My Halo video o-o

[Phantom123]

http://youtube.com/watch?v=baVCy7staBA

It is a basic joke story, lightly based off of Halo. It even comes with a (Not too well done) rendition of the Halo theme at the very end. It is not meant to be overly hilarious, AND DEFINITELY not as dramatic. It's just kinda story we did, for a History/English project. And yes, I know the editing is bad, but it was my first shot :P I'd especially like comments on the video, one way or another. Feel free to say how to improve the editing *I am using Windows Movie Maker*. You can comment on the music, but know that we put that together in 10 minute's time, so we really COULDN't get things ready. The Cello solo (Me) was made completely on the spot. All we did was say when we'd be fast, slow, and when the Cello bit goes in. I made that up as I went :D