Pit's Journey: Most recent chapter: Chapter 15:Sonic's Twighlight Journey

[fredrickthethird]

Group names: Spoilers are for groups (or groups with new members) that have just been revealed in the Most Recent Chapter.
Smash Mansion Side 2: Andross Lanky Tiny Boo-Bot-1&2 Sonic E.-Gadd
Smash Mansion side 3: Zelda Mr.-Game-and-Watch Dimentio Link Midna
Smash Mansion Side 4:Klonoa Guntz Geno Lloyd Genis Dark-Samus Ridley Claus Classic-Mario  Little-Mac Lucario WW-Link Collette
Hands enemies:Classic-Luigi Megaman E.-Gadd
Smash staff: Master Hand Crazy Hand Lanky
[spoiler] Red is for multi group people
Smash Mansion Side 1: Pit Snake Lucas Chunky Tingle Banjo/Kazooie Boo-Bot-3 ZSS Ike Captain Falcon
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Pit's Journey Chapter 1:  Palutena's Command

Jim(narrator):A tournament is beginning and Palutena wants one of her angles to be part of it.

Palutena: Pit, as you may know there is a tournament beginning called Super Smash Bros. Brawl and I want you to be in the tournament.

Pit: Me really?

Palutena: Yes, But it is in a far away place and you will need a companion.

Pit; (;= thoughts) Oh crap I know she'll pair me up with some crazy person.

Palutena: I'm afraid you'll have to find your companion yourself.

Pit; YES!!!

Palutena: Now go find your partner.

Jim: Who will Pit's partner (or partners) be If this continues you'll find out next time.

I know it's short but chapter 2 will be longer and better.

Chapter 2: A Partner for Pit

No flaming. No negative response but constructine criticism Okay
Spam allowed

[Tupin]

It needs to be a little longer and be sure to use periods. ;D

[fredrickthethird]

It needs to be a little longer and be sure to use periods. ;D

Thanks I've never done one of these before. I was going to make the next chapter longer I just couldn't really make this chapter very long. I'll try and put more periods next time.

[Java]

-Needs to be longer.
-Spell Check.
-Grammar.
-Punctuation.

[fredrickthethird]

-Needs to be longer.
-Spell Check.
-Grammar.
-Punctuation.

I'll make the next one longer I just couldn't make this chapter very long.
I tried to spell well I some words I mess up sometimes.
I know some puncuation is missing I'll try harder next time.

[fredrickthethird]

I've got 12 views but no votes :( I was expecting at least a few votes

[fredrickthethird]

Fixed. Are you 2 happy now?

[thunderhero4]

hmmmm......great, when i start a fanfic, others do to?

[DededeCloneChris]

hmmmm......great, when i start a fanfic, others do to?

Nope, that was Ryan fan fic who started it all.

[fredrickthethird]

Chapter 2: A Partner for Pit
Jim: Pit has just jumped down into the skies, but there's horrible winds about and he crashes on top of a mountain.

Pit: (Waking up. His vision is distorted beacause of the crash) Where am I? (he sees two figures and a sign but he can't read it)

?: Wake up your fine now.

?: Woohoo

Pit: (His vision comes back and he sees that the two figures are monkeys and the sign says Banana Horde) Who are you two?

Diddy: I'm Diddy and this here is Lanky

Lanky: Woohoo

Diddy: We are preparing to head off to a tournament called Super Smash Bros. Brawl, my uncle, Donkey Kong, already got there a few days ago, but my grandpa, Cranky Kong, is trying to design some type of transportation for me and Lanky to get there.

Pit: I'm headed there two but I won't be flying for a while, maybe I can help your grandpa with the transportation and i can come with you.

Diddy: Alright this way, It's not too far.

Lanky: Woohoo

Pit; Maybe he can make a translator for this orangutan, all he ever says is woohoo.

Pit: Are we almost there?

Diddy: His house should be here what happened to him.

Lanky: (In a sad voice) Woohoo

Pit: How can you understand him?

Diddy: A translator, here I have an extra (Diddy tosses it to him and he clips it on his ear)

Lanky: Where could Cranky possibly be we can't get to the tournament without his invention.

Diddy: Maybe we can find something that can help us find him on the beach.

Lanky: (As they arrive on the beach) There! (He points to a chair with a propeller carrying Cranky's house)

Diddy: It's K. Rool!

Pit: Well come on let's go save your Grandpa

Lanky: Wait. He's landing on the Fairy Island I think he's planning on abducting the Queen.

Pit: Then let's go faster. I'll barely be able to glide over there but I'll still be fine, But you two will have to swim, you can swim right.

Both: Yes.

Diddy: (They arrive in the fairy's palace just while K. Rool was trying to take the Queen) K. Rool let go of the Queen and give us back my Grandpa!

K.Rool: Well why would I do that

Lanky: (Blows up like a balloon lands by K. Rool's ear) Woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo

K. Rool: (smacks Lanky off his helichair) Stop it

Lanky:(Running around on his hands)Woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo woohoo

K. Rool: Fine I'll leave the Queen and give you back your grandpa just shut that thing up.

Diddy: Ok Lanky, Pit, and I will be following you all the way back to the spot where my gradpa lives you will set him down and fly back to your fortress.

K. Rool: Alright now silence him (Diddy grabbed Lanky's foot and he stopped then veryone followed K. Rool back and he left place Cranky's house in the jungle then K. Rool flew away)

Cranky: Well it took you long enough. Now who is this angel boy.

Diddy and Lanky: This is Pit

Cranky: You gave him a translator right

Diddy: Yes I did.

Cranky: Good. Well I finished the machine it's in the back, I'll get it outside.
Here it is. Just blow Lanky up like a balloon, place this thing onto him, put on your jetpack and get into the thingy on Lanky and blast off. This basket here is to carry any items, or in this case people. You should head off in the morning so get some rest, now!

Jim:The 3 ,well rested, get up and gather their Items for the journey ahead of them.

Pit: Diddy you do know where this is right?

Diddy: No, but I know someone who does and we'll be headed to his house.

Pit and Lanky: Who?

Jim: Who is this friend of Diddy's who knows the location, find out next time.

Chapter 3: Who

[fredrickthethird]

feel free to comment

[DededeCloneChris]

Hmm........I don't know what to say.....

[Triforceman22]

I love starting fads. :P

Btw, it's pretty good...
Needs some corrections though.
(I need to correct some things with my fic too. :P)

[Ridley]

I love starting fads. :P

Btw, it's pretty good...
Needs some corrections though.
(I need to correct some things with my fic too. :P)

Speaking of which what tastes better Skechers or snow boots?

[Triforceman22]

I love starting fads. :P

Btw, it's pretty good...
Needs some corrections though.
(I need to correct some things with my fic too. :P)

Speaking of which, I should shut up, before Ryan punches me in the face.

:)