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Lucas adventures of crazyness! Is Bowyer! Or is Bowser?

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Quote from: thunderhero4 on December 07, 2007, 07:03:35 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 07, 2007, 03:49:18 PM
By the way, the next chapter will be named with a extrra title: And the little but strongly necessary misadventure of Marine the Racoon!
marines cool, i just wish i couldve heard her voice in sonic rush adventure... :|

If we're lucky, we'll get her in a console game... Then she gets her own voice actor! It happened to Blaze, didn't it?

DededeCloneChris

Chapter 19: The story of the Metarex, the evil entity and the little but strongly necessary misadventure of Marine the Racoon

Christopher: Ok, where I was, oh yes, as you all already noted, Sonic is acting weird, right?

Lucas: No, really?!

Christopher: Ok, I skip the obvious parts, it all started when-

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Christopher: And that's how he is now possesed by the radiation.

Charmy: Sorry, I didn't hear at all, I was watching the commercial.

Christopher: Too late, I am not repeating it again.

Marine: Can you mates please wait for me? I need to go to the bathroom. *Leaves the living room to go to the bathroom*

Christopher: And Tails.

Tails: Yes, what is it?

Christopher: When did Sonic acted like that? Did you remember?

Tails: Well...........

Lucas: ALERT. FLASHBACK.

Chris: Damm Straight!

Flashback

Tails: Sorry Sonic! I eated the last Chili-dog!

Sonic: *Tear in his eye* Ok...*Sniff*....I really don't wanted it still.

*2 hours later*

Amy: So, Sonic, want to have a slow walk to home?

Sonic: EVERYTHING BUT THAT!!! *Runs away*

Amy: *Sigh* Our love can't be explained...... ;)

*3 hours later*

Knuckles: I got you.......

Sonic: No......

Knuckles: I GOT YOU..........

Sonic: NO!

Knuckles: HAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Moves the horse* CHECKMATE!!!!

Sonic: DARN IT!!!!!! REMATCH!!!!!

*1 hour later*

Cream: Sorry Mr Sonic, Cheese eated the last Chili-dog.

Sonic: *Tear in his eye* Ok...*Sniff*.......of all matters I really didn't want to eat yet.

*2 hours later*

Tails: Hey Sonic! Look what I've made!

Sonic: What is it? Buddy?

Tails: *Shows a little machine with Sonic, Tails, Knuckles and Cream and Cheese dolls running around*

Sonic: Wow, I like this! By the way, where is Amy in this?

Tails: *A Amy doll appears and kisses Sonic, and the Sonic's doll enjoys it*

Tails: So, do you like it?

Sonic:.................GRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!! *Destroys the little machine*

Tails: SONIC! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!

Sonic: What am I doing? WHAT AM I DOING?! I'LL ESCAPE FROM HERE!! *Runs away, throught the wall, making a hole in it*

Tails:.............................*Depressed* Sonic................

End of flashback

Christopher:..........................................

Knuckles: Wow, Amy can get Sonic angry anytime. *Receives a hammer attack in his head and faints*

Amy: *Holding her huge hammer* ANYONE WANT TO AGREE WITH HIM?! *Everyone shakes their heads* GOOD...........

Genis: So, is there a way to stop him in that acctitude?

Christopher: Well, I'm certainly don't know anything, but I heard somebody talking with Sonic when he was like that.

Rouge: Oh no, don't you mean......

*Roof breaks and a egg appears from it*

Eggman: I AM NOT A EGG!

Chris: Oops, sorry.

Knuckles: Eggman!

*Lucas's party and Lloyd's party except Kratos, Shikamaru and Presea starts laughing hard*

Lucas: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! WHAT KIND OF STUPID NAME IS EGGMAN?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!

Eggman: HEY! DON'T BLAME MY NAME! IS MY NICKNAME!!!

Genis: SURE, I WANT YOU WITH BACON!!!

*Everyone starts laughing harder, the windows then starts to break*

Christopher: Can everyone please shut up?!

Lloyd: OK OK, I'M GOOD!!

Christopher: Fine.

Eggman: So, you all already noted the behavior of that pesky hedgehog, I presume?

Sakura: Yeah, we noted that WAY too back.

Knuckles: And why are you here, Eggman?

Eggman: I'm here because that hedgehog attacked my base-

Tails: Your 1628 base right?

Eggman:....How did you?....Aww, nevermind! That hedgehog attacked my base when I was returning from a research of searching a Chaos Emerald, and then, I saw my base all destroyed and then, that hedgehog appeared from the flames of Disaster he-

*Suddenly, a portal appeared inside the living room and a Silver hedgehog and a purple cat appears from the portal*

Silver: FLAMES OF DISASTER?! WHERE?!

Amy: Silver, that was a saying.

Blaze: Man, you are so naive.........I like that.

Eggman: Please, can I continue?

Kratos: Go on.

Eggman: Ok, that hedgehog appeared from the.......flames he caused and then he attacked me and stealed the Blue Chaos Emerald I've found!

Christopher: Oh no, this isn't happening!

Tails: I know, if Sonic manages to obtain all the Chaos Emeralds, were doomed!

Eggman: Just by luck, he is now heading in another direction.

Christopher: Good relief, I have the yellow Chaos Emerald here.

*Suddenly, Shadow enters the room all badly damaged*

Shadow: *Panting* We.........need..........to..........get out..........of here..........*Faints*

Cream: Mr Shadow! What happened to you?!

Raine: *Inspects Shadow's body* Those wounds aren't normal, the damage is extreme!

Genis: QUICK RAINE! HEAL HIM!

Raine: Ok.

Sakura: I'll help too!

Zelos: I can't let 2 pretty girls take him in your hands, I'll take the body to another room. *Takes Shadow out of the room to another room*

Sheena: Oh brother, I'll go with you 3 too. *Leaves the room*

Kratos:................Be on your guard!

Presea: Ok.

Lloyd: Got it!

Genis: Afirmative!

Colette: Ok!

Christopher: Why? I don't see any troubl-

Chuck: *Regaining the concience, looks throught the window and gasps* CHRIS, LOOK OUT!!!

*The wall behind Chris breaks enterenly and Sonic (with a black aura in both hands and stomach, also aprox. Vector height now) appears*

Charmy: When did Sonic was like Vector's height?!

Vector: Since now!

Espio: This is going to be a hard battle.

Christopher: *Looks behind him* SONIC!!!!

Lucas: EVERYONE, PREPARE TO BATTLE!!!!

Everyone else: GOT IT!!!

*Stage: Thorndyke's Mansion*

*Hazards: Sam's formula car, Tanaka appearing sometimes to attack anybody*

Chris: Will the team defeat and retrieve the Emeralds from Sonic's graps? How long will Marine be in the bathroom? Did Sakura, Raine, Zelos and Sheena noticed the ruckus? Will Brandon unplug the Gamecube? Find out in the next chapter The hedgehogs blues!

Chris: Gosh, Sonic, you're starting to look like Mephiles.

Mephiles: *Appearing from nowhere* I AM THE ONLY ONE IN THE UNIVERSE!!!!

Chris: *Pulls out a fire extinguisher and shoots to Mephiles* No blue flames in my cabin JERK! >:(

Mephiles:..................................o................k..................ugh..........

Chris: Fine.

thunderhero4




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DededeCloneChris


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DededeCloneChris

#368
Chapter 20: The hedgehogs blues!

3...........2..........1.........GO!!
Lucas: Wow, how did we go outside?

Chris: Remember the S.S Anne?

Lucas: Oh yeah, so-*Get defeated by Sonic*

Colette: Never get distrated! :P

Lloyd: COLETTE, WATCH OUT!!!

Colette: Huh? *Sonic is going to punch her but she trips YET again*

Lloyd: COLETTE!! *Takes the damage and gets out of the stage*

Colette: LLOYD!!!!

Charmy: I'll take the lead!

Chris: ( OH, THE HORROR!) :D

Charmy: Take this! *Attacks with his sting, but stupidly gets out of the stage*

Vector:  ::)

Espio: Well, it's seem is my turn! *Gets crashed because of Sam's speed vehicle* *Flying away* ESPIO IS FOR THE FIRST TIME BLASTED OFFF!!!!!!!!

Vector: Hey! Watch were you doing to them! *Charges at Sonic*

Sonic: *In the Darkspine voice* Vector........

Vector: What?

Sonic: FIND THE COMPUTER ROOM!!!

Vector: GOTCHA!! *Runs off the stage and gets killed instantly* AHHHHHH!!!!!!

Sonic: Bummer............

Knuckles: MY TURN! AHHHHHH!!!!!!!! *Charges at Sonic*

Sonic: Oh please, such a dumb will stop me?

Knuckles: WHAT?! *Starts trying to punch Sonic, but fails every time* DAMIT!

Kratos: Concentrate! That's not the way to punch! Close your eyes and concentrate in your range!

Knuckles:...................Ok! *Closes his eyes and stays calm*

Sonic: Wow, this is new, Knuckles concentratin-

Knuckles: HAAAAAA!!!!!!! *Success!*

Sonic: Ugh.........why you!!!!!!! *Uses Dark Sonic Wind*

Knuckles: *Still concentrating and dodges the attack!* Ha! Is that all you got? *Unfortunalely, Tanaka appeared and sended a flurry of kicks to Knuckles, sending him off the stage*

Tanaka: Oops, sorry Sir Knuckles, I thought it was Sonic! *Leaves*

Amy:.............I CAN'T DO IT!!! *Goes off the stage and cries*

Sonic:......................AHHHHH!!!!!!! *Being attacked by Cheese*

Cream: TAKE THAT!!!

Sonic: WHY YOU LITTLE!!!!!!!!!

Cream: WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kratos: STOP NOW!!!

Sonic: AM I GOING TO OBEY?!

Kratos: HAAAAAA!!! *Every strike of his sword hits Sonic*

Sonic
79%

Sonic: HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! *Spin dash at Kratos, unfortunalely, hitting him and blastes off the stage*

Kratos: AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

Presea: Here I go!

Sonic: *Grabs her axe with her and hits her in the floor 5 times*

Presea: Ugh!

Genis: PRESEA!!!! *Charges at Sonic, but Sonic launches Presea at Genis, defeating them both* AHHHHHH!!!!!!!

Blaze: Time of my turn! *Launches several fires at Sonic*

Sonic: Fire? Oh please! *The fire hits Sonic, but no effect!*

Blaze: WHAT?!

Sonic: Take this! *Charges at Blaze*

Silver: STOP!!!!!! UGH!!!!!! *Gets the hit instead of Blaze*

Blaze: SILVER!!!!!!

Silver: *Apparently, last words............MAYBE* Tell my fans..............I am............not..............gay......bleh*Faints*

Blaze:....................WHAT?!

Chris: WHAT?!

Brandon: WHAT?!

Jeremy (Sorry :P): WHAT?!

God: WHAT?!

God's sister: WHAT?!

In the world: WHAT?!

In the universe: WHAT?!

Blaze: OK, OK! I GET IT ALREADY!

Sonic: Where I was? Oh yes. TAKE THIS!!!!

Blaze: UGH!!!!!!!!! *Flys away*

Shikamaru: I give up *Gets defeated himself*

Sonic: WHAT?!..................Oh well........

Tails: SONIC! PLEASE STOP DOING THIS!!!!!!!

Sonic: SO? WHAT'S YOUR POINT?!

Tails: My point is..........my point is!..............Eh......*reads the script*

Chris: YOU FORGOTTED YOUR LINES?!

Tails: SORRY! I WAS SLEEPING THAT TIME!

Chris: *Slaps his head*

Tails: Oh *Takes away the script* My point is! Please stop acting like that!

Sonic:...............That's all?

Tails:.......................yes.

Sonic:....................Oh well, fine!

*Disks scratches*

Chris: WA WA WAIT!!!! THIS IS TOO EARLY TO STOP THIS STORY!!!

Sonic: So?

Chris: I mean, we're rewriwing that part!

Sonic: Buddy, I don't think you can-

*Rewinds where Tails remembered his lines*

Tails: Oh *Takes away the script* My point is! Please stop acting like that!

Sonic: NEVER!!!!

Tails: OH PLEASE???!!! I GIVE YOU HOT-DOGS!!!

Sonic: With ketchup and mustard?

Tails:..............Without the mustard, sorry.

Sonic: TAKE THIS!!! *Punches Tails in his face*

Tails:........................So...............nic...........*Faints*

Colette: *Hids behind a tree and prays to the heavens*

Sonic: Ok, WHERE ARE YOU?!

Colette: JUDGEMENT!!!!

Sonic: *The scenery blacks out and rays of light starts beaming wthe sky!* AHHHHHH!!!! UGHHHHH! AHHHHHHHH!!!!

Colette: GOT YOU!

Sonic: *Appears behind Colette* You were saying? *Damages Colette, sending her flying away*

Colette: UHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

Rouge: So, are you ready, speedy boy?

Sonic: As always!

*They starts fighting, but, unfortunalely, Rouge gets pretty bad damaged*

Rouge: Ugh..........I..........need.....to find..........the emeralds..........*Faints*

GAME![/b][/color]

Sonic: So, who is left?

Christopher: SONIC! STOP DOING THIS NOW!!! THIS IS GETTING BAD!!!!

Eggman: Hear the kid, pesky hedgehog!

Sonic: *Attacks Eggman* Get away fatso.

Eggman: *Faints*

Christopher: *Terrorized* Sonic........ple-ease...........sto-op hurting evry-ybody!

Sonic: *Aproaching to Christopher and glares* YOU.......ARE.....NOT.......TELLING..........ME......WHAT TO DO!!!!!!!!!! >:(

Chuck: CHRIS! GET AWAY FROM HERE!!!!!

Sonic: SHUT UP!!!!! *Hits Chuck lightly in his throat, causing him to faint*

Christopher: *WAY MORE terrorized and tries to not cry*...................PLEASE........DON'T HU-URT ME!!!!!

Chris: Oh god! I can't write the next words!

Fox: Do it, you can do it!

Chris: I CAN'T!

Ness: DO IT!

Chris: Ok.

Sonic: HAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! *Spin dashes towards Christopher, inflicting massive damage!*

Christopher: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sonic: There, NOW TELL ME WHERE IS THE NEXT EMERALD!

Marine: *Enters the room accidentaly hitting Christopher with the door hiding him behind*
Sonic! I'm so glad you are here mate! Oh god, I was worry because of not seeing you again! Why I heard screams here mate? Oh well, that's not important at all! Please, you gotta tell me what'cha being doing this whole time! Oh, mate, I'm dying of the suspence and-

********Sonic POV********

Marine: *Insert quick high pitched voice here* Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah *Continues*

Sonic: *Covering his ears* AHHHHHH!!! I CAN'T DEAL WITH HER!!!!!! HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHE WON'T STOP!!!!!!!! *Runs away*

************Chris POV**********

Marine: What is wrong with him? *Closes the door and looks Christopher badly damaged behind the door* Chris? CHRIS!!!!!!!!

Sheena: *Enters the room* What was that yelling?..........*Looks to everyone badly damaged* *Gasps*

Raine: What is happening here? *Gasps*

Sakura: What is happened here? *Gasps*

Zelos: Hey ladies! Don't leave me alone!.................Oh my go-

Shadow: *Enters the room but with little energy* What.........happened? *Looks to everybody badly damaged* OH NO!

Chris: Will the team be safe for the next chapter? Nobody will know...............until tomorrow............oh. Find out in Caduceus is back...........

Ness: Are you crying?

Chris: No *Sniffs* Is must be something in my eye.........*Cries*

Ness:................ :(

DededeCloneChris


Joeofmars

Man... I really would like to read this, but you wrote it in script and I just can't do it...

DededeCloneChris

Quote from: Joeofmars on December 09, 2007, 03:05:41 PM
Man... I really would like to read this, but you wrote it in script and I just can't do it...
What?

Joeofmars

Quote from: wiiboychris on December 09, 2007, 03:08:07 PM
Quote from: Joeofmars on December 09, 2007, 03:05:41 PM
Man... I really would like to read this, but you wrote it in script and I just can't do it...
What?

I hate script. You don't put characters words in quotes and you don't describe the action. I don't blame you though, English is your second language.

DededeCloneChris

Quote from: Joeofmars on December 09, 2007, 03:10:11 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 09, 2007, 03:08:07 PM
Quote from: Joeofmars on December 09, 2007, 03:05:41 PM
Man... I really would like to read this, but you wrote it in script and I just can't do it...
What?

I hate script. You don't put characters words in quotes and you don't describe the action. I don't blame you though, English is your second language.
.............I described the action, didn't I?

Joeofmars

Quote from: wiiboychris on December 09, 2007, 03:31:07 PM
Quote from: Joeofmars on December 09, 2007, 03:10:11 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 09, 2007, 03:08:07 PM
Quote from: Joeofmars on December 09, 2007, 03:05:41 PM
Man... I really would like to read this, but you wrote it in script and I just can't do it...
What?

I hate script. You don't put characters words in quotes and you don't describe the action. I don't blame you though, English is your second language.
.............I described the action, didn't I?

No. You put it in asterisks.  You put

'*Lucas walked in room*
Lucas: Hi Sonic!'
*Sonic jumps from hearing Lucas' voice*
Sonic: Don't scare me!

instead of

'Lucas turned the handle of the brown door, opening it slowly. He peered around while slowly stepping in. He noticed a friendly face on the other side of the dank, small area.

"Hi Sonic!" Lucas yelled after he realized everything was safe. Sonic jumped 2 feet in the air from the scare of Lucas' startling voice.

"Don't scare me!" Sonic screamed back, holding his chest and panting.'

Something like that. Of course, other people are enjoying it, so don't let me get you down.