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The Subspace Emissary: A New Fanfic.

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Quote from: Marth Xero on November 11, 2007, 03:56:01 PM
I just realized I over-used the word "better".  ::)

Yeah you did. Learn BETTER adverbs!!!

Triforce_Luigi

Chapter 4:The Microgame Master Strikes Again!

Wario put down Zelda and charged at his two foes. He knocked Kirby away with an arm thrust and dodged out of the way of Peach's parasol attack. Unfortunately for him, Peach's assault continued on and hit the cage, knocking it down, Zelda screaming.
   
Kirby kicked Wario in the gut while he was distracted by the falling cage. The air was knocked out of him as he flew back, slamming into Zelda's upturned cage. The cage finally broke, freeing the captive princess. She got up, dusted herself off, and spun around, sending a blue aura around her. The aura swirled around her, taking the shape of a rotating crystal, with four sharp edges sticking out to slash at her foe.
   
The spell hurt Wario, causing him to cry out in pain. Suddenly, his belly bulged out. Peach gasped, knowing what was to come. Then, with a colossal mushroom cloud, Wario unleashed his garlic-powered flatulence, stunning the heroes. While they were stunned by the gas, Wario retrieved his motorcycle and revved the engine. A cannon appeared, replacing the headlight. This had been the source of the previous cannonballs, but now, it shone with light. He pulled a trigger on the handlebar and a beam shot out, headed for Zelda. More beams were fired at Peach and Kirby. Kirby was the only one to dodge, being without a nose, and so unaffected by the gas.
   
As the Princesses were hit, they reverted to their trophy forms. Kirby dashed to retrieve the nearer trophy, this time Zelda. He picked the trophy up and made to get Peach as well, but the bomb, forgotten behind them, went off. Wario quickly got Peach's trophy and rode out of the stadium on his motorcycle. Kirby got out his Warpstar and flew away with Zelda's trophy. He would change her back when they landed; there was no time for that now.
   
Suddenly, Kirby saw the ship that had attacked them before. He recognized it as his rival Meta Knight's vessel, the Halberd. But he knew that Meta Knight would never do something like this or side with a buffoon like Wario, so he landed on top of the ship to investigate. Upon landing, he put Zelda back to normal, and together, they began to investigate, starting on the deck they were on.

20fan

Nice fanfic I didn't read the other one but this one is awesome.

Triforce_Luigi

Quote from: 20fan on November 11, 2007, 04:56:09 PM
Nice fanfic I didn't read the other one but this one is awesome.

Thanks and you should read Triforceman22's sometime. It's alot better.

Triforce_Luigi

#19
Chapter 5: Wario Meets the Minister

Wario, meanwhile, was riding to the Halberd in his motorcycle. As he neared the ship, an escape pod shot down to him. He quickly dismounted his motorcycle and put it away before boarding the pod, Peach trophy in hand. The pod took him up to the ship, where he was greeted by a Primid. He presented the trophy, at which point the Primid took him down a hall to an ornately-decorated door.
   
The door opened to what appeared to be a throne room. A large golden chair was at the end of the long chamber, a purple carpet leading up to it. In the chair, the robed being from the stadium sat. Wario set down the Peach trophy at its feet. The being floated over to it, examining it, as if doubtful its authenticity. After a moment of staring intently at the trophy, it nodded its head, apparently satisfied.

Very good,rang a voice inside Wario's head. You've done well, Wario.

Wario looked up, shocked at this mental communication. He opened his mouth to say something, but was interrupted before he could begin.

Do not speak. Think, and I shall hear, came the voice inside his head. The being nodded again, as if confirming that it was the one communicating.

What are you?Thought Wario insolently in his head.

I am the Ancient Minister, responded the being. I have a mission for you. If you do this right, you will get all the money you want.

What!?! You were said you would pay me when I brought you Peach!  Cried Wario mentally.

So I did, remarked the Minister. Two bags of coins materialized before Wario. There. Now you will get more when you complete my mission. Find the other Princess and the Puffball. They may be essential to my plot.

Eager for more money, Wario immediately went to the deck of the ship to depart. But before he could leave, he spotted Kirby and Zelda. He immediately made his way to them, ready to capture them for the Minister.

There. So how was it? Please respond.

Triforceman22

Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on November 11, 2007, 04:57:44 PM
Quote from: 20fan on November 11, 2007, 04:56:09 PM
Nice fanfic I didn't read the other one but this one is awesome.

Thanks and you should read Triforceman22's sometime. It's alot better.

Thanks dude. :)
Your is really sweet! :)


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Triforce_Luigi

Quote from: Triforceman22 on November 11, 2007, 06:26:05 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on November 11, 2007, 04:57:44 PM
Quote from: 20fan on November 11, 2007, 04:56:09 PM
Nice fanfic I didn't read the other one but this one is awesome.

Thanks and you should read Triforceman22's sometime. It's alot better.

Thanks dude. :)
Your is really sweet! :)

You're welcome.
And Thanks!

Ridley

...Friend codes were probably implemented by the same people who wanted tripping in Brawl...
...It's quite obvious...

Triforce_Luigi

Why does it need to stay on the first page? It is not that good.

Ridley

Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on November 13, 2007, 04:38:50 PM
Why does it need to stay on the first page? It is not that good.

Cause it is pretty good
...Friend codes were probably implemented by the same people who wanted tripping in Brawl...
...It's quite obvious...

Triforce_Luigi


Water ☮

i like the fact that yours is a bit slower paced and the different story from triforceman makes it interesting.

Triforce_Luigi

Thanks. Unfortunately, I don't know when I will be able to get the next chapter up, so don't hold your breath.

Eizweir

http://steamcommunity.com/id/xluxaeternax

formerly: Marth Xero, Xero, Roy Khan, Diego Armando, Lux Aeterna, and more I forget it was like 11 years ago jeeze

Triforce_Luigi

Chapter 6:A New Mission

It was a peaceful day in the Lylat System. The Great Fox hovered above Corneria City, waiting for its passengers to return.
   
Within the city, Team Star Fox was consulting the General Pepper about their new mission. The group was huddled around a large table. At the end of the long table sat General Pepper, the mercenary team's primary employer. To his left was Peppy Hare, a retired pilot who remained on the team in an advisory position. To the General's right was Fox McCloud, the lead pilot of the team.
   
Falco Lombardi sat next to Peppy. He was their best pilot. Slippy Toad was sitting next to him. He was the team's mechanic, providing the majority of their weapons and technology. Next to Fox sat the vixen, Krystal. She was a telepath, and could often sense an enemy's weak point. Finally a robot called R.O.B. stood at the end of the table opposite General Pepper.
   
"Team Star Fox," said General Pepper. "I have a new mission for you. We have had reports of a strange ship attacking people. We know it is somewhere in the Lylat System, but not much else."
         
"So, what do you want us to do, General?" asked Fox.
"Not all of you will go," said the General. "Only you, Fox. You have to investigate the ship. The others will remain in contact with you using this scouter."
   
With the last sentence, General Pepper took out an eyepiece. "It's equipped with a scanner and a communicator. Now Go!"

"Good luck, Fox," said Krystal.

"More power to ya, Fox," said Falco.

"Bye, Fox!" said Slippy.

"Be careful," said Peppy.
   
With these goodbyes, Fox ran out to his Arwing and took off to find the mysterious assailant.

Chapter 7:Light Speed Fox

Fox quickly found his target near Fortuna. He went in to land and saw a man in a denim vest and yellow shirt fighting a woman and a puffball on the deck. The man seemed to be at a disadvantage against the woman's magic and he puffball's hammer.
   Before he could ponder this, lasers were fired at him. Fox veered around the skies, barely avoiding the Halberd's weapons. He fired back, but his Arwing's lasers were too weak to penetrate the ships thick hull.
   Meanwhile, on the deck, Zelda and Kirby were overwhelming Wario. Zelda fired an orb of fire at him. The orb exploded on contact, knocking Wario back. He lay prone on the ship's deck, and when Zelda and Kirby approached, thinking he was unconscious, he got up, his belly bulging again. Seeing this, Kirby pulled out his Warpstar once more and flew off the ship, just as the familiar mushroom cloud of flatulence rose on the deck.
   The gas cloud prevented Fox from seeing where he was going, and a shot from the Halberd hit his Arwing's wing. He managed to keep it in the air, unnoticed by Zelda and Kirby. Kirby had landed on the Halberd again, and Zelda warped over to where Wario was lying with a flash of swirling green light.
   She held a hand to Wario, a fireball shining in her hand, ready to blast if he got up. Before, either could do anything, an explosion rocked the Halberd, knocking Zelda to the ground. Kirby looked around, looking for the source of the explosion. Fox had fired a smart bomb while everyone was distracted. Suddenly, the Halberd began to glow, emitting a blue aura. Fox's Arwing was in a similar shining state.
   Everything speeded up. The Halberd and Arwing were going at light speed. Fox quickly deduced what had happened. The Halberd had gone into Hyper Speed and it had pulled anything within range with it. Everyone unprotected was knocked out by the sheer force that came with traveling that fast. Kirby, Zelda, and Wario were all lying prone on the ground. Fox, in his Arwing was safe, and because they were in Hyper Speed, the Halberd could not shoot him down. With that knowledge in mind, Fox relaxed, waiting for the ride to end.



Yeah, Chapter 7 makes no sense at all...