
"Hmm, you're Master Hand righ-WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!" But before the person was going to finish his words, the hand grabbed the person and dragged him away to a dark room with a chair, a light and a table.
"Ok, tell me, Sora, tell me that your Disney friends aren't with you!!!" The hand pointed towards Sora angrily.
Sora was sweating a little bit "Errhh, what do you mean? I'm all alone this time, why do you ask?"
"Well, if I let even the most tiny Disney character in, Disney is going to take away this tournament like he do with Jetix!"
"........And what does Jetix have to do something with this?" The key-wielder asked the hand.
".............Well, nothing at all, BUT STILL, I don't want to see any Disney stuff from you got it?!"
And Sora sighed in relief "Got it" Then the hand grabbed Sora again and dragged him to his office.
"So," Master Hand said while he was pointing with Sora's Keyblade in his hand to a wall "How does this thing works for yo-" But suddenly, the top of the key was shining and the light coming out of the key was going towards the wall, then a portal opened up and from that a paper guy who looks like a clown appeared from it, that person was all thin (because he was of paper) and his face was with 2 halfs, one with black and the other one with white color, and his clothes were only kind of poligonal with purple and yellow colors, including his hat.
"Oh my, what the heck is this place? This place have not to be the Underwhere for the Chaos Heart sake!" The clown said a litttle enraged.
"Hmm, no, this is my office and you're inside the Smash Mansion" Master Hand told the clown.
"The Smash Mansion? Wow, this is the place of all kinds of fights right?"
"It is, why?"
"Because this place is going to be my next evil hideout!" The clown said.
"Sorry, already owned by Nintendo"
"Darn it, stupid Mario creators, but remember my name, Dimentio!" Dimentio said to Master Hand.
"Dimentio? That guy from Super Paper Mario?" The hand asked.
".....So I was INDEED inside a Mario game then?........Then yes"
"Are you interested in getting in Brawl?" Then suddenly, Mario, Luigi, Peach and Bowser shuddered a little bit.
"....Wow, I think I feel someone evil from the paper world" Mario said.
"Hmm, can I destroy you to take over?" Dimentio asked.
"No"
".......Oh well, by all manners, then I'm interested by the offer"
"Good! Now pleas-"
"AHEM" Sora said a little enraged because Master Hand ignored him.
"You're still her-oh sorry Sora! I forgot that you were still here!" The hand sweated a bit after giving back the Keyblade to Sora "So now since there are 2 of you now, both will need to fight each other, now please step in that teleporter over there"
And so, both of them stepped in the teleporter and were teletransportated to New Pork City.
Sora was amazed by how big the stage is, then he pointed to Dimentio with his Keyblade and told him "I'm going to defeat you with the support of Donal-"
"SORA!!!" Master Hand said to Sora very angrily.
"I-i-i mean, the support of Kairi and Riku!" Sora said, sweating again.
"That's better" The hand said.
"Ha, I can even beat a Dark Dark Boo without even fighting" Dimentio said.
"Dark Dark Boo? Is necessary to say 2 times Dark?" Sora asked.
"......................................." Dimentio didn't answer, it was hard to say an answer with that.
(Suggestion: WHO CARES?! You know what song to play anyway!)
3......2.......1......GO!
The Ultimate Chimera was around the stage at the beginning.
"Hey, what's with this purple monster?" Sora asked.
"You better not touch him, because if anyone touches the Ultimate Chimera, they will gonna be defeated even if his/her Dm is at 0%" Master Hand said, then Sora and Dimentio got away from the Chimera.
Dimentio used his B move attac-well, since Dimentio doesn't have a name for each one of his attacks, I'm going to be creative, his B move attack, "Poligonal spell" (I know, is stupid X_X) and began to charge the attack, but Sora evaded it easily, then, Sora used his B move attack, "Magic Shots", an attack that can fire multiple light shots from the top of his Keyblade, but Dimenion used his shield to defend himself.
"Very well, at failing every shot" Dimentio told Sora, taunting him a little.
"Grr!" Sora was angry now, he used his side B move, "Key Dance" (It mimicks the Dancing Blade (I don't know the name of the attack) of Marth, but with the exception of doing a weaker damage but stuns the opponent for 2 seconds at the first "Key slash"), and Dimentio's Dm was raised to 14%.
"How dare you to paralize me?!" Dimentio was now angry, he used his side B move, "Illusion", an attack that calls another Dimentio to attack the opponent,, then the twins charged at Sora with their B moves attacks and Sora was going right towards the Ultimate Chimera.
"Not in this match!" Sora told Dimentio, he used his up B move, "Key guide", an attack in which the key goings in a diagonal upward direction with Sora being pulled along with the key, and Sora was a little far away from the Chimera. Then he quickly slashed Dimentio with his forward A Smash attack. (Is too obvious that Sora slashed Dimentio with his Keyblade) And Dimentio was getting off the screen, his Dm to 38%.
"I'm not done either!" The poligonal clown told Sora, and Dimentio used his up B move, "Box teleport", an attack that transports Dimentio inside a illusional box by a great distance. Then when he was fine floating above a platform, he used his down B move, "Explosive square", it leaves a shining yellow box behind, then Dimentio grabbed Sora and pulled him towards the box, Dimentio used his down B move again when Sora was inside the frame, and the frame exploted with Sora inside, Sora's Dm was raised to 40%. (The attack doesn't push the opponent, it only damages without pushing it)
Then Sora used his down B move, "Key wave", he strucked his key in the floor, making a shockwave going in front of him and......well, since Dimentio was floating over the floor, it didn't do any effect at all. "Dammit!" The Key wielder said with fury.
And a Smash Ball appeared floating.........just above the Ultimate Chimera's head.
"....................I'm not getting it! You first!" Sora told Dimentio in a hurry.
"What? No! Do the honors!" Dimentio told Sora.
"I'm being nice with you, you can go for it first!"
"No no no sir, I'm totally a gentleman, go on please!"
But if you've already knew, the Smash Ball will always float to anywhere right? Well, Dimentio and Sora didn't payed any attention at the new location of the Smash Ball because they were still arguing.
"Sir, I've said before and I'm going to say that again, YOU FIRST!" Dimentio told Sora.
"No way, you first!"
"You first!"
"You first!"
"You first!"
"YOU FIRST!"
"NO, YOU FIRST!"
And suddenly, the Smash Ball came floating down just between the 2 of them.
"IS MINE!!!" Both said at the same time, punching madly at the Smash Ball.
And who got the Smash Ball first? Dimentio didn't, Sora was the one who got the ball, he started to glow in a rainbow color, then he used his FS, "Gummi Ship", he jumped towards the main seat of the ship and started to shot many beams from the right side of the screen, Dimentio was damaged very badly (Dm 180%) then he blasted off the screen.
GAME!!!
AND THE WINNER IS........SORA!!!
Dimentio and Sora were teleported back in Master Hand's office, Dimentio was ashamed for lossing the match.
"Is ok, you were good!" Sora tried to cheer up the clown.
"..........Well, I gotta remark that you were not bad at all either" Dimentio told Sora, he was feeling better.
"Good job Sora! And Dimentio you did a good work too out there! I'm going to call you 2 very soon!" Master Hand said.
"Then, I'll wait, bye!" Sora said while he was leaving the office.
"I think I'm gonna visit Nintendo City, is near this mansion right?" Dimentio asked the hand.
"Sure, is near here"
"Alright then, au revoir hand!" Then Dimentio dissapeared, leaving as he always do. Master Hand took another letter, but he still was wondering "Where the heck is my brother anyway?"
17000 Km away from the mansion.......
"GIMME MY CAMERA YOU BIG MEANIE! YA KNOW!!!" Rikku said while she was running after Crazy Hand, with 3 cameras in his big hand.
"NEVAH! I'M NOT GONNA GIVE YOU YOUR CAMERA EITHER!!!" Crazy Hand said while he was floating away at the wrong direction with 3 girls trying to kill him.
They're never getting their cameras back. :D
You're getting better! And this chapter was even better cause it had Dimentio and Sora in it.
"Thank you! Your patronage is very well apreciated!"
Who says this? ;)
*thinks* My brain hurts... The Mailman?
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on February 01, 2008, 10:25:25 PM
*thinks* My brain hurts... The Mailman?
Nooo. Is an Al Bhed.
*thinks* *brain explodes* RIKKU! YUNA! PAINE! I think I spelled Paine wrong...
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on February 02, 2008, 07:06:34 PM
*thinks* *brain explodes* RIKKU! YUNA! PAINE! I think I spelled Paine wrong...
***'s Travel Agency.
Great new chapter! That was funny, dimentio vs Sora super epic battle, i could really picture them fighting with the Mother (porky theme playing) Awesome!! cant wait for the next chapter!
Lol good
Quote from: Tuppyluver1 on January 30, 2008, 08:51:15 PM
Can you do Animal Crosser?
Yea, why have an animal crossing stage without the character?
*request animal crosser in next chapter*