One Island - An NSFCD Non-realistic "Lol, I need entertainment" story

[Thirdkoopa]

No, don't move this to written. Why? 1) Nobody comments there 2) This isn't serious 3)This is somewhat like those ">" Stories and needs feedback especially since it uses users. Though I won't take 77% of your feedback

What is this nonsense?  A story using NSFCD users. To lay down some ground rules
1)Yes I want feedback, but much like my previous stories similar to this, I won't be taking it all. The thing about it is I have no "True envision" asides from the beginning and ending. It's your goal to help make it happen.
2)No. I will not put every user in. Shut up.
3)This is not suppose to be taken seriously. I'm making this out of my (And the forum's) boredom.
4)How much this will relate to the actual forum is unknown.

Now then to begin;

[spoiler=Prologue]It was night. It was a dark and stormy night. The story begins on a dark stormy night with Silverhawk79. He's alone on an island. Alone? That sounds just like him! Anyways, without tangents, he's alone. Lacking a girlfriend. How did he get to this island he questioned? And he thought to himself "Why the hell am I in this poopty story and why is it being made"? but so he went on on a beach. A rock was thrown at him. He decides to look to the back, straight in the direction the rock was thrown. He sees a pile of coconut trees. He starts to think "No, this story won't upgrade in quality, stop writing it now. You'll be doing us all a favor." but then he quickly gets excited as he see's something purple. A purple box.

And he finds a sign saying...

[spoiler]"Intermission - The others are needed to continue on" Also tell TK he sucks at writing. Tell him how horrible this 5 minute waste of your life of a prologue was.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[SkyMyl]

[Thirdkoopa]

Ooh, give more image reactions!

[The Riddler]

Breaking the fourth wall is always fun. :3

[SkyMyl]

Ooh, give more image reactions!

That requires more updates.

[Thirdkoopa]

That requires more updates.

Will do.

Breaking the fourth wall is always fun. :3

See? One small suggestion can make the story more likable in the end. KEEP SUGGESTING.

[SkyMyl]

Reference the most epic story on the internet, found in Game Corner.

...which was, unfortunately, never finished.

[Thirdkoopa]

You should bump that.

And I'll probably update this today.

[Kilroy]

CONTINUE?

[SkyMyl]

You should bump that.

And I'll probably update this today.

I'm not one to bump old topics. That's why "There's a road ahead..." is still dead.

[JrDude]

So now what?