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Comic 1: Lets go to Smash World! (http://i27.tinypic.com/300wf0y.jpg)
Newest Comic:
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this belongs in fan art. i think.
Oh, well I think it should belong here since this really isn't art...
Quote from: TheOneLink1 on February 22, 2008, 10:33:17 AM
Oh, well I think it should belong here since this really isn't art...
Most likely belongs in Fan Fics but it's alright. It's a nice comic but needs more funny. :P
Your word bubbles suck, here >:( (http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/3189/fontii9.png) (http://imageshack.us)
By miiman56 (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/miiman56)
oo and its not that funny
It will get funnier. It's the first comic. I have to set up some storyline first.
Your grammar was bad....I stopped reading after you replaced "where" with "were."
Quit making comics, you suck at them.
Also, get rid of that outrageously large signature. Or at least make it smaller.
Sorry, that sucked. :|
plz tell me this is ur first try :| cuz this was my first (http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8824/payday2ed7.png) (http://imageshack.us)
Quote from: Miiman56 on February 22, 2008, 12:50:00 PM
plz tell me this is ur first try :| cuz this was my first (http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8824/payday2ed7.png) (http://imageshack.us)
That's actually decent.
Quote from: Tuppyluver1 on February 22, 2008, 12:51:06 PM
Quote from: Miiman56 on February 22, 2008, 12:50:00 PM
plz tell me this is ur first try :| cuz this was my first (http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8824/payday2ed7.png) (http://imageshack.us)
That's actually decent.
Thanx
Humor needs work. And the word bubbles need work too. The nub-like white to transparent is existent, and you forgot to give credit to spriters. There is a lack of background, and it's not saved as PNG. Also, it lacks effects. Shall I go on?
...that sucked pretty hard...
And you still never got serious with the other comic you started. Nintendo gone insane?
But then again...it might have been a good thing.
Quote from: Miiman56 on February 22, 2008, 12:54:19 PM
Quote from: Tuppyluver1 on February 22, 2008, 12:51:06 PM
Quote from: Miiman56 on February 22, 2008, 12:50:00 PM
plz tell me this is ur first try :| cuz this was my first (http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8824/payday2ed7.png) (http://imageshack.us)
That's actually decent.
Thanx
My first decent one is this:
(http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m111/karththemetroid/Karth%20Komix/Page_1-4.jpg)
Fanboyish humor yes....stick figures, yes....I thought it was decent at the time. After all, I make up for the drawings in humor. Hopefully.