Hey, i just noticed, most of the people here have probably posted a fan-fic on these forums at least once right? i guess ill give it a try...hehe...
The Master Hand...Nuff said
One time, at the very beginning at the universe, a creation of slightly awkward and awesome porportions was being stirred. It was a giant hand... Some say it was the hand of god, others dont... This hand had the power to create matter and objects at will...
100 years after its birth, it created a solar system. this solar system was home to many great heroes (mario, link, sonic, ect.). All planets in this solar system lived in harmony...until a tragic accident struck the land!
A giant meteor came hurling towards planet mobius (sonic's planet) 50 years later. it housed an alien race named the Black Arms. The black arms leader: black doom had helped create the bioform shadow the hedgehog, and which the next 50 years, the comet would return to this planet and have shadow gather all 7 chaos emeralds for the power of the black arms. after the comet left soon after the creation of shaow, it lost control and crashed into the Master hand. the comet dug into its skin and fed it evil energy. the master hand would never be the same again...precisely 20 minutes after this event, the master hand transformed all of the lifeforms in the solar system to trophies, for his own control. He then pit hero and villan against hero and villan. this war was known as the smash war (super smash bros. to us humans) decades pass and the war is still going on...who will stop this madness?? Simple, It is I, Thunderhero!!! Haha, just kidding...
The only answer was the greatest hero of all time, mario! he was the only one who wasnt under his control. mario managed to free hundreds of imprisoned trophies. As our hero comes to the third stage of the war (entitled brawl), will mario be able to save enough fighters to defeat and heal the master hand, and what is the deal with the crazy hand!!?? find out on the next fan-fic!!
this is the prolouge of the story, if anyone likes it, i suppose i could continue it...
Hmm...............did you know that Master hand had a cousin named Glover? :D
Quote from: wiiboychris on November 05, 2007, 09:01:16 PM
Hmm...............did you know that Master hand had a cousin named Glover? :D
wow, i didnt kno that, lol!
Quote from: wiiboychris on November 05, 2007, 09:01:16 PM
Hmm...............did you know that Master hand had a cousin named Glover? :D
:| Be thankful I haven't reported you yet, and please keep conversation relevant to the topic.
As for the fic, I thought you grasped the concept of Super Smash Bros. quite well, and made the prologue original. However, there were quite a few grammar and mechanic errors throughout the story. Also, try formatting the story a little more clearly. People don't like reading big walls of text.
All and all, I thought this was better than a few other prologues I've seen around here. I can't wait to see what you do with the characters themselves, and hope you keep them in character. Good luck with it! ;)
Quote from: LIGHTNINGSWORD on November 05, 2007, 09:08:42 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on November 05, 2007, 09:01:16 PM
Hmm...............did you know that Master hand had a cousin named Glover? :D
:| Be thankful I haven't reported you yet, and please keep conversation relevant to the topic.
As for the fic, I thought you grasped the concept of Super Smash Bros. quite well, and made the prologue original. However, there were quite a few grammar and mechanic errors throughout the story. Also, try formatting the story a little more clearly. People don't like reading big walls of text.
All and all, I thought this was better than a few other prologues I've seen around here. I can't wait to see what you do with the characters themselves, and hope you keep them in character. Good luck with it! ;)
sheesh man, all he did was crack a joke...oh and thanks, i suppose i could continue it, but the grammar will remain...i type like that...
Quote from: LIGHTNINGSWORD on November 05, 2007, 09:08:42 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on November 05, 2007, 09:01:16 PM
Hmm...............did you know that Master hand had a cousin named Glover? :D
:| Be thankful I haven't reported you yet, and please keep conversation relevant to the topic.
As for the fic, I thought you grasped the concept of Super Smash Bros. quite well, and made the prologue original. However, there were quite a few grammar and mechanic errors throughout the story. Also, try formatting the story a little more clearly. People don't like reading big walls of text.
All and all, I thought this was better than a few other prologues I've seen around here. I can't wait to see what you do with the characters themselves, and hope you keep them in character. Good luck with it! ;)
Please try to be a bit more generous to the posters here it is not like they are terrorists
Quote from: Ridley on November 06, 2007, 04:44:05 PM
Quote from: LIGHTNINGSWORD on November 05, 2007, 09:08:42 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on November 05, 2007, 09:01:16 PM
Hmm...............did you know that Master hand had a cousin named Glover? :D
:| Be thankful I haven't reported you yet, and please keep conversation relevant to the topic.
As for the fic, I thought you grasped the concept of Super Smash Bros. quite well, and made the prologue original. However, there were quite a few grammar and mechanic errors throughout the story. Also, try formatting the story a little more clearly. People don't like reading big walls of text.
All and all, I thought this was better than a few other prologues I've seen around here. I can't wait to see what you do with the characters themselves, and hope you keep them in character. Good luck with it! ;)
Please try to be a bit more generous to the posters here it is not like they are terrorists
What? All I was doing was giving the writer constructive criticism.
if i got told i could be banned by some1, id feel pretty bad... :(
Quote from: LIGHTNINGSWORD on November 06, 2007, 07:12:34 PM
Quote from: Ridley on November 06, 2007, 04:44:05 PM
Quote from: LIGHTNINGSWORD on November 05, 2007, 09:08:42 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on November 05, 2007, 09:01:16 PM
Hmm...............did you know that Master hand had a cousin named Glover? :D
:| Be thankful I haven't reported you yet, and please keep conversation relevant to the topic.
As for the fic, I thought you grasped the concept of Super Smash Bros. quite well, and made the prologue original. However, there were quite a few grammar and mechanic errors throughout the story. Also, try formatting the story a little more clearly. People don't like reading big walls of text.
All and all, I thought this was better than a few other prologues I've seen around here. I can't wait to see what you do with the characters themselves, and hope you keep them in character. Good luck with it! ;)
Please try to be a bit more generous to the posters here it is not like they are terrorists
What? All I was doing was giving the writer constructive criticism.
You are saying you might report him someday. That doesn't sound like any kind of criticism to me. But that is just me