Can you guys help me with coming up with ways of showing commitment? (Homework)

Daft Pink · April 28, 2008, 05:35:05 PM

I have to write an essay on ways to show commitment at school, home, and the community. I already came up with how I'm going to lay it out (Intro paragraph, school paragraph, home paragraph, community paragraph), and I can't think of ways on how to show commitment at home and the community. Can you guys help please?

Tupin · April 28, 2008, 05:37:26 PM

Volunteering.

Stretch that out into four paragraphs.

Daft Pink · April 28, 2008, 05:38:20 PM

Quote from: Tuppyluver1 on April 28, 2008, 05:37:26 PM
Volunteering.

Stretch that out into four paragraphs.

It's actually gonna be 5 paragraphs. I don't think I made it clear. Oh, and I forgot to include that I was also putting a concluding paragraph. And thanks for the volunteering one. Wouldn't have thought of that. ;D

Matt · April 28, 2008, 05:40:29 PM

Working towards goals that will benefit home and the community, I would just type the same thing over and over about dedication just to get it over with. I did the same for To Kill A Mockingbird essay by saying it was a rough time and was full of bigotry, got a B on the essay surprisingly.

BOSSNIG · April 28, 2008, 05:53:33 PM

Quote from: `Matt` on April 28, 2008, 05:40:29 PM
Working towards goals that will benefit home and the community, I would just type the same thing over and over about dedication just to get it over with. I did the same for To Kill A Mockingbird essay by saying it was a rough time and was full of bigotry, got a B on the essay surprisingly.

I had to do a Character sketch so I did Boo Radley. Got 200/200 ^_^.

Java · April 28, 2008, 06:37:40 PM

My advice is to just BS your way through the essay.

But don't make it obvious BS, make it believable BS.

I hope that made sense. :D

Kilroy · April 28, 2008, 06:51:11 PM

Quote from: Java_Java on April 28, 2008, 06:37:40 PM
My advice is to just BS your way through the essay.

But don't make it obvious BS, make it believable BS.

I hope that made sense. :D

The perfect answer.

Lie, but make it a believable lie.

Can't spell believable with out lie >_>

Silverhawk79 · April 28, 2008, 06:56:10 PM

Make one paragraph about becoming Eagle Scout.
That's commitment out the ass, right there.

Kilroy · April 28, 2008, 07:07:22 PM

Quote from: Silverhawk79 on April 28, 2008, 06:56:10 PM
Make one paragraph about becoming Eagle Scout.
That's commitment out the ass, right there.

But he isn't an Eagle Scout.

Spam · April 28, 2008, 07:07:56 PM

Write about paying Child Support now that is commitment.

extraz · April 29, 2008, 09:01:34 AM

community service

volunteer crap

picking up dog poo

Jono2 · April 29, 2008, 02:27:45 PM

you could go buy homework.

Can you guys help me with coming up with ways of showing commitment? (Homework)

extraz