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Started by Daft Pink, May 09, 2008, 07:45:02 PM

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Daft Pink

I have to write some poems to turn in to class next Monday, but I have to finish them like right now because I'll be out of town tomorrow and Sunday. Anyways, what I have left are poems on an Ancient Civilization that we studied, a free choice, Mother's Day, and a Favorite Activity. They have to be at least 8 lines, but here's the thing. I suck at poems. It's extremely hard for me to write a good poem. You guys have any ideas on what Ancient Civilization and a free choice I could write on? For the Mother's Day one, I'll probably just copy it off some card.

Zovistograt

Man, I'd hate it if I had that problem.  I can't write enough poetry.  I can churn out 40-50 lines or more in an hour.  I love poetry <3

Our assignment is poetry as well, due the 15th...it's supposed to be 40 lines, but I already have over 70 and plan to write 30-40 more...
"I lovat a gabber.  I could listen to maure and moravar again.  Regn onder river.  Flies do your float.  Thick is the life for mere." - James Joyce (Finnegans Wake, page 213)

Daft Pink

Quote from: Zovistograt on May 09, 2008, 07:49:10 PM
Man, I'd hate it if I had that problem.  I can't write enough poetry.  I can churn out 40-50 lines or more in an hour.  I love poetry <3

Our assignment is poetry as well, due the 15th...it's supposed to be 40 lines, but I already have over 70 and plan to write 30-40 more...
I can't even write one line of poetry. I was sitting in my classroom for 20 minutes and all I got was the title.

Zovistograt

Quote from: WIIGAMER24 on May 09, 2008, 07:52:48 PM
Quote from: Zovistograt on May 09, 2008, 07:49:10 PM
Man, I'd hate it if I had that problem.  I can't write enough poetry.  I can churn out 40-50 lines or more in an hour.  I love poetry <3

Our assignment is poetry as well, due the 15th...it's supposed to be 40 lines, but I already have over 70 and plan to write 30-40 more...
I can't even write one line of poetry. I was sitting in my classroom for 20 minutes and all I got was the title.
I usually save the title for last, because when I start a poem, I usually don't know what it's going to be about.  I just start writing random crap until it starts to maybe make sense.
"I lovat a gabber.  I could listen to maure and moravar again.  Regn onder river.  Flies do your float.  Thick is the life for mere." - James Joyce (Finnegans Wake, page 213)

Daft Pink

Quote from: Zovistograt on May 09, 2008, 07:53:42 PM
Quote from: WIIGAMER24 on May 09, 2008, 07:52:48 PM
Quote from: Zovistograt on May 09, 2008, 07:49:10 PM
Man, I'd hate it if I had that problem.  I can't write enough poetry.  I can churn out 40-50 lines or more in an hour.  I love poetry <3

Our assignment is poetry as well, due the 15th...it's supposed to be 40 lines, but I already have over 70 and plan to write 30-40 more...
I can't even write one line of poetry. I was sitting in my classroom for 20 minutes and all I got was the title.
I usually save the title for last, because when I start a poem, I usually don't know what it's going to be about.  I just start writing random crap until it starts to maybe make sense.
OK, I'll try that.

Tupin

Just write what will give you a good grade if you don't like the assignment.


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Zovistograt

Quote from: Tuppyluver1 on May 09, 2008, 07:56:38 PM
Just write what will give you a good grade if you don't like the assignment.
That doesn't work with poetry.  You have to write it from the SOUL.
"I lovat a gabber.  I could listen to maure and moravar again.  Regn onder river.  Flies do your float.  Thick is the life for mere." - James Joyce (Finnegans Wake, page 213)

Daft Pink

Do you guys know if there's any kind of magical script that can tell me a word that rhymes with whatever word I write in it?

Zovistograt

Quote from: WIIGAMER24 on May 09, 2008, 07:58:16 PM
Do you guys know if there's any kind of magical script that can tell me a word that rhymes with whatever word I write in it?
http://www.rhymezone.com/
"I lovat a gabber.  I could listen to maure and moravar again.  Regn onder river.  Flies do your float.  Thick is the life for mere." - James Joyce (Finnegans Wake, page 213)

Daft Pink

Quote from: Zovistograt on May 09, 2008, 07:58:52 PM
Quote from: WIIGAMER24 on May 09, 2008, 07:58:16 PM
Do you guys know if there's any kind of magical script that can tell me a word that rhymes with whatever word I write in it?
http://www.rhymezone.com/
OH FUCK YES! Thanks!

Tupin

Quote from: Zovistograt on May 09, 2008, 07:58:52 PM
Quote from: WIIGAMER24 on May 09, 2008, 07:58:16 PM
Do you guys know if there's any kind of magical script that can tell me a word that rhymes with whatever word I write in it?
http://www.rhymezone.com/
excuse me it doesn't say anything for orange


Quote from: SkyMyl
Tuppy frightens me with his knowledge of legacy technology.

Daft Pink

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Quote from: Tuppyluver1 on May 09, 2008, 08:01:55 PM
Quote from: Zovistograt on May 09, 2008, 07:58:52 PM
Quote from: WIIGAMER24 on May 09, 2008, 07:58:16 PM
Do you guys know if there's any kind of magical script that can tell me a word that rhymes with whatever word I write in it?
http://www.rhymezone.com/
excuse me it doesn't say anything for orange
FUCK! I needed something that rhymed with orange. And silver too. :(

Oh, and do you guys have any suggestions on what I should write about for my free choice poem?

Kaz

Quote from: Zovistograt on May 09, 2008, 07:49:10 PM
Man, I'd hate it if I had that problem.  I can't write enough poetry.  I can churn out 40-50 lines or more in an hour.  I love poetry <3

Our assignment is poetry as well, due the 15th...it's supposed to be 40 lines, but I already have over 70 and plan to write 30-40 more...

You're weird.

Personally, I can't stand having a single poem of mine being over 15 lines. Even that is a bit much. Most of my recent ones have been 4-8 lines.

Quote from: WIIGAMER24 on May 09, 2008, 07:58:16 PM
Do you guys know if there's any kind of magical script that can tell me a word that rhymes with whatever word I write in it?

Why would you need to rhyme at all? If you're not good with rhymes, don't use them. I generally find rhyming in poetry to be highly pretentious anyway.
Quote<+Mithos> My mom grounded me for being gay.

Zovistograt

Quote from: Kazooie-Banjo on May 09, 2008, 08:54:24 PM
Why would you need to rhyme at all? If you're not good with rhymes, don't use them. I generally find rhyming in poetry to be highly pretentious anyway.
rhyme schemes add to the flavor in a work with a certain rhythm (not in crappy couplets), like sonnets.
"I lovat a gabber.  I could listen to maure and moravar again.  Regn onder river.  Flies do your float.  Thick is the life for mere." - James Joyce (Finnegans Wake, page 213)

Kaz

Quote from: Zovistograt on May 09, 2008, 09:04:48 PM
Quote from: Kazooie-Banjo on May 09, 2008, 08:54:24 PM
Why would you need to rhyme at all? If you're not good with rhymes, don't use them. I generally find rhyming in poetry to be highly pretentious anyway.
rhyme schemes add to the flavor in a work with a certain rhythm (not in crappy couplets), like sonnets.

Yes, that's certainly true. I however usually don't bother with creating poetry using strict meter like that, so rhyming doesn't work for most of my stuff.

I have a few exceptions though.
Quote<+Mithos> My mom grounded me for being gay.