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Started by Rayquarian, December 30, 2007, 01:03:43 AM

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Mystic


britneymahboy

#2
hey there shaniqua
whats it like in campton?
Im too miles away
but girl tonight ur ass looks fine
fat and juicy
Oh yes its true

Im so original, i just came up with that out of nowhere.
NAMBLA

Java

Quote from: britneymahboy on December 30, 2007, 01:07:18 AM
hey shaniqua
whats it like in campton?
Im too miles away
but girl tonight ur ass looks fine
fat and juicy
Oh yes its true

Im so original, i just came up with that out of nowhere.
Ohhhh why'd you slap meee
Ohhhh why'd you slap mee

not famy

I was only 16 but I guess that's no excuse
My sister was 32, lovely, and loose
She don't wear no underwear
She says it only gets in her hair
And it's got a funny way of stoppin' the juice
My sister never made love to anyone else but me
She's the reason for my, uh, sexuality
She showed me where it's supposed to go
A blow job doesn't mean blow
Incest is everything it's said to be
Oh, sister
Don't put me on the street again
Oh, sister
I just want to be your friend
I was only 16 and only half a man
My sister didn't give a gosh darn
She only wanted to turn me out
She took a whip to me until I shout
"Oh, motherintercourse ersjustamotherintercourse er
Can't you understand?"
Oh, sister
Don't put me on the street again
Oh, sister
I just want to be your friend
I know what you want me to do
Put me on the street
And make me blue
Oh, sister, oohoohoooow

Syncopathic

oh tell me that you like and you wanna smack it guuurl,
i let you play with it, and maybe ride that pony!

Mystic

[Verse 1]
I'm bringing sexy back
Them other boys donno know how to act
I think your special whats behind your back
So turn around and ill pick up the slack.

Take em' to the bridge

[Bridge]
Dirty babe
You see these shackles
Baby I'm your slave
I'll let you whip me if I misbehave
It's just that no one makes me feel this way

Take em' to the chorus

[Chorus]
Come here girl
Go ahead, be gone with it
Come to the back
Go ahead, be gone with it
VIP
Go ahead, be gone with it
Drinks on me
Go ahead, be gone with it
Let me see what you're twerkin with
Go ahead, be gone with it
Look at those hips
Go ahead, be gone with it
You make me smile
Go ahead, be gone with it
Go ahead child
Go ahead, be gone with it

And get your sexy on
Go ahead, be gone with it

Get yo' sexy on
[Repeat 6 times]

Get yo' sexy on

[Verse 2]
I'm bringing sexy back
Them mother f**kers don't know how to act
Come let me make up for the things you lack
Cause your burning up I gotta get it fast

Take em' to the bridge

[Bridge]
Dirty babe
You see these shackles
Baby I'm your slave
I'll let you whip me if I misbehave
It's just that no one makes me feel this way

[Chorus]

[Verse 3]
I'm bringing sexy back
You mother f**kers watch how I attack
If that's your girl you better watch your back
Cause she'll burn it up for me and that's a fact

Take em' to the chorus

[Chorus]

Syncopathic

Quote from: Mystic Swampert on December 30, 2007, 01:13:18 AM
[Verse 1]
I'm bringing sexy back
Them other boys donno know how to act
I think your special whats behind your back
So turn around and ill pick up the slack.

Take em' to the bridge

[Bridge]
Dirty babe
You see these shackles
Baby I'm your slave
I'll let you whip me if I misbehave
It's just that no one makes me feel this way

Take em' to the chorus

[Chorus]
Come here girl
Go ahead, be gone with it
Come to the back
Go ahead, be gone with it
VIP
Go ahead, be gone with it
Drinks on me
Go ahead, be gone with it
Let me see what you're twerkin with
Go ahead, be gone with it
Look at those hips
Go ahead, be gone with it
You make me smile
Go ahead, be gone with it
Go ahead child
Go ahead, be gone with it

And get your sexy on
Go ahead, be gone with it

Get yo' sexy on
[Repeat 6 times]

Get yo' sexy on

[Verse 2]
I'm bringing sexy back
Them mother f**kers don't know how to act
Come let me make up for the things you lack
Cause your burning up I gotta get it fast

Take em' to the bridge

[Bridge]
Dirty babe
You see these shackles
Baby I'm your slave
I'll let you whip me if I misbehave
It's just that no one makes me feel this way

[Chorus]

[Verse 3]
I'm bringing sexy back
You mother f**kers watch how I attack
If that's your girl you better watch your back
Cause she'll burn it up for me and that's a fact

Take em' to the chorus

[Chorus]
lets have a sexy times

Matt

all im gonna say is that the song was interesting. :|

Mystic

Quote from: Ludwig3 on December 30, 2007, 01:14:17 AM
Quote from: Mystic Swampert on December 30, 2007, 01:13:18 AM
[Verse 1]
I'm bringing sexy back
Them other boys donno know how to act
I think your special whats behind your back
So turn around and ill pick up the slack.

Take em' to the bridge

[Bridge]
Dirty babe
You see these shackles
Baby I'm your slave
I'll let you whip me if I misbehave
It's just that no one makes me feel this way

Take em' to the chorus

[Chorus]
Come here girl
Go ahead, be gone with it
Come to the back
Go ahead, be gone with it
VIP
Go ahead, be gone with it
Drinks on me
Go ahead, be gone with it
Let me see what you're twerkin with
Go ahead, be gone with it
Look at those hips
Go ahead, be gone with it
You make me smile
Go ahead, be gone with it
Go ahead child
Go ahead, be gone with it

And get your sexy on
Go ahead, be gone with it

Get yo' sexy on
[Repeat 6 times]

Get yo' sexy on

[Verse 2]
I'm bringing sexy back
Them mother f**kers don't know how to act
Come let me make up for the things you lack
Cause your burning up I gotta get it fast

Take em' to the bridge

[Bridge]
Dirty babe
You see these shackles
Baby I'm your slave
I'll let you whip me if I misbehave
It's just that no one makes me feel this way

[Chorus]

[Verse 3]
I'm bringing sexy back
You mother f**kers watch how I attack
If that's your girl you better watch your back
Cause she'll burn it up for me and that's a fact

Take em' to the chorus

[Chorus]
lets have a sexy times
:robotwink:

Syncopathic

On top of old Smokey
All covered in blood
I shot my poor teacher
With a .44 Stud

I went to her funeral
I went to her grave
Everyone threw flowers
But I threw a grenade

The police came and got me
They took me to jail
I pulled out my bazooka
And blew them to Hell

britneymahboy

Quote from: Ludwig3 on December 30, 2007, 01:18:18 AM
On top of old Smokey
All covered in blood
I shot my poor teacher
With a .44 Stud

I went to her funeral
I went to her grave
Everyone threw flowers
But I threw a grenade

The police came and got me
They took me to jail
I pulled out my bazooka
And blew them to Hell

No.

You should just stick to my lyirics. They fit the best.
NAMBLA

Mystic

Quote from: britneymahboy on December 30, 2007, 01:27:47 AM
Quote from: Ludwig3 on December 30, 2007, 01:18:18 AM
On top of old Smokey
All covered in blood
I shot my poor teacher
With a .44 Stud

I went to her funeral
I went to her grave
Everyone threw flowers
But I threw a grenade

The police came and got me
They took me to jail
I pulled out my bazooka
And blew them to Hell

No.

You should just stick to my lyirics. They fit the best.
We can use all the lyrics. :O

major tom


Bobcheese123

It sounds like some zelda music and a part with the triplites sounds almost like Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata Movement 1.

It is creative, but you needs to have some more depth to it.