The Subspace Emissary: A New Fanfic.

[Triforce_Luigi]

Hi, I am Triforce_Luigi. I've decided to make my own SSBB fanfic. Comment if you like, but please, be constructive and do not flame. I'm not going to bother with the hackneyed prologue, so if you want to see a prologue, just look at the "This World..." update at www.smashbros.com.

I'm just gonna skip ahead to Chapter One:

Chapter 1:Plumber and Puffball Duke It Out!

The crowds. The excitement. Cheering all around as the two combatants battled below. One, a plumber with a red cap and overalls, was shooting fireballs. The other, a pink puffball, desperately dodged the fiery projectiles. It was a close fight and both fighters were tired. In the crowd, two women watched as the two dashed at each other.

The two females had only recently met each other as the match started, but they were well on their way to becoming good friends. These were the princesses of the Mushroom Kingdom and of Hyrule, Peach and Zelda. Peach was in a pink dress, a parasol in her hand. Zelda had a dress with subdued purple hues, her tawny brown hair flowing in the gentle breeze.

Below them, the dueling pair rushed at each other, ready to fight. The plumber was Mario, the hero of the Mushroom Kingdom, and Peach's savior many times over. His adversary, the puffball, was Kirby, as Warpstar Knight from Dreamland. Mario tried to deliver a punch to his foe. Kirby managed to sidestep the attack and drew a hammer. He swung, delivering a powerful blow to Mario's side.

Mario cringed in pain. Kirby took his chance and opened his mouth wide. Mario felt himself being pulled closer to the puffball as if he were a vacuum. Suddenly, he was in Kirby's mouth. But instead of being digested, as he had expected, he was released, covered in saliva. He looked up. Kirby stood their, a cap similar to Mario's on his head. It was an exact replica, even the "M" that was on it was exactly like Mario's.

Kirby raised his appendage. A fireball flew out. Mario reacted by sending his own fireball at Kirby's. The two blazing orbs met in the air and, being equally matched, fizzled out of existence with a puff of smoke. Mario could smell the terrible odor of smoke and wrinkled his nose in disgust. Kirby rushed again. As he neared Mario, He drew a sword and leapt high into the air, the sword held out in front of him. He plummeted down to the plumber, trying to hit him with the outstretched blade. 
   
Mario rolled away from the puff just in time to avoid the remorseless piece of metal in his hands. But to his surprise, when Kirby landed, a shockwave flew out of the blade toward Mario. The plumber was knocked into the air. He landed with a sharp thud, barely conscious. In the crowd, Peach gasped as her hero stood once more, willing the puffball to attack again.
   
Once more the two rushed at each other. But this time, just before they met, Mario leapt into the air. Kirby continued under him, not realizing his folly until Mario landed behind him. He whirled around and was met with a flaming blast. Kirby flew back, landing on the ground. Mario walked over to him. Where Kirby had been lying, was a trophy, depicting the puffball waving on a bronze pedestal.

Mario's heart was filled with oppression. For too long people like Kirby or himself had been tormented, pitted against each other, unwillingly, for the entertainment of some unknown entity. He picked up the trophy and raised it high above his head. A flash of light. Kirby stood before the courageous plumber, a curious look on his eyes. Why had he been spared? Shouldn't Mario have been bowing to the crowd, like so many other fighters before him?
   
Mario held out his hand to the puffball to shake, a smile beneath his rich, lustrous moustache. Kirby's face filled with joy as he took the hand and shook vigorously. Kirby was a naïve creature, always happy to make a friend. The crowd cheered above them, Peach and Zelda especially joyful.
   
But the celebration could not last. Above them, the sky grew blood red. A dark ship appeared. It had smooth, metallic sides and bat-like wings at the sides, helping to keep it in the air. Thrusters at the back sped the craft along. It halted right above Mario and Kirby. A hatch opened at the bottom, and purple spores of darkness rained down. Upon reaching the ground, the spores took on the shape of strange robotic creatures.
   
Peach and Zelda gasped. They didn't know what these entities were, but they did know that they weren't friendly. Zelda leapt into the air and with a grunt and a flash of swirling green light, she teleported to the heroes' side. Peach floated down gently with her parasol. The quartet: plumber, puffball, and princesses, were ready to combat these dark forces.



Okay, so how did you like it? As I said before, you may comment, but please be constructive and do not flame.

[Ridley]

Why is everyone doing a fan-fic?!?!? Why don't you people let Triforce man be original? JK looks very good.

[Triforce_Luigi]

Why is everyone doing a fan-fic?!?!? Why don't you people let Triforce man be original? JK looks very good.

I got bored...
Thanks!

[Triforceman22]

You all try at my good posts... :P

, if this isn't the same as mine I won't hold a grudge.... :P
Anyways, good job!

[Triforce_Luigi]

You all try at my good posts... :P

, if this isn't the same as mine I won't hold a grudge.... :P
Anyways, good job!

Thanks. Don't worry. I've planned it out, and it's all different from yours.

[DededeCloneChris]

I should revive my fan fic corner to make people happy! ;)

[Triforce_Luigi]

I should revive my fan fic corner to make people happy! ;)

Yeah you should. You and Triforceman and thunderhero helped inspire this...

[DededeCloneChris]

I should revive my fan fic corner to make people happy! ;)

Yeah you should. You and Triforceman and thunderhero helped inspire this...

Ohh, I feel inspired. :P :)

[Triforce_Luigi]

I should revive my fan fic corner to make people happy! ;)

Yeah you should. You and Triforceman and thunderhero helped inspire this...

Ohh, I feel inspired. :P :)

;)

[Java]

Looks good. :)

[Triforce_Luigi]

Looks good. :)

Thanks.

Here's Chapter 2:

Chapter 2: Primids and Piranha Plants
   
The creatures charged at the heroes. Kirby drew his hammer, whacking any enemy that came within range. Suddenly, one of the creatures was sent flying over his head. He turned around to find the one who had hurled the creature and was surprised to find it was Zelda. He watched her for a moment as she levitated a creature into the air with telekinesis and hurled it away. She turned around to face him, giving a small wink before she sent a blast of light at a group of the enemies. Upon impact, the blast exploded, destroying several of them. They vanished in puffs of purple smoke.
   
Mario and Peach were at the center of a crowd of the evil things. Peach continuously bopped them over the head, one by one, with her pink parasol. Mario, behind her, was destroying a good number of enemy forces with a barrage of fireballs and punches. They were outnumbered, however. Peach opened her parasol, Mario grasping her hand. They floated up, out of the enemy hordes.
   
Zelda and Kirby were holding their own on the other side of the stadium. But the beings pushed them back. They were cornered against the wall. Desperate, Kirby pulled out a small star. He raised it into the air, and it began rotating. It grew large enough for Kirby to ride and, taking Zelda's hand, he leapt on. This was his Warpstar, and he used it to travel faster. With it, the two flew into the air, meeting Mario and Peach.
   
Peach grabbed Kirby's free hand and Mario clasped hers, and they flew off. But right when it seemed they would make it, a cannonball shot at them. The projectile missed, but to evade it, Kirby had to make a sharp turn. At the turn, Peach and Zelda fell back to the ground. As they fell, a silver orb came down from a portal that appeared in the sky.
   
Peach drew her parasol once more, and opened it in the air. Her descent slowed, but Zelda continued falling, shrieked. Peach closed her eyes, terrified of the fate that surely awaited her fellow princess now. Zelda shrieked again and Peach opened her eyes. She was nearly at the ground, so she closed her parasol, falling the rest of the way, landing lightly. Kirby and Mario descended on the Warpstar, touching down beside her.
   
They looked up to find Zelda. She was in the leafy clutches of a dinosaur-like creature, with a red body. Its head was ringed by goldenrod petals and dotted by white spots. Peach and Mario had encountered this particular monstrosity before, so they recognized it right away. They were facing Petey Piranha.
   
But all the while, they had forgotten the silver sphere. But not now. A creature with green and red robes around its spherical body floated down above the orb, positioned behind the heroes. They all whirled around to face him. The ancient entity nodded, the only thing on its body that showed through the robes were its two glistening eyes, for it had no hands. Two robots appeared at the sides of the orb. Both had stick-like appendages at their sides, presumably arms. They attached these appendages to the sides of the sphere and pulled.

The two hemispheres came apart to reveal a light blue section between them. At the middle of the blue section was a black rectangle. Red numbers appeared on it. A timer. Then they all realized what it was. A bomb. Behind them, Petey Piranha roared, a terrible sound, this time accompanied by the sound of clanging metal. Kirby and Mario turned to see two cages in its hands, the princesses trapped inside.
   
Now, faced with the dilemma of stopping the bomb and simultaneously saving Peach and Zelda, the heroes would have to split up. Mario rushed forward to take out the bomb, but as he reached it, a dust cloud stirred up behind Petey, and a third cannonball flew out. Mario was knocked far away out of the stadium by the attack, and Kirby helpless, would have to deal with Petey alone. And he would have to hurry to defeat him before the bomb went off.

[Triforce_Luigi]

Chapter 3: Kirby's Cage Match

Kirby stared at Petey, mouth agape. Petey raised a cage, the one holding Peach captive, and slammed it into Kirby. He was sent flying across the battlefield. Kirby drew his hammer, noticing Zelda's cage, hanging limp in the beast's hands, as Petey was using mainly Peach's cage to attack. Kirby sent a hammer blow to the cage. Zelda screamed as her cage rocked wildly.
   
Petey swung her high into the air, and brought the cage crashing down on Kirby. Zelda closed her eyes, afraid for the Warpstar Knight and for hers and Peach's lives. Petey roared in pain, shaking Zelda from her thoughts. Suddenly, she had an idea. She connected to the minds of Peach and Kirby, conveying to them her plan.
   
Both nodded, and began following the plan. Kirby drew his sword, and slashed at Petey's head. It didn't cut, for Petey's head was hard, but it still irked and hurt him. He screamed again, dropping the cages to cradle his head with his leafy hands. Forgotten by the monster, Peach and Zelda attacked the bars on their respective cages, Peach with her parasol, and Zelda with magic.
   
While they struggled to loose their bonds, Kirby continued to attack Petey. Distracted, he swung his leafy fronds wildly, trying to hit the puny puffball. Finally, Petey opened his mouth wide and spit a giant ball of brown glop at his pink foe. Kirby dodged, but the ground was made slippery by the glop covering it. Petey charged at Kirby, but he slipped in the goop, falling on his back with a thud. The shockwave from the fall knocked Zelda's cage on its side, while Peach's rocked and swayed, still standing.
   
Kirby rushed to the nearer cage, Peach's, and started working with his hammer to break it. Just as Kirby freed Peach, they heard a scream from behind them. Petey was unconscious on the floor, but Zelda, still trapped, was in the clutches of a new enemy. Zelda's cage was in the hands of a fat man wearing a denim vest with a yellow shirt underneath. He also had a helmet with a pair of goggles on his head.

Kirby rushed forward, Peach following, close behind, to attack this man. Peach knew who he was. Wario, the microgame master had the Princess of Hyrule in his clutches.

[Eizweir]

Cool, a rivalry between fanfics, I think I like the story in the other one better, but this one was written better.  Don't ask me which is better, I like them both equally.

[Triforce_Luigi]

Cool, a rivalry between fanfics, I think I like the story in the other one better, but this one was written better.  Don't ask me which is better, I like them both equally.

Thanks.Triforceman22's is way better than mine. But the story here will (hopefully) get better.

[Eizweir]

I just realized I over-used the word "better".  ::)