The Legend Of Aura: Prelude up!

[jnfs2014]

Prelude:

A small village in the middle of the desert. Young Princess Lisa and Prince Lance, both Lucario, were enjoying a light stroll through the desert to the oasis, for they were scorched. On the way there, however, calamity struck.
  "Prince Lance! Prince Lance!"  Advisor Kazza from the Palace yelled.
  "What is it?" Lance questioned back.
  "They.....took the egg."
  "WHAT!!!! THEY TOOK OUR EGG!!!????" Lisa gasped, going into a state of extreme unstablility.
  "What happened?" Lance asked.
  "Thieves infiltrated the palace. They killed the royal family and took the egg."
  "Bastards! They won't get away with this!" Lance yelled, running back to the palace.
  "Princess, we must go too." The Kadabra picked up the unstable Lisa and started running.
  Back at the palace, the thieves were busy enforcing the rules.
  "You thieves!" Lance screamed, launching several Aura Spheres at the gang.
  "Hahaha!!!" the leader, Darkrai, cackled. "Prince Lance, are you here to stop us?"
  "Heck yeah!!"
  "Well why don't you look at your egg?"
  No sooner did Darkrai say this then Lance noticed an object high, high on the castle steeple. It was his egg.
  "Get that egg down now!"
  "And if I don't?"
  "Then I'll kill you myself."
  Darkrai and Lance then fought, neither gaining an edge. Finally, Lance launched a Force Palm, leaving his right arm useless. Darkrai took advantage of this and quickly grabbed the arm, sending multiple Dark Pulses throughout it.
  "Gah!!!" Lance shrieked.
  "Hahahaha," Darkrai laughed. "Can't break free, it seems."
  "No!!!! I won't give up!!!"
  Lucario focused all of his Aura into his left fist, and knocked Darkrai off with a powerful Close Combat attack. He then saw Kazza and Lisa in his arms.
  "Kazza! Grab the egg!"
  Kazza obeyed, putting down Lisa and telporting onto the top of the steeple. Grabbing the egg, he teleported back.
  "Now RUN! I'll meet back with you later." Lucario exclaimed.
  Kazza started to run. He looked back at about 100 yards to see Lance killing the last of Darkrai's troops before getting hit by the Dark Master himself. Kazza shook his head and continued running.
Once he reached the town, he rested at the hotel, still holding the egg. After resting, he strolled out onto the street. Passing a news stand, he noticed an article that opened his eyes: Looting In The Desert: No Survivors.

[Tsumaru]

You should convert this into a play.  With as much dialouge as you have, it gets confusing to read with it being in the form used for novels and stories.

But other than that, I like the concept.