Attack of Twilight, a new comic!

[Linkhasafan]

*banner coming soon*
Ok will this comic was made for Linkachu since it was orginally going to be with me and Linkachu. Please tell me what you think, though I am brand new to Power On looking comics like Cruchy's. So please give me CONSTRUTIVE critism. Anyways let's begin.

Intro-

Current Comic-

[Commander Awesome]

*shoots self*