I have to write an essay on ways to show commitment at school, home, and the community. I already came up with how I'm going to lay it out (Intro paragraph, school paragraph, home paragraph, community paragraph), and I can't think of ways on how to show commitment at home and the community. Can you guys help please?
Volunteering.
Stretch that out into four paragraphs.
Quote from: Tuppyluver1 on April 28, 2008, 05:37:26 PM
Volunteering.
Stretch that out into four paragraphs.
It's actually gonna be 5 paragraphs. I don't think I made it clear. Oh, and I forgot to include that I was also putting a concluding paragraph. And thanks for the volunteering one. Wouldn't have thought of that. ;D
Working towards goals that will benefit home and the community, I would just type the same thing over and over about dedication just to get it over with. I did the same for To Kill A Mockingbird essay by saying it was a rough time and was full of bigotry, got a B on the essay surprisingly.
Quote from: `Matt` on April 28, 2008, 05:40:29 PM
Working towards goals that will benefit home and the community, I would just type the same thing over and over about dedication just to get it over with. I did the same for To Kill A Mockingbird essay by saying it was a rough time and was full of bigotry, got a B on the essay surprisingly.
I had to do a Character sketch so I did Boo Radley. Got 200/200 ^_^.
My advice is to just BS your way through the essay.
But don't make it obvious BS, make it believable BS.
I hope that made sense. :D
Quote from: Java_Java on April 28, 2008, 06:37:40 PM
My advice is to just BS your way through the essay.
But don't make it obvious BS, make it believable BS.
I hope that made sense. :D
The perfect answer.
Lie, but make it a believable lie.
Can't spell believable with out lie >_>
Make one paragraph about becoming Eagle Scout.
That's commitment out the ass, right there.
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on April 28, 2008, 06:56:10 PM
Make one paragraph about becoming Eagle Scout.
That's commitment out the ass, right there.
But he isn't an Eagle Scout.
Write about paying Child Support now that is commitment.
community service
volunteer crap
picking up dog poo
you could go buy homework.