Hi, I am Triforce_Luigi. I've decided to make my own SSBB fanfic. Comment if you like, but please, be constructive and do not flame. I'm not going to bother with the hackneyed prologue, so if you want to see a prologue, just look at the "This World..." update at www.smashbros.com.
I'm just gonna skip ahead to Chapter One:
Chapter 1:Plumber and Puffball Duke It Out!
The crowds. The excitement. Cheering all around as the two combatants battled below. One, a plumber with a red cap and overalls, was shooting fireballs. The other, a pink puffball, desperately dodged the fiery projectiles. It was a close fight and both fighters were tired. In the crowd, two women watched as the two dashed at each other.
The two females had only recently met each other as the match started, but they were well on their way to becoming good friends. These were the princesses of the Mushroom Kingdom and of Hyrule, Peach and Zelda. Peach was in a pink dress, a parasol in her hand. Zelda had a dress with subdued purple hues, her tawny brown hair flowing in the gentle breeze.
Below them, the dueling pair rushed at each other, ready to fight. The plumber was Mario, the hero of the Mushroom Kingdom, and Peach's savior many times over. His adversary, the puffball, was Kirby, as Warpstar Knight from Dreamland. Mario tried to deliver a punch to his foe. Kirby managed to sidestep the attack and drew a hammer. He swung, delivering a powerful blow to Mario's side.
Mario cringed in pain. Kirby took his chance and opened his mouth wide. Mario felt himself being pulled closer to the puffball as if he were a vacuum. Suddenly, he was in Kirby's mouth. But instead of being digested, as he had expected, he was released, covered in saliva. He looked up. Kirby stood their, a cap similar to Mario's on his head. It was an exact replica, even the "M" that was on it was exactly like Mario's.
Kirby raised his appendage. A fireball flew out. Mario reacted by sending his own fireball at Kirby's. The two blazing orbs met in the air and, being equally matched, fizzled out of existence with a puff of smoke. Mario could smell the terrible odor of smoke and wrinkled his nose in disgust. Kirby rushed again. As he neared Mario, He drew a sword and leapt high into the air, the sword held out in front of him. He plummeted down to the plumber, trying to hit him with the outstretched blade.
Mario rolled away from the puff just in time to avoid the remorseless piece of metal in his hands. But to his surprise, when Kirby landed, a shockwave flew out of the blade toward Mario. The plumber was knocked into the air. He landed with a sharp thud, barely conscious. In the crowd, Peach gasped as her hero stood once more, willing the puffball to attack again.
Once more the two rushed at each other. But this time, just before they met, Mario leapt into the air. Kirby continued under him, not realizing his folly until Mario landed behind him. He whirled around and was met with a flaming blast. Kirby flew back, landing on the ground. Mario walked over to him. Where Kirby had been lying, was a trophy, depicting the puffball waving on a bronze pedestal.
Mario's heart was filled with oppression. For too long people like Kirby or himself had been tormented, pitted against each other, unwillingly, for the entertainment of some unknown entity. He picked up the trophy and raised it high above his head. A flash of light. Kirby stood before the courageous plumber, a curious look on his eyes. Why had he been spared? Shouldn't Mario have been bowing to the crowd, like so many other fighters before him?
Mario held out his hand to the puffball to shake, a smile beneath his rich, lustrous moustache. Kirby's face filled with joy as he took the hand and shook vigorously. Kirby was a naïve creature, always happy to make a friend. The crowd cheered above them, Peach and Zelda especially joyful.
But the celebration could not last. Above them, the sky grew blood red. A dark ship appeared. It had smooth, metallic sides and bat-like wings at the sides, helping to keep it in the air. Thrusters at the back sped the craft along. It halted right above Mario and Kirby. A hatch opened at the bottom, and purple spores of darkness rained down. Upon reaching the ground, the spores took on the shape of strange robotic creatures.
Peach and Zelda gasped. They didn't know what these entities were, but they did know that they weren't friendly. Zelda leapt into the air and with a grunt and a flash of swirling green light, she teleported to the heroes' side. Peach floated down gently with her parasol. The quartet: plumber, puffball, and princesses, were ready to combat these dark forces.
Okay, so how did you like it? As I said before, you may comment, but please be constructive and do not flame.
Why is everyone doing a fan-fic?!?!? Why don't you people let Triforce man be original? JK looks very good.
Quote from: Ridley on November 10, 2007, 08:47:41 PM
Why is everyone doing a fan-fic?!?!? Why don't you people let Triforce man be original? JK looks very good.
I got bored...
Thanks!
You all try at my good posts... :P
, if this isn't the same as mine I won't hold a grudge.... :P
Anyways, good job!
Quote from: Triforceman22 on November 10, 2007, 09:51:00 PM
You all try at my good posts... :P
, if this isn't the same as mine I won't hold a grudge.... :P
Anyways, good job!
Thanks. Don't worry. I've planned it out, and it's all different from yours.
I should revive my fan fic corner to make people happy! ;)
Quote from: wiiboychris on November 10, 2007, 10:24:35 PM
I should revive my fan fic corner to make people happy! ;)
Yeah you should. You and Triforceman and thunderhero helped inspire this...
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on November 10, 2007, 10:27:37 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on November 10, 2007, 10:24:35 PM
I should revive my fan fic corner to make people happy! ;)
Yeah you should. You and Triforceman and thunderhero helped inspire this...
Ohh, I feel inspired. :P :)
Looks good. :)
Quote from: Java_Java on November 10, 2007, 10:37:51 PM
Looks good. :)
Thanks.
Here's Chapter 2:
Chapter 2: Primids and Piranha Plants
The creatures charged at the heroes. Kirby drew his hammer, whacking any enemy that came within range. Suddenly, one of the creatures was sent flying over his head. He turned around to find the one who had hurled the creature and was surprised to find it was Zelda. He watched her for a moment as she levitated a creature into the air with telekinesis and hurled it away. She turned around to face him, giving a small wink before she sent a blast of light at a group of the enemies. Upon impact, the blast exploded, destroying several of them. They vanished in puffs of purple smoke.
Mario and Peach were at the center of a crowd of the evil things. Peach continuously bopped them over the head, one by one, with her pink parasol. Mario, behind her, was destroying a good number of enemy forces with a barrage of fireballs and punches. They were outnumbered, however. Peach opened her parasol, Mario grasping her hand. They floated up, out of the enemy hordes.
Zelda and Kirby were holding their own on the other side of the stadium. But the beings pushed them back. They were cornered against the wall. Desperate, Kirby pulled out a small star. He raised it into the air, and it began rotating. It grew large enough for Kirby to ride and, taking Zelda's hand, he leapt on. This was his Warpstar, and he used it to travel faster. With it, the two flew into the air, meeting Mario and Peach.
Peach grabbed Kirby's free hand and Mario clasped hers, and they flew off. But right when it seemed they would make it, a cannonball shot at them. The projectile missed, but to evade it, Kirby had to make a sharp turn. At the turn, Peach and Zelda fell back to the ground. As they fell, a silver orb came down from a portal that appeared in the sky.
Peach drew her parasol once more, and opened it in the air. Her descent slowed, but Zelda continued falling, shrieked. Peach closed her eyes, terrified of the fate that surely awaited her fellow princess now. Zelda shrieked again and Peach opened her eyes. She was nearly at the ground, so she closed her parasol, falling the rest of the way, landing lightly. Kirby and Mario descended on the Warpstar, touching down beside her.
They looked up to find Zelda. She was in the leafy clutches of a dinosaur-like creature, with a red body. Its head was ringed by goldenrod petals and dotted by white spots. Peach and Mario had encountered this particular monstrosity before, so they recognized it right away. They were facing Petey Piranha.
But all the while, they had forgotten the silver sphere. But not now. A creature with green and red robes around its spherical body floated down above the orb, positioned behind the heroes. They all whirled around to face him. The ancient entity nodded, the only thing on its body that showed through the robes were its two glistening eyes, for it had no hands. Two robots appeared at the sides of the orb. Both had stick-like appendages at their sides, presumably arms. They attached these appendages to the sides of the sphere and pulled.
The two hemispheres came apart to reveal a light blue section between them. At the middle of the blue section was a black rectangle. Red numbers appeared on it. A timer. Then they all realized what it was. A bomb. Behind them, Petey Piranha roared, a terrible sound, this time accompanied by the sound of clanging metal. Kirby and Mario turned to see two cages in its hands, the princesses trapped inside.
Now, faced with the dilemma of stopping the bomb and simultaneously saving Peach and Zelda, the heroes would have to split up. Mario rushed forward to take out the bomb, but as he reached it, a dust cloud stirred up behind Petey, and a third cannonball flew out. Mario was knocked far away out of the stadium by the attack, and Kirby helpless, would have to deal with Petey alone. And he would have to hurry to defeat him before the bomb went off.
Chapter 3: Kirby's Cage Match
Kirby stared at Petey, mouth agape. Petey raised a cage, the one holding Peach captive, and slammed it into Kirby. He was sent flying across the battlefield. Kirby drew his hammer, noticing Zelda's cage, hanging limp in the beast's hands, as Petey was using mainly Peach's cage to attack. Kirby sent a hammer blow to the cage. Zelda screamed as her cage rocked wildly.
Petey swung her high into the air, and brought the cage crashing down on Kirby. Zelda closed her eyes, afraid for the Warpstar Knight and for hers and Peach's lives. Petey roared in pain, shaking Zelda from her thoughts. Suddenly, she had an idea. She connected to the minds of Peach and Kirby, conveying to them her plan.
Both nodded, and began following the plan. Kirby drew his sword, and slashed at Petey's head. It didn't cut, for Petey's head was hard, but it still irked and hurt him. He screamed again, dropping the cages to cradle his head with his leafy hands. Forgotten by the monster, Peach and Zelda attacked the bars on their respective cages, Peach with her parasol, and Zelda with magic.
While they struggled to loose their bonds, Kirby continued to attack Petey. Distracted, he swung his leafy fronds wildly, trying to hit the puny puffball. Finally, Petey opened his mouth wide and spit a giant ball of brown glop at his pink foe. Kirby dodged, but the ground was made slippery by the glop covering it. Petey charged at Kirby, but he slipped in the goop, falling on his back with a thud. The shockwave from the fall knocked Zelda's cage on its side, while Peach's rocked and swayed, still standing.
Kirby rushed to the nearer cage, Peach's, and started working with his hammer to break it. Just as Kirby freed Peach, they heard a scream from behind them. Petey was unconscious on the floor, but Zelda, still trapped, was in the clutches of a new enemy. Zelda's cage was in the hands of a fat man wearing a denim vest with a yellow shirt underneath. He also had a helmet with a pair of goggles on his head.
Kirby rushed forward, Peach following, close behind, to attack this man. Peach knew who he was. Wario, the microgame master had the Princess of Hyrule in his clutches.
Cool, a rivalry between fanfics, I think I like the story in the other one better, but this one was written better. Don't ask me which is better, I like them both equally.
Quote from: Marth Xero on November 11, 2007, 03:46:26 PM
Cool, a rivalry between fanfics, I think I like the story in the other one better, but this one was written better. Don't ask me which is better, I like them both equally.
Thanks.Triforceman22's is way better than mine. But the story here will (hopefully) get better.
I just realized I over-used the word "better". ::)
Quote from: Marth Xero on November 11, 2007, 03:56:01 PM
I just realized I over-used the word "better". ::)
Yeah you did. Learn BETTER adverbs!!!
Chapter 4:The Microgame Master Strikes Again!
Wario put down Zelda and charged at his two foes. He knocked Kirby away with an arm thrust and dodged out of the way of Peach's parasol attack. Unfortunately for him, Peach's assault continued on and hit the cage, knocking it down, Zelda screaming.
Kirby kicked Wario in the gut while he was distracted by the falling cage. The air was knocked out of him as he flew back, slamming into Zelda's upturned cage. The cage finally broke, freeing the captive princess. She got up, dusted herself off, and spun around, sending a blue aura around her. The aura swirled around her, taking the shape of a rotating crystal, with four sharp edges sticking out to slash at her foe.
The spell hurt Wario, causing him to cry out in pain. Suddenly, his belly bulged out. Peach gasped, knowing what was to come. Then, with a colossal mushroom cloud, Wario unleashed his garlic-powered flatulence, stunning the heroes. While they were stunned by the gas, Wario retrieved his motorcycle and revved the engine. A cannon appeared, replacing the headlight. This had been the source of the previous cannonballs, but now, it shone with light. He pulled a trigger on the handlebar and a beam shot out, headed for Zelda. More beams were fired at Peach and Kirby. Kirby was the only one to dodge, being without a nose, and so unaffected by the gas.
As the Princesses were hit, they reverted to their trophy forms. Kirby dashed to retrieve the nearer trophy, this time Zelda. He picked the trophy up and made to get Peach as well, but the bomb, forgotten behind them, went off. Wario quickly got Peach's trophy and rode out of the stadium on his motorcycle. Kirby got out his Warpstar and flew away with Zelda's trophy. He would change her back when they landed; there was no time for that now.
Suddenly, Kirby saw the ship that had attacked them before. He recognized it as his rival Meta Knight's vessel, the Halberd. But he knew that Meta Knight would never do something like this or side with a buffoon like Wario, so he landed on top of the ship to investigate. Upon landing, he put Zelda back to normal, and together, they began to investigate, starting on the deck they were on.
Nice fanfic I didn't read the other one but this one is awesome.
Quote from: 20fan on November 11, 2007, 04:56:09 PM
Nice fanfic I didn't read the other one but this one is awesome.
Thanks and you should read Triforceman22's sometime. It's alot better.
Chapter 5: Wario Meets the Minister
Wario, meanwhile, was riding to the Halberd in his motorcycle. As he neared the ship, an escape pod shot down to him. He quickly dismounted his motorcycle and put it away before boarding the pod, Peach trophy in hand. The pod took him up to the ship, where he was greeted by a Primid. He presented the trophy, at which point the Primid took him down a hall to an ornately-decorated door.
The door opened to what appeared to be a throne room. A large golden chair was at the end of the long chamber, a purple carpet leading up to it. In the chair, the robed being from the stadium sat. Wario set down the Peach trophy at its feet. The being floated over to it, examining it, as if doubtful its authenticity. After a moment of staring intently at the trophy, it nodded its head, apparently satisfied.
Very good,rang a voice inside Wario's head.
You've done well, Wario.Wario looked up, shocked at this mental communication. He opened his mouth to say something, but was interrupted before he could begin.
Do not speak. Think, and I shall hear, came the voice inside his head.
The being nodded again, as if confirming that it was the one communicating.What are you?Thought Wario insolently in his head.
I am the Ancient Minister, responded the being.
I have a mission for you. If you do this right, you will get all the money you want.
What!?! You were said you would pay me when I brought you Peach! Cried Wario mentally.
So I did, remarked the Minister. Two bags of coins materialized before Wario. There. Now you will get more when you complete my mission. Find the other Princess and the Puffball. They may be essential to my plot.
Eager for more money, Wario immediately went to the deck of the ship to depart. But before he could leave, he spotted Kirby and Zelda. He immediately made his way to them, ready to capture them for the Minister.
There. So how was it? Please respond.
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on November 11, 2007, 04:57:44 PM
Quote from: 20fan on November 11, 2007, 04:56:09 PM
Nice fanfic I didn't read the other one but this one is awesome.
Thanks and you should read Triforceman22's sometime. It's alot better.
Thanks dude. :)
Your is really sweet! :)
Quote from: Triforceman22 on November 11, 2007, 06:26:05 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on November 11, 2007, 04:57:44 PM
Quote from: 20fan on November 11, 2007, 04:56:09 PM
Nice fanfic I didn't read the other one but this one is awesome.
Thanks and you should read Triforceman22's sometime. It's alot better.
Thanks dude. :)
Your is really sweet! :)
You're welcome.
And Thanks!
Have to keep this on the first page
Why does it need to stay on the first page? It is not that good.
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on November 13, 2007, 04:38:50 PM
Why does it need to stay on the first page? It is not that good.
Cause it is pretty good
Really? I didn't think so.
i like the fact that yours is a bit slower paced and the different story from triforceman makes it interesting.
Thanks. Unfortunately, I don't know when I will be able to get the next chapter up, so don't hold your breath.
*big exhale* oh, ok
Chapter 6:A New Mission
It was a peaceful day in the Lylat System. The Great Fox hovered above Corneria City, waiting for its passengers to return.
Within the city, Team Star Fox was consulting the General Pepper about their new mission. The group was huddled around a large table. At the end of the long table sat General Pepper, the mercenary team's primary employer. To his left was Peppy Hare, a retired pilot who remained on the team in an advisory position. To the General's right was Fox McCloud, the lead pilot of the team.
Falco Lombardi sat next to Peppy. He was their best pilot. Slippy Toad was sitting next to him. He was the team's mechanic, providing the majority of their weapons and technology. Next to Fox sat the vixen, Krystal. She was a telepath, and could often sense an enemy's weak point. Finally a robot called R.O.B. stood at the end of the table opposite General Pepper.
"Team Star Fox," said General Pepper. "I have a new mission for you. We have had reports of a strange ship attacking people. We know it is somewhere in the Lylat System, but not much else."
"So, what do you want us to do, General?" asked Fox.
"Not all of you will go," said the General. "Only you, Fox. You have to investigate the ship. The others will remain in contact with you using this scouter."
With the last sentence, General Pepper took out an eyepiece. "It's equipped with a scanner and a communicator. Now Go!"
"Good luck, Fox," said Krystal.
"More power to ya, Fox," said Falco.
"Bye, Fox!" said Slippy.
"Be careful," said Peppy.
With these goodbyes, Fox ran out to his Arwing and took off to find the mysterious assailant.
Chapter 7:Light Speed Fox
Fox quickly found his target near Fortuna. He went in to land and saw a man in a denim vest and yellow shirt fighting a woman and a puffball on the deck. The man seemed to be at a disadvantage against the woman's magic and he puffball's hammer.
Before he could ponder this, lasers were fired at him. Fox veered around the skies, barely avoiding the Halberd's weapons. He fired back, but his Arwing's lasers were too weak to penetrate the ships thick hull.
Meanwhile, on the deck, Zelda and Kirby were overwhelming Wario. Zelda fired an orb of fire at him. The orb exploded on contact, knocking Wario back. He lay prone on the ship's deck, and when Zelda and Kirby approached, thinking he was unconscious, he got up, his belly bulging again. Seeing this, Kirby pulled out his Warpstar once more and flew off the ship, just as the familiar mushroom cloud of flatulence rose on the deck.
The gas cloud prevented Fox from seeing where he was going, and a shot from the Halberd hit his Arwing's wing. He managed to keep it in the air, unnoticed by Zelda and Kirby. Kirby had landed on the Halberd again, and Zelda warped over to where Wario was lying with a flash of swirling green light.
She held a hand to Wario, a fireball shining in her hand, ready to blast if he got up. Before, either could do anything, an explosion rocked the Halberd, knocking Zelda to the ground. Kirby looked around, looking for the source of the explosion. Fox had fired a smart bomb while everyone was distracted. Suddenly, the Halberd began to glow, emitting a blue aura. Fox's Arwing was in a similar shining state.
Everything speeded up. The Halberd and Arwing were going at light speed. Fox quickly deduced what had happened. The Halberd had gone into Hyper Speed and it had pulled anything within range with it. Everyone unprotected was knocked out by the sheer force that came with traveling that fast. Kirby, Zelda, and Wario were all lying prone on the ground. Fox, in his Arwing was safe, and because they were in Hyper Speed, the Halberd could not shoot him down. With that knowledge in mind, Fox relaxed, waiting for the ride to end.
Yeah, Chapter 7 makes no sense at all...
I still think it's good
Chapter 8: Help from the Stars
The Minister floated out of his gilded chair. He picked up the Peach trophy telekinetically. With it, he floated out of the room and down the hall. He teleported into a small black room with a round table in the center. He set the trophy down on the table and with a flash, turned it back into Princess Peach. Peach shrieked in fear as the Minister prepared a spell, cackling maniacally. A beam of light fired from the Minister at the screaming princess.
Just before the blast could hit her, a shimmering force field appeared around her, protecting her. The blast exploded, but Peach was unharmed in the bubble-like force field. Above her, a blinding light shined. A woman materialized in the light. She resembled Peach, with similar hair, but a white dress. In her hand was a wand, and at the tip was a star. A crown topped her head.
"Rosalina?!?" cried Peach hopefully.
The woman nodded. Princess Rosalina raised a hand, sending a blast of light at the erstwhile Minister, stunning him.
"Peach, come!" she cried.
Peach leapt up at her call. Rosalina and Peach rose into the air until, finally, they flew at great speed. Rosalina was using her powers of space travel to speed them up.
Seeing the unconscious bodies, Peach and Rosalina landed and ran to them. Rosalina cast a healing light on Zelda and Kirby. As they arose, Rosalina floated up to Fox's Arwing. She sent a light inside, which transformed into a piece of parchment. Fox saw the note and read it. His eyes widened as an explosion rocked the Halberd. Surprised by the sudden blast, Fox looked down to it.
A cannonball had hit the deck, apparently aimed for the heroes on the ship. Rosalina warped to their side and levitated Zelda and Peach, giving them temporary flight power. Kirby took out his Warpstar and followed after them. As they flew away, they noticed a familiar monster flying up to meet them on his leafy appendages. It was Petey Piranha. A flying pirate ship floated below him, firing cannonballs.
Chapter 9: Pit's Descent and Samus's Ascencion
Watching all the proceedings through a crystal orb was an angel by the name of Pit. He was standing in a dark room with dark turquoise walls and floor. He watched in horror as the stadium exploded into Subspace and as the Halberd traveled on its destructive rampage.
Suddenly, a woman appeared behind him. He whirled around to look at her. She had flowing green hair and a white dress. She wore fine golden jewelry as well. Pit kneeled before her, for she was the goddess of light Palutena. She raised her arm, sending a small ball of light, which materialized into a bow. The bow floated to Pit, who caught it. As his hands grasped the metal, two shining rings appeared around his wrist.
"Go," said Palutena.
Pit nodded, and ran up a flight of dark stairs. At the top, an opening appeared, letting in blinding light. Pit leapt off the ledge, wings outspread. He flew down to earth at high speed. As he neared the ship, a stray cannonball came knocked out of the sky. He fell to the ground, unconscious.
Meanwhile, on a distant planet, a being that appeared to be a robot was approaching the Galactic Federation Headquarters. However, looks can be deceiving. In actuality, under the orange suit and red helmet with green visor, was a woman in a blue jumpsuit.
"Welcome, Samus," said a guard a the entrance.
Samus nodded and continued walking. She went down a hall to the left and through the door at the end. Inside was a group of Federation higher-ups seated around a circular table. These were the Board of Directors of the Galactic Federation.
"Hello Samus," said one of the men at the table. "We have a mission for you."
"We have detected strange events happening at Coordinates 3L-9R. All of it seems to be linked to this ship," said another, showing her a picture of the Halberd."
Samus examined the picture and saved a copy in her suit's memory system. She nodded before running out of the room to her dome-like ship. She blasted off to the coordinates she had been given.
These were short chapters so I bunched them together. How did you like?
It's good! But if you add more thing from SMG..................I kill you.
Then I am as good as dead, because I am putting the Comet Observatory and one other thing which I cannot reveal.
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on November 18, 2007, 09:02:00 PM
Then I am as good as dead, because I am putting the Comet Observatory and one other thing which I cannot reveal.
Don't do that or Sakura will haunt you in your dreams!
Chapter 10: Sonic, Samus, Fox, and the Halberd(s)
Samus suddenly realized that she was being followed. She noticed that her pursuer's ship resembled the ship she was tracking down. She whirled her gunship around to face it. She flew towards it, but was forced to swerve away.
She managed to avoid the attack and fired missiles at her attacker. With that, she turned away and flew off, the mysterious ship following. Soon, she noticed another ship below her. It was an exact copy of the one above her.
She looked down on it, puzzled. She flew down to its altitude and noticed another, smaller ship near it. Before she could ponder this further, the ship above fired down at her. She got out of the way, causing the blasts to hit the replica beneath her.
More stray shots nearly hit the smaller ship, Fox's Arwing. Fox swerved his ship around to face his attacker. He fired a smart bomb, which exploded between Samus's ship and the other Halberd.
Samus retaliated with a missile, while the Halberd nearer her fired from before unnoticed machinegun turrets manned by short imp-like creatures in armor. They were of many shapes and sizes, but none were any larger than Fox. Each seemed to wield a weapon of some sort.
Fox managed to dodge the missiles. The Halberd's shots were apparently not aimed at Fox, for they were way off, hitting the lower Halberd. Fox swerved around and flew at Samus, who fired more missiles. Fox dodged out of the way, firing his lasers. The missiles exploded on the ground.
Meanwhile, on the ground, what appeared to be a blue blur sped across the desert landscape below the dogfighters. Suddenly, missiles exploded in front of it, causing it to fall back to the ground. It was in fact a blue hedgehog traveling at light speeds. He was anthropomorphic, with white gloves and red sneakers. He was startled by the sudden explosions, thinking them to be his nemesis, Dr. Eggman. He looked up for the source and found the four ships. He raised his hand up to his ear, where his friend Tails had placed an earpiece in case of emergency.
"Tails, what's going on up there?" he asked.
"I don't know, Sonic." replied the young fox over the communicator. "It looks like some kind of battle."
Suddenly, a female voice broke in.
"Sonic!" cried the voice. "Come back!!!"
"Amy!" cried the hedgehog. "Why did you let her on?!?"
"Uhh... Sonic?" replied Tails. "Have you ever been hit by that hammer?"
A loud crash was heard. Then the fox's voice came again as Sonic winced.
"I'm okay. That was the wall..."
"Uh, okay. So, can you send the Tornado? I wanna check this out."
"Yeah, sure," said Tails. "I'll be right over."
"I'm coming too!" came Amy's voice.
Tails was about to refuse, but Amy gave him a stared at him pointedly. Not wanting to suffer from her hammer, he let her come along as they took off in the airplane.
Meanwhile, in the air, the battle was raging. Fox and Samus's ships flew through the clouds, firing at each other and dodging enemy blasts. The two Halberds were engaged in combat as well. The Halberd that had followed Samus seemed to have the upper hand with the turrets blasting rapid-fire. The epic battle raged on, while Sonic waited impatiently for his friends.
Sonic has made his appearance!!!
So Did you like it?
Also, this chapter was not completely filler. Somethings in this chapter will become important later.
Sigh... I feel ignored... So, bump...
sigh... BUMP: THE SEQUEL
Bump 3: Revenge of the Bump.
Bump 4: Bump War
Good job! (I already know everyone hates Lucas!) :(
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 02, 2007, 06:40:36 PM
Good job! (I already know everyone hates Lucas!) :(
Lucas will make his appearance. (In Chapter 13.)
Man, your doing great!
Quote from: Triforceman22 on December 02, 2007, 08:07:34 PM
Man, your doing great!
Yay, someone replied!!! (that isn't Chris.)
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 02, 2007, 08:19:42 PM
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Quote from: wiiboychris on December 02, 2007, 06:40:36 PM
Good job! (I already know everyone hates Lucas!) :(
Lucas will make his appearance. (In Chapter 13.)
Hmph! >:(
I tell you the truth. And you changed to kid Gaara now!?!
You want it?
not really, but that's the third time you've changed your icon in a week!
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Quote from: wiiboychris on December 02, 2007, 06:40:36 PM
Good job! (I already know everyone hates Lucas!) :(
Lucas will make his appearance. (In Chapter 13.)
Hmph! >:(
I tell you the truth. And you changed to kid Gaara now!?!
You want it?
not really, but that's the third time you've changed your icon in a week!
And it's not over yet! ;)
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 02, 2007, 08:30:01 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 02, 2007, 08:20:27 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 02, 2007, 08:19:42 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 02, 2007, 07:48:21 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 02, 2007, 07:47:38 PM
Quote from: Triforce_Luigi on December 02, 2007, 07:14:37 PM
Quote from: wiiboychris on December 02, 2007, 06:40:36 PM
Good job! (I already know everyone hates Lucas!) :(
Lucas will make his appearance. (In Chapter 13.)
Hmph! >:(
I tell you the truth. And you changed to kid Gaara now!?!
You want it?
not really, but that's the third time you've changed your icon in a week!
And it's not over yet! ;)
Oh, great.
Hmm, Kiba.......